Arjuna Ali Fan Fiction (Based on an South Indian Legend) Mahabharat

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This Fan Fiction is in no way trying to degrade Arjuna, the hero of the Indian Epic Mahabharata. I am just trying to use the South Indian Legend (see below) to write a story, using my own imagination. Arjuna is my favourite character, and even if this story shows an unknown side of him, it is not trying to insult him. Hope you all like my story!

Introduction

Hello everyone. I am not a very famous writer in this Forum! This is my second Fan Fiction! My name is Brishti, you all can call me Brish, or any other nickname you please! This is the first time I will be trying to write something different about my favourite character from the epic Mahabharata.

This is a story based on a legend from Jaya by Devdutt Pattanaik about Pandava Prince Arjuna and Warrior Princess Ali. Here is the link to the story -> http://www.mid-day.com/articles/the-bold-beautiful-of-indra-prastha/93875 The story is basically Arjuna being attracted to a warrior princess called Ali. He became desperate to marry her while Ali was reluctant. She rejected him. Arjuna was completely desperate so he asked help from Krishna. He changed Arjuna into a snake, and he crawled into Ali's bed at night, and forced her to marry him. Some say, that because Arjuna managed to spend the night with her, he made Ali marry him by threatening her. This is known as Paisach Vivaha, condemned by the Puranas. I will elaborate more on the legend, using my own crazy imagination. I would request the visitors of this thread to try reading even if you don't know much about the epic. Just read it as a story! Hope you enjoy!

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Prologue

Arjuna sat under a huge tree, completely lost in thoughts. He could not stop thinking of her. She was as beautiful as the stars, with perfect curves in her slender body, her waist length hair was dark and looked like clouds in a clean starry night. Her eyes were as beautiful as petals of a flower. She was dark, but her glory was as bright as the sun. She rode a white horse, and her tender fingers kept on rubbing against the golden hairs at the back of her horse. Dhananjaya had never felt so attracted towards a woman, leaving aside his wives. The moonlight was cool, shining on the path in which she came, and left. Arjuna followed her, desperate in making conversation. She did not live in an elegant palace, but in a hut. Arjuna rested under a tree near her hut, waiting for her to come out. He wanted the girl in his life. Who was she? Till now, Arjuna had won over every lady he was charmed by. This was my yet again chance to be successful, he said, confident about himself. The clear sky let the stars shine brightly. And in the heart of Sabyasachi, her smile shone like the stars. His heart beated faster and faster, as a new side in him flourishes....

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow !! So Nice ! Waiting For It ! And The Prologue Was Out Of The World As Usual !!!
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wow i just found out this while finding if any mahabharat ff is worth reading? yes i read the legend and i was quite surprised at first but can't deny its quite interesting to be a ff and i remember this siggy i feel Alia suits sha
continue soon

here is the link of the story http://devdutt.com/articles/mahabharata/2-of-5-the-other-wives.html
Edited by Patrarekha - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Patrarekha

wow i just found out this while finding if any mahabharat ff is worth reading? yes i read the legend and i was quite surprised at first but can't deny its quite interesting to be a ff and i remember this siggy i feel Alia suits sha
continue soon

here is the link of the story http://devdutt.com/articles/mahabharata/2-of-5-the-other-wives.html



Wow! You found mine worth reading I am so glad! 😊 Thanks Jhum di :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Brishti 😊

I never knew about the character of Ali & Arjun sought for her love.

The prologue is intriguing.

Continue soon 😊

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Part 1

Every passing second felt like an hour to Dhananjaya. His heart beated, and beated. "Is she not inside then?" he asked himself. "But where would she go?" he thought again. Ever since he saw her, he had been patiently waiting outside her hut. Dhananjaya finally lost his patience, and decided to peep in from the window. The window was half open, and the inside of the cottage was dark. Her horse stood outside the hut, calm and quiet. Parth stood up, and gently walked up to the hut window. The ground was cold and wet, and it was the season of retreating monsoons. He lay his rough fingers on the window pane, and slowly looked into it.
The warrior princess stood inside the dark room, the moonlight showed the curves in her body clearly. Her hair was in front, and thus, it did not cover her naked back. Her body swayed, as she bent down to pick up her clothes. But her eyes were sharp. She was a warrior after all. She had the eyes of a leader, a mind to understand an approaching enemy. Even the sound of Dhananjaya's breathe made her aware that somebody was looking at her. She did not look back. Partha watched her patiently, lost in the tenderness of her body, when she sprang back. Her body was now covered with her cloth, and she sprang towards the window at the back of her with a sword. "Come infront.." she whispered. Arjuna smirked to himself. In a fierce state, this girl looked more beautiful.
"Come here..." she whispered again. "Or are you afraid of warrior princess Ali?" was her next words, and for the first time, Arjuna saw her smiling. Never had he left such attraction even towards the most beautiful women of Aryavart, Princess Panchaali. "You have already defeated me by your looks, my lady, and I am afraid, you will do that again." Arjuna whispered, and opened the window. The moonlight flashed on Arjuna's face, making him visible in front of Ali. "Who are you?" she asked. "Why were you peeping from the window? What do you want?"
"You.." Arjuna replied, trying to catch hold of her hand, when she slipped into the darkness. He moved forward. "Who are you?" Ali asked again. Arjuna felt as though she was moving away from him, and he would not let that happen. "Don't go.. " Arjuna said, and grabbed at her in the air. He could understand her footsteps in the darkness, because of his unique skills. "Don't try to put me into trouble, Prince. Tell me who you are." Arjuna understood he had no choice but to speak.
"I am Pandava Prince, Arjuna. I am in my years of exile right now."
Ali's eyebrows moved on hearing the name. "Speak again?" she said. "I am Arjuna. The Third of the Pandavas." She had a frown in her face. "Arjuna.." she sighed. "I have heard about you from many. Including my elder brother." Ali said. "I haven't heard of you from any, and I wish to hear only from your tender lips. Come closer..." Arjuna whispered, but she slipped away again.
"I cannot let you touch me." Ali said, this time louder. She threw her sword away, and came out of the hut to her horse. She stood next to it, playing with her white hair. A lighting flashed through Arjuna's mind the moment Ali said those words. He followed her outside, and turned Ali towards him. "Why lady? I can fight the most dangerous wars, and pass the bravest tasks for you. I will do whatever you say."
Ali laughed, as she freed herself from Arjun's arms. "It is not so easy, to be near me Phalgun." she said, and laughed again. "I can do, anything, anything for you." he said. Arjuna could not believe that a girl could refuse to be near him, until he met Ali.
"Tests. Pass tests. You are very good at it. I do know. But, you have failed in my test, long back. Move away." Ali said. A fire went down through Dhananjaya's spine. He never had to ask a lady twice to be with him. But, he had never been so attracted towards a lady either. At that moment, all he wanted as to touch her. Love her. Arjuna caught hold of Ali's arm once more, and pulled her near. He touched her soft face, with his rough fingers, looking deep into her fierce eyes
Edited by Brishti_Sarkar - 10 years ago
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Wow ! So Brilliant ! Loved This Part !! You're Just Awesome !
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oh Arjun is in exile? may be he still had not met any other woman except Panchali?
its interesting , continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Brishti 👏

I like the spirit of Ali. She is Quite strong.
Arjun could not believe he was refused by a beautiful lady to be with him 😆

And what test did she took from Arjun

Continue soon. Its a rare story & I am looking forward to read it 😊

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