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Loving this story...and this kamina shlokie
Both updates were great... 👏
Both updates were great... 👏
Wowww Sriii..Loved their verbal wrestling match😆 It was awesome the way she cut his every smart dialogue with smarter ones..😉 no girl wants to get dominated by a boy
Loved the way he kept tormenting her with his seductive advances..cant change the fact that Shlok is Shlok
I am more eager to read your next update yaar🤗😃
Originally posted by: coolhi1988
awesome update...
loved it...
shlok is mad behind astha now... but his intentions r not gud..
astha attracted towards shlok but knows his true intentions so wants to b away from him... smart rep to shlok by astha...
well written..
gud going..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
Originally posted by: akashavani
Sri ...ur 2nd update ..., was damn good...sorry late cate...was busy...so shlok acts and is a casanova...but somewhere he is hurt in the past ...and he seems to use only girls...who know the game ...is that right ...so he enjoys them ...but doesn't hurt them ...in a deep emotional way...am i right ...must see..
But now ...Astha has got his ..inner attention...so he will hurt her ...to get her in anyway...first in desire ...but definitely fall for her...only will realise ...after hurting her maybe...interesting.Loved it sri...Absolutely. ...going to read ur 3rd ..update now.
Originally posted by: akashavani
Yes sri...just as i thought...acts as a casanova...but really not hard !!!!!! I meant his heart gal...but ..not so innocent and soft ..Astha is now going to challenge shlok real ...Hard... this I definitely meant ...everyway. ...fun ...waiting to see ...the drama of who first will ...unfold...literally .
Sri loving your .., story ...and Characters too.
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