ArHi SS#2: One Winter. Link for Th 3 on Pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 52

amazing part...

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Edited by rith123 - 9 years ago

Loved the last update. Heart to heart between Akashi and Arnav was a superb piece. All characters are developed very nicely, the story is extremely interesting and the plot grasping.

loved this fabulous update
feel bad for arnav
as akash ignore him bcz of choti
good that akash understandhis mistake
loved arnav conversation with akash
that was heart touching and awesome

Sorry For the delay but life is sooo busy now.


Edited by opsyellow - 9 years ago

Saiyu, don't mind but bhai - bhai ka pyar, nal ka paani ki tarah hai...aur doosra vaala pyar filter ki paani ki tarah hai..teri vaje se hame filter paani ki aadat lag gayi ...chalo is baar tere liye nal ka paani pee liya, per ye ummeed hai ki agle baar filter paani milega vo bhi thoda flavor daalke 😉

On a serious note, there were a few interesting new developments in this chapter:  Devayani noticing changes in Manorama, and Manorama extending the peace treaty with the Gupta's, keeping up with her end of the bargain, and finally Akash and Arnav mending their relationship...log badal rahe hai tho soch bhi badlega, aur soch badlega tho story mein aur mazaa aayega 😃

Coming back the bhai-bhai section - At the end you had me wonder who the elder one was? For all the darn things Arnav has done and said before, he said and did all the right things and all that just by saying nothing but the truth, and the whole truth.  Loved how Arnav made Akash realize his short comings and his far sightedness in their relationship. The love baashan he gave Akash was simply superb. And the hug in the end just fixed everything between the brothers.

Khushi - chupa rusthum...a prankster to the core who really pushed Arnav to the edge. But, in a way I feel so good that I didn't get all judgmental about Arnav, else it would have broken my heart after this chapter.  He truly turned out to be a darling..Now you've put me in a dilemma as to who should I dote on - Arnav or Khushi.

Saiyyuji, loved this update a lot.

Wonderfully written long awaited conversation between brothers. I liked how they have finally broked the wall. I hope someday Arnav-Aman does the same. I know it's demand of the story but I missed Arnav-Khushi interaction in this part. Thanks for PM. Waiting for next part. 

Brilliantly written!!!!

Chapter 7B:

This chapter put things in a better perspective, both for Khushi and Manorama. Remember I was confused about Khushi's silence, and even felt that it was exaggerated, if not uncalled for? I no longer feel that. To know that her hurt stems more from Arnav's wrong behaviour towards Aman than Sheetal's towards her says a lot about the girl. Way to go, I shall say.

Amongst the lot, Manorama could be termed as the character tilting towards the negative; even so, it is difficult to put her off completely, simple because she does what she does for a reason, and a damn good one at that.

I hadn't counted on Khushi to hold her nerve, but she did, and quite confidently. Kudos to her for that.

Amidst all this, the news of the breakup does put a dampener (the argument presented by Khushi was commendable), but I know that the setback is temporary. And so I shall wait for the tide to change. 😊

Edited by Eccentrica - 9 years ago