Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth
Chapter 51
You made my dreams come true!!I wanted to ZaYa in this girlfriend -boyfriend relation ( After Halala track)Such a cute chapter yet you didn't fail to add Zain's pain!Loved this chapter
Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth
Chapter 52
Me?? Thank you so much :-0Aaliya ko yaad aa raha hai??It's confusing!!No,no. Not your story, but Zain's emotions.He loves His Aaliya, he is desperate to get his Aaliya back,He got Aaliya back, but he didn't get His Aaliya back!!Your beloved is in front of you, yet you can't love her in the way you want.And to get back HIS Aaliya , he was harsh with Aaliya( Rhea)Exicted for the next chapter, going to read it :-p😆
Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth
Chapter 53
20 KILOMETERS??Itna exercise karaya Zain se?? Woh bhi raat ko??I loved this Chapter, Kitkit was there, not in ZaYa style, but in Zain Rhea style..Awesome!!
Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth
Chapter 54:
It was the cutest chapter.That list was so sweet!Yeah, the line,''whatever he did was wrong ...he risked her health again and in his desperation to get Aaliya back he was hurting Rhea ... ''Mr.Abdullah realized his mistake,on top of that accepted it!!I must say, Aaliya's love has changed Zain alot.Loved it
Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth
Chapter 55:
Those three conditions...no words to tell how awesome they were.I dont know why, but after reading those last lines, the tears formed in my eyes finally dripped down.It is really crucial to make your readers cry.Desperate for the birthday bash..Padhke aati hun..😛
Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth
Chapter 56:
Ab wapis rula rae ho aap.Just cried in the previous chapter,made up my mind to read the next chapter, and here you made me cry again!!The letter was undoubtedly a heart wrenching work, but that moment, when Zain sees her in the mirror...that was too emotional..I couldnt control my tears...and that one too,not addressing her as his MOM, too emotional.I dont know how do you manage to give a side message through your work... Although its a love story, there are many more things I read in your work...Fabulous!!continue soonP.S. you need to make a thread 2 soon!!All the best
Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry
speechless!! 👏👏👏u weave magic with words sim😳 ..brilliant update...Full of pain, emotion, love, crave...zain's helplessness and his love , his letter to suri ..surya's mixed emotions of love and pain, anger everything was so beautifully written...mein itni senti nhi hu ..but it made me cry.😭.awesome work...thanx for pm...plzz continue soon...waiting,...
Originally posted by: zayalove
Ok i m sorry i am late
But it was really a shitty week urghh
But reading ur story made my day or rathet say night better
Ok coming to chptr 54
Its really amazing ..good to read rhea realizes her mistake
N zainu loves her so much that he was ready to walk more than 20 km coz he made her cry..
The sponge bath n song reminded me of beintehaa ...of zaya
Now let me run n read part 55 ...
P.s if my running comments brings smile on ur face ...than i will do it for my whole life ...
I m really proud to have u in my life as a friend ..
Love ya sim ..
Originally posted by: zayalove
Sim chapter 56 made me cry ...
Omg its so painful to read zains pov ..
Loved the chpter
Plzz continue soon ...
Cant wait
Thanks for da pm
Lots of love .
Alina
Sim sim sim ...
I love u really I doU know both the parts were so cute I loved it to the coreAnd hello the kiss aah u write better passion too Gosh it was so cute and lovely kiss u know they have come far ...the lap thing was so emotional ...and wow surriya kissed rhea the cake everything was just perfect u today I cried but of happiness my zainu is lucky to have suirriya aaliya rhea and us AlsoNow comes to the dedication ohh so sweet of you I love u ... U know I have screen shot the words u write for me :*And yes u and Ann ..I really don't think we are far I really think we sitting in a cafe talking ...Love u alwaysUpdate soon
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