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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Sadhanamomo
Sam
Will comment very soon

but the siggy/banner is just breathtaking I keep looking at it

thank u Sadhana di . Credits to the maker 😃

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick
Both DI thanks...for telling. Yes Sam. Your banner is seriously beautiful...but what are ShivaSati doing there??

thank u di . Shiv is saving Sati and Sati is hiding behind him . I do not actually remember in which epi it was but as far as I know Foru di had also shared that pic in the previous to previous FC . Jo tu mera hamdard hai one FC . 😃

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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Hey Sam...your story is very beautifully designed..so yeah...I commented little long...sorry for that.😛Next time ...I will try to keep it short, sweet and simple like my Prabhu😎. But problem is...in this section I am more like my Mata😉...so best of luck to me...fo rmy restraint and to you for your story.

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DhwaniNair

@DhwaniNair

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

atlast i read it... wow its nice... but used some hindi na? I couldnt undrstnd it dear :( mmm

Mouni felt something something to mohu... :) :) the most favrt part :)

update later parts and pm me pls

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick
Hey Sam...your story is very beautifully designed..so yeah...I commented little long...sorry for that.😛Next time ...I will try to keep it short, sweet and simple like my Prabhu😎. But problem is...in this section I am more like my Mata😉...so best of luck to me...fo rmy restraint and to you for your story.

no no please do not keep it short like your prabhu my Mahadev . 😆 I want u to give a long comment with lots if gali 😆

No my Mahadev help me . Mata main apki Kya sewa karu ? 😳

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: DhwaniNair
atlast i read it... wow its nice... but used some hindi na? I couldnt undrstnd it dear :( mmm

Mouni felt something something to mohu... :) :) the most favrt part :)

update later parts and pm me pls

thank u Dhwani di . And the part in Hindi was the song lyrics , I had kept the translation in the last line .hope u saw that . 😳

And will surely pm u whenever I update 😳

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Rimi Roy

@AsNoone

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Whenever you got time...do update Kanya.

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: foram.
res for the comment...
but but but I loved the banner... I just loved it...
can't take my eyes off *_*

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unres..
loved loved loved th eupdate...
sarah - Armaan are cute.. totally and madly in love...
wow!!! she felt current wen she shook hands with him...
kuch to hua hai kuch ho gaya hai😳😳😳
awww she was staring at him trying to figure out wat it is which she is feeling😳😳😳
oh no she bumped into some rowdy...
m sure our hero will save her...😳😳😳

nice song and do update soon😃

edited my comment😃

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: foram.
res for the comment...
but but but I loved the banner... I just loved it...
can't take my eyes off *_*

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unres..
loved loved loved th eupdate...
sarah - Armaan are cute.. totally and madly in love...
wow!!! she felt current wen she shook hands with him...
kuch to hua hai kuch ho gaya hai😳😳😳
awww she was staring at him trying to figure out wat it is which she is feeling😳😳😳
oh no she bumped into some rowdy...
m sure our hero will save her...😳😳😳

nice song and do update soon😃

thank u di 😳 and will update soon

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Part two

Mouni hands started shaking as she saw whom she had just hit . Her drink had just fell onto the shirt of one of the rowdy of the club and all the rowdies stared at her. She did not know whether to say sorry or just run away from there . Finally making up her mind she decided to apologise before things got worse.

"I m sorry "Mouni said in a soft voice and was about to leave the place when a the man she had spilled her drink onto stopped her .

"Where u going huh and what can I do with your sorry ? " he asked and tried to get close to her .

Mouni got back .

"I m sorry "and saying this she tried to go away but again he stopped her.

"Oh lady why r u telling sorry again and again ? What can I do with your sorry huh ? Give me a hug then this drink u spilled will be cleaned . Come on come " he said as he tried to come near and touch her .

But before he could touch her a hand stopped his hand in the middle way .

"She said sorry ,now leave her and let her go ! " a voice said . As Mouni looked up she found the same person she was staring at , stopping the rowdy .

"Hey how dare u touch him ? " another rowdy asked and was about to hit Mohit . But before anyone could realise , Mohit punched the person and he fell on the ground.

"Do u know who I m ? " asked the main one , who was stopping Mouni . "This club ! My brother is a share partner of this club "

"That's why u all rowdies are allowed to come here and annoy everyone right ? If it was in other places , u would be already kicked out. "

"What ? " the man questioned angrily .

"Do not ask me theses stupid questions just take that person to the nearby hospital before he bleeds to much ! " Mohit replied in the same tone of anger pointing towards the person lying in the ground , whom Mohit had just punched .

The rowdies showing eyes to Mohit went away carrying the person and leaving Mouni impressed.

"Thank u " Mouni said in a sweet voice .

"It's okay . " Mohit replied as he walked with her .

"By the way your punch is solid huh ! Have taken some training or is it some magic like Salman's and Ajay Devgan 's " Mouni asked and Mohit smiling replied.

"Nope , do not know magic . Actually I had learned boxing for few years so jus used the skill but I m not a pro . "

"God if u r not a pro and still hit people ho hard that it makes them fall on the floor with just one shot then if u were pro then ..."said Mouni imagining Mohit hitting a person and the person flying into the air .

"Do not imagine . I can not make people fly with a punch , that magic is only with heroes like Salman , Akshay and Ajay . "Mohit replied laughing .

"How did u know I was imagining ? "Mouni asked surprised on how Mohit come to know about that .

"By your eyes . " came the answer .

"What by my eyes ? "

"Yes u may not know but your eyes speaks for u . They show what are feeling at the moment like right now your surprised and confused , a minute ago u were impressed and excited . " Mohit gave the answer looking at Mouni which indeed surprised her and also she got attracted to him . " by the way u have lovely eyes " Mohit complimented and Mouni blushed hearing this .

A song played and Mouni smiling turned to Mohit and said ,

"Hey this is my favourite song . Come on let's dance . "

"What dance ? "

"Why does not Mr Boxer and Mr astrologer know how told dance ?! ," and saying this Mouni pulled him to the floor .

...

Bach-kaniyaan, thodi thodi aaj hogi Zara bachh ke dikha

Man-maaniyaan, phir bhi nahi chalegi

Chahe hoja tu khafa

Jaana hai toh jaa, tujhe bhi hai pata

Saari raat hogi chedd-khaniyaan

[Silly behavior, some of it is gonna happen today, try and save yourself

Willfulness...

Of yours won't work today, even if you become upset

Leave if you want to, and I'm sure you know this

Mischief is gonna happen all night]

Banda main bachelor, tu kanya kanwari

Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me

Banda main bachelor, tu kanya kanwari

Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me

Haathon mein haath ki hai baat puraani

Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me

[I'm a bachelor, you are an unmarried girl

Let's get together and get lucky

I'm a bachelor, you are an unmarried girl

Let's get together and get lucky

Holding hands is a fashion of the past

Let's get together and get lucky]

They both moved to the tune of music and tunes of heart .

Tera luck luck luck, aaj naiyyo chalna

(chalna, chalna, chalna...)

Saare zamaane mein Laakho deewaano ne

Roki raahi meri badi hi ummeed se

Dilon ki be-imaani se nahi me anjaani

Mauko pe dhoke diye maine bhi qareeb se

[Your luck won't work tonight

In the whole world, millions of lovers

Have waited for me in my lane, with a lot of hope

I'm not a stranger to false love

On many occasions, even I have cheated in close margins]

Banda main bachelor, tu kanya kanwari

Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me

Banda main bachelor, tu kanya kanwari

Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me

Haathon mein haath ki hai baat puraani

Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me

[I'm a bachelor, you are an unmarried girl

Let's get together and get lucky

I'm a bachelor, you are an unmarried girl

Let's get together and get lucky

Holding hands is a fashion of the past

Let's get together and get lucky]

As they finished a waitress came in with a glass of wine .

Mouni was about to take it when Mohit stopped her .

"Do not take it , u may not be able to handle it " he teased and went from there .

"What I will not be able to take it ? Let me show him " said Mouni to herself and drank the drink in one sip not knowing that some evils hand was behind the drink .

After the drink , Mouni felt her head heavy and thought that she was going to fall down not be able to balance herself .

---TBC---

Hope u all like it and do comment back your opinion .

Given song - Lucky tu Lucky me from the movie Humpty Sharma Ki Dulhaniya

For more lyrics

http://www.lyricsplane.com/2014/06/lucky-tu-lucky-me-lyrics-humpty-sharma.html