Ashlok SS:LOVE IS LOVE /Updated Ch-13/PAGE 51 -3/2/17

Kamal kulshreshta

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I will be coming up a SS very soon...

well its the first time i m trying my hand in this field...

i absolutely dont know the ABC of writing it... my grammar is really bad but still keede ne mujhe kaat liya hai...

title of my Story is Love is loss of valuable energy

Hola Ashlokians,😊

I m back with a teaser😊...actually i dont know the difference between teaser and prologue😕,so plz cooperate aur khud hi samajhna yeh kya hai...

This is first time i m writing a SS...i know its not my forte...Plz bear my grammar too😛

If you like it do hit the like button on the like button and give your comments. I need all your encouragements Ashlokians! 😊Critics are also most welcome😊

Buddy me if u like to read more😳

Here i also want to mention two names who encouraged and helped me Jaya{Ehsaas} who herself is a fiction writer and Deepavasudev😳

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/4245379/ashlok-ss-love-is-love-updated-ch-13-page-51-3-2-17?pn=2 TEASER

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/4245379/ashlok-ss-love-is-love-updated-ch-13-page-51-3-2-17?pn=5 CH-1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/4245379/ashlok-ss-love-is-love-updated-ch-13-page-51-3-2-17?pn=11 CH2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/4245379/ashlok-ss-love-is-love-updated-ch-13-page-51-3-2-17?pn=16 CH-3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/4245379/ashlok-ss-love-is-love-updated-ch-13-page-51-3-2-17?pn=23 CH-4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/4245379/ashlok-ss-love-is-love-updated-ch-13-page-51-3-2-17?pn=28 CH-5

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4245379&TPN=36 CH-6

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4245379&TPN=41 CH-7

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sonia871

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I am sure it will be nirma story

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Me too going to start an ff. 😕 (No idea about rules and regulations 😆) I dunno how will i complete it. 😕 Me too writing for the first time! 😉

Sri do PM me when you start writing the ss! 😊

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Bobbie

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Another one. Can't wait.

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jassi87
I am sure it will be nirma story

he he...dont know...but there will be some moments for sure...😉

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar
Me too going to start an ff. 😕 (No idea about rules and regulations 😆) I dunno how will i complete it. 😕 Me too writing for the first time! 😉
Sri do PM me when you start writing the ss! 😊

yup read the teaser...its a dark fiction... wow...hot one😳

yaar ,i have never written a short story even at school,i m really nervous...

sure will do😳

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon
Another one. Can't wait.

fictions flooding...

😳

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krithi1990

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Your SS will also get famous for your write-up just like as your other (nirma) post. Advanced congratulations.

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Ms Vijaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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okay ...sri & mahi... 👍🏼 ..waiting 😉

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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ASHLOK SS: LOVE IS LOSS OF VALUABLE ENERGY

!!! TEASER!!!

Somebody knocking my heart...my heart is sinking... Oh that gaze, I can't stand ...am I in love...no, I hate to be in such situation ...I don't know what I exactly want.

Love can happen with anyone...no one has control over it...but this one is like falling in love with someone you can't have...yaah, it's a lull before the storm...

Falling in love is the best thing in this world ...But love has never been in my dictionary. ...for me, love always was and will remain LOSS OF VALUABLE ENERGY.

And I hate how much I love you

I can't stand how much I need you

And I hate how much I love you

But I just can't let you go

And I hate that I love you so

Lyrics by Rihanna

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