Abhigya SS - Vulnerable - PART 7 UPDATED May1st Pg16 - Page 12

Thanks for the update Rani! Awesome work once again. Especially the last line -
Better leave them alone than get tangled into gratitude that he didn't deserve.

Im glad you posted it :)
It was fabulous Rani

Beautifully written... loved the update

Awww ! I sooo did not want this to end... I think you should carry on! Lol amazingly written - absolutely loved the intimate scene between Abhi and Pragya - it was beautiful. So
Full of emotion and passion!! Absolutely love your writing style as well! Xx

Nice update lets hope things get better for them

Originally posted by: -mina-

grasshopper watch this space

rani

rani do i have to use words

rani i don't want to use words

why can't i just nonverbally subliminally telepathically somehow convey to you my response

because you know what you did, and what you do?! you create these feelings which bypass words. and then what am i supposed to do? how am i supposed to tell you what you achieved with words when it doesn't occur in words?

raniii

flailing

now then. i know you put some effort into crafting this so maybe i should try not to be some kind of limbic reptile and also put some effort into articulating. the problem with words though is that they don't catch the...ephemeral snores of one's response. you know.

OK. i really enjoyed the scene of abhi returning to arora house. loved the three different receptions he received. lightly sketched but we get a clear sense of the three strong and distinct personalities of sarla rodaadi and bb.

all this 'his wife'ing happening in abhi's mind full out slayed me. how am i talking? i am slain. idk must be vocalizing from the underworld.

the puja, and the richness it brings within the story to the characters and to the text and readers...i feel there is a richness, i wish i could explain better. basically i feel so happy to read a scene built around that.

his fingers itching with the kumkum. UFFF.

and him fading into the background?!!! i do not approve abhi!!! i do not approve!!!

it was really good to get abhi's voice here, thank you for choosing to do the chapter (an entirely appropriate word madam) from his perspective. i am wishing to know what's up with pragya but with this story both their sides are so compelling i can't really choose who i want to hear from XD

in conclusion, thanks for the update!!

Edited by putturani - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nimmy-

res!

Res! 😉

Originally posted by: Fanaah

Res

Phir se res!

Originally posted by: Fanaah

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Originally posted by: simsim25

Thanks for the update Rani! Awesome work once again. Especially the last line - 
Better leave them alone than get tangled into gratitude that he didn't deserve.

Thank you Simi! Glad you thought the finish was strong 😃

Originally posted by: Asma-

Im glad you posted it :)
It was fabulous Rani 

Thank you Asma! 😃

Originally posted by: nilmi

Beautifully written... loved the update

Thank you Nilmi! 😊

Originally posted by: x-Ri-Ri-x

Awww ! I sooo did not want this to end... I think you should carry on! Lol amazingly written - absolutely loved the intimate scene between Abhi and Pragya - it was beautiful. So
Full of emotion and passion!! Absolutely love your writing style as well! Xx

Thank you so much RiRi! 😃 Means a lot to hear it from a writer I really like. Don't worry though, this isn't close to ending at all! Keep your eyes peeled for the next part! 

Originally posted by: rbb1

Nice update lets hope things get better for them

Thank you for this beautiful update... this is definitely one of my fav stories 👏