Wow... Thank you so much for the update...seriously the story is amazing and yes please keep writing...loved the way you keep the trio so young and fresh in the story...seriously the trio and there trip is lovely to read... I love zaki and his sense of humour... can I ask how did you think of making him so funny?
Also in this chapter I get the feeling that zaki also likes arzoo because he is always looking to please both his friends...but why do I get the impression that he wishes that arzoo looks at him the way he does at sahir?😉
Also I loved the way zaki is kind and caring..
The way you got him to take of arzoo dadi so they can go out and have fun... I love the way that he has become part of there family... besides your post being funny it also made me feel that as they all are alone the one coming thing they have us there longing to be part of a happy family... I love the way you have given that to all three through arzoo dadi.. A big round of applause for you 👏 🤗
Seriously my favourite part in the chapter was the part were sahir felt all shy when zaki keeps referring to arzoo ad his girlfriend... hopefully he will soon realise how much he loves her... I know they are only in there teens but the bike hug was cleverly added loved the way your building up that passion in saaz slowly...😳☺️
Also the painting scene was beautiful hope sahir does make drawing of her... would be so romantic... can I ask will you develop them further as artist? And before I forget how you plan to introduce asharfi to us? I love the way the cliff hangers keep on coming...
anyway besides this the painting arzoo was making was that a hint at the grey moments that are about to come in there relationship?
Sorry for the long update but I have so many questions... but seriously do keep writing as the story deserves to be told as you have in vision ed. ..
Sorry for typo errors sending from mobile...
Looking forward to update...
:) raz
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