Ashlok SS:LOVE IS LOVE /Updated Ch-13/PAGE 51 -3/2/17

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I will be  coming up a SS very soon...
well its the first time i m trying my hand  in this field...
i absolutely dont know the ABC of writing it... my grammar is really bad but still keede ne mujhe kaat liya hai...
title of my Story is Love is loss of valuable energy


Hola Ashlokians,๐Ÿ˜Š

I m back with a teaser๐Ÿ˜Š...actually i dont know the difference between teaser and prologue๐Ÿ˜•,so plz cooperate aur khud hi samajhna yeh kya hai...

This is first time i m writing a SS...i know its not my forte...Plz bear my grammar too๐Ÿ˜›
If you like it do hit the like button on the like button and give your comments. I need all your encouragements Ashlokians! ๐Ÿ˜ŠCritics are also most welcome๐Ÿ˜Š

Buddy me if u like to read more๐Ÿ˜ณ

Here i also want to mention two names who encouraged and helped me Jaya{Ehsaas} who herself is a fiction writer and Deepavasudev๐Ÿ˜ณ

INDEX

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4245379?pn=2 TEASER

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4245379?pn=5 CH-1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4245379?pn=11 CH2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4245379?pn=16 CH-3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4245379?pn=23 CH-4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4245379?pn=28 CH-5

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4245379&TPN=36 CH-6

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4245379&TPN=41 CH-7

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CHAPTER - 13 /PAGE 51 - 3/2/17




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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am sure it will be nirma story
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Me too going to start an ff. ๐Ÿ˜• (No idea about rules and regulations ๐Ÿ˜†) I dunno how will i complete it. ๐Ÿ˜• Me too writing for the first time! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Sri do PM me when you start writing the ss! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Another one.   Can't wait. 
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Originally posted by: Jassi87

I am sure it will be nirma story

he he...dont know...but  there will be some moments for sure...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

Me too going to start an ff. ๐Ÿ˜• (No idea about rules and regulations ๐Ÿ˜†) I dunno how will i complete it. ๐Ÿ˜• Me too writing for the first time! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Sri do PM me when you start writing the ss! ๐Ÿ˜Š

yup read the teaser...its a dark fiction... wow...hot one๐Ÿ˜ณ
yaar ,i have never written a short story even at school,i m really nervous...
sure will do๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Another one.   Can't wait. 

fictions flooding...
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Your SS will also get famous for your write-up just like as your other (nirma) post. Advanced congratulations.
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okay ...sri & mahi... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ..waiting ๐Ÿ˜‰
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          ASHLOK SS: LOVE IS LOSS OF VALUABLE ENERGY

                                         !!! TEASER!!!



Somebody knocking my heart...my heart is sinking... Oh that gaze, I can't stand ...am I in love...no, I hate to be in such situation ...I don't know what I exactly want.

 Love can happen with anyone...no one has control over it...but this one is like falling in love with someone you can't have...yaah, it's a lull before the storm...

Falling in love is the best thing in this world ...But love has never been in my dictionary. ...for me, love always was and will remain LOSS OF VALUABLE ENERGY.

And I hate how much I love you

I can't stand how much I need you

And I hate how much I love you

But I just can't let you go

And I hate that I love you so

Lyrics by Rihanna

Edited by srilotus - 9 years ago