AKDHA FF: AASHIQUI (chapter - 3 , pg - 8 updated) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
awesome oh jodha is so cute 
update soon
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#22
Nice story
So jodha n jalal IIT students
Waiting to know their hatred story
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CHAPTER - 2
In the canteen

Jodha and Moti reached the canteen and she introduced Jodha to all her friends - Maan, Mirza, Ruqqaiya, Salima and Abdul.
"and this is Jal..."
"I know. He is Jalal. How can I even forget him?" said Jodha looking straight into his eyes.
Their eyes met and they shared a small eyelock. Jodha went into flashback before 2 years.

Flashback

"i am really sorry for what happened to Kritika di but i cannot help you this time. Adham is my brother and i wont speak against him and dont try to contact me again." the sms read.
Tears welled up in Jodha's eyes and she said," aakhir tumne dikha hi diya na apna asli rang. I trusted you Jalal why did you do this?"

Flashback ends

All the wounds became green again. Controlling her tears Jodha started walking towards the class.
"Are you okay?"
"Yup! i am okay!"

At night 

Jodha was sitting in the verandah of her room looking at the stars⭐️. It was her habit since childhood to stare at the sky whenever she was upset.⭐️ Jalal came there and sat beside her.
"looking at the stars?"
"Its none of your bussiness!" Jodha said a little angrily.😑😑😑
"Its getting cold we should go inside now."
"Listen Mr. Jalal dont try to fake your sympathy. I wont die sitting here in a little cold. When i wanted your help you turned your back  at me, now dont try to act nice Okay!😑" saying so she went inside leaving a thinking and confused Jalal alone there.
"I dont know the reason of your anger, but I promise you that I will find it out soon and our friendship will again become normal!" saying so she went inside to.


PRECAP - reavelation of the past story and jalal's reaction to it.



all the jootas, chappals, tomatoes and criticism are welcomed. Hit maximum likes if you want me to continue.

Edited by mrindani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
very nice update next time please pm me dear.
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#25
It's a dark story...looking like!!!!!!
Awesome going!!!!!Continue soon!!!!😳 πŸ˜³
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Hmm..confuse why they r together and what happened..chodo!update sn and pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
nice update ... continue soon 
whenever u update ... please do pm me
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#28
awesome chappy but a small one...next time try to update a long one...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
you are doing great
suggestions: write smaller and longer chappies... πŸ˜ƒ
loving your ff a lot..do pm me dear! πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anael24

you are doing great
suggestions: write smaller and longer chappies... πŸ˜ƒ
loving your ff a lot..do pm me dear! πŸ‘

thank you for your suggestion i will try my best to write longer chapters and will update soon.😊