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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Wow...its awsumm..!!!
Loved it..!! 
And very eager to read more..!! 
plz plz update soon..!!
and plz pm me when u update..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
This is something really awesome n interesting..
Ram+Aman=RAman...
Continue sooonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Interesting, waiting for next part, I also thought of this story line  
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Lovely update
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi friends thanks for likes and comments
part 2
hope you guys like it
 
Ram:(gets angry)can't u see ur eyes my mom suffer pain because of u
Raman was still shock and was not saying anything
Ram:excuse me apko sunayi nahi deta
Mihir:sorry beta galathise hokaya
Ram:beta!koun beta mein apki beta nahi hu aur aap kyu maafi mankrahihu
Ishita take ram with her and walked back
Raman:sorry ishita meri vajase chotlegaya tumme
Ram:meri maa ko jaantihu aap?
mihir:ha tumhari maa meri behan hai
ram:apko koyi problem hai kya mein usse question poochrahihu aur aap jawaab detihu
mihir:kuch jawaab aise hai
ishita walked from there but mihir stopped
mihir:bhabi aap jaarahihu hai kya? Itni saal ke baathmile aur aap bina kuch bole aur pooche jarahihu...
ishita wanted to ran away from there she was not able to face raman
mihir:boliye bhabi aap kaisa hai
ram:voh teek nahihu
mihir:mein bhabhise poocha
ram:kuch jawaab aisa hai
ishita:ram badose aise Baath nahi karthe, I am fine mihir let me go I don't want to see anyone or talk to anyone
ram:aap kaise teek hai ma,apka haathmei toh goon hai
mihir:ha bhabi it's bleeding
Raman goes near her and take her hand
(BG music starts to play dilkahi ruktha nahi dil mera suntha nahi)
ishita takes her hand from his and give an angry look
ishita:it's ok I can bear this pain,l have bear more pain than this in front of that this is nothing
mihir:it's bleeding let us go to the hospital
ishita:no mihir leave me alone
mihir:(shouts)what the hell with u bhabi come with us
all the pupils attention was on them
ishita:don't shout mihir sab humein dekrahihai
mihir:then it's better to come with us
ishita(pointing a house)that's my house let's go there mihir
she doesn't call Raman with them and don't want Raman to come with them.mihir asked Raman to go with them but he refused.raman walked back suddenly somebody came and caught his hand that was Aman
aman:aap bhi humari saath avona
Raman:nehi beta mein nahi aasaktha
aman:kyu nahi aasaktha, oh issliye taki apni meri mamako chot pohchaya
Raman:hmmm
aman:it's not only ur problem mamaki bhi hai ussebhi dekechalna chahiye na
aman forces Raman to go with him and he agrees
they reached home.ram was angry to see Raman,ishita didn't care and mihir was happy
the structure of house is like old bhalla house)
(mihir was sitting in the dining table and was bandages ishita's wound and there was a small wound in Raman 's hand which was noticed by Aman,ishita had gone to kitchen to make coffee and aman followed her
aman:ma usse uncle ka haathmei chot hai
ishita:toh
aman:toh kya?ma u have to put medicine
ishita:can't u see aman I am busy
aman:hmm can u give the first aid box
ishita gives the first aid box and aman went near Raman who was sitting in the sofa ,he eyes was only on ishita
aman:uncle haath dho
he didn't respond and was in tears
aman wipes his tears and asks
aman:aap rohkyu rahihu bahuth dard ho rahahai kya?(he asked him innocently)
Raman:hmm todisi dard horaha hai
aman:koyi Baath nahi uncle mein apko first medicine lekathunki aur phir ek mittisi kissi dunki then ur all pain will go.
Raman couldn't stop crying aman's words have given him the memories of ruhi
aman:uncle kounsa medicine use kartha hai uncle
Raman :yeh wala
aman starts to put medicines in his hand
(BG music plays tere dilka mere dilse rishta purana hai )
and after bandaging his hand hand aman kisses him
aman:kaisa ab aapka pain
Raman:(smiles)abhi bhi thodasa dard hai
aman:abhi bhi (sadly)ab kya karunki
Raman:tum left cheekmei kiss diyana ab ek rightmei bhi dho may be the pain will go
aman kisses him
aman:ab kaisa hai
Raman : the pain has gone
aman becomes happy to hear that the pain has gone
ram was sitting behind mihir
mihir:apki naam kya hai beta
Ram was silent
aman:myself aman and he is ram
mihir:nice name(in low voice)naam hai ram ka aur harkath ravaan ka
ram:apna kuch kaha
mihir:nahi
ishita asked ram and aman to play and they left
mihir:bhabi aap kaise hai
ishita:mein teek hu mihir
mihir:bhabi yeh bacha
ishita: ha mihir yeh mera bacha hai
mihir:apne ma...
ishita:ha mihir mera bacha.zindagi aise hai humkobhi nahi bata zindagi mein kab kaise mood ajathe hai.humne socha woh hona zaroori nahi hai .mein jaabse nahi sochataki I could give birth to a child but it become possible.
Raman was happy to know ishita dream have become true but also he was feeling pain in his heart.he does not know why it's happening ishita was in tears.mihir changed topic.
mihir:dhono bahuth cute hai aman bilkul apki jaise hai par ram is dangerous.
ishita:(smile)ha. mihir ram Toda dangerous hai he does not care anything and does not obey elder.sorry mihir usne kuch kaha hai toh.
mihir:it's ok bhabi bacha hai na.
ishita:mihir mera ek request hai
mihir:ha bhabi boliyena bhabi.
ishita:don't call me bhabi humari beech mein aise rishta thi aab nahi hai so please. tum mujhe apni behan samaj thi hai na u can call me akka or di
Mihir sadly agreed to it.
ishita:(wiping her tears)ghar mei sab kaisa hai mihir.
mihir:ghar;I don't know how can i say that place as house it had changed like a hostel .where a lot of unknown person live, yes,kabse apki aur Raman bhai ka rishta toota hai uss dinse uss parivaar ne Raman bhai ka saath rishta chodthiya aur apne ghar mei
 rahane keliye rent detha hai woh Raman bhai ko
ishita was in tears hearing this all but she didn't respond or say anything.
ishita:ruhi kaise hai.
mihir:woh toh apkeliye apne papase chodke ghar chodkar chaligayi.
ishita:mihir tum kya bole rahi ruhi ghar chodkar chalikaya voh bacha hai mihir.
mihir:di woh hostel mein rahthi she does not like to live in the house where shagun and adi lives. who is the only reason for ur seperation.
ishita:mere aur Raman ka divorce,humari bichara ruhi ki zindagi karab kardiya.I was always tensed about ruhi uski zindagi aur uski future ke baare mein sochkar. kismat badi chees hai mihir humko nahi bata kab kaise hota hai can I talk to ruhi...
mihir:di it's night we can call tomorrow.
ishita:ok ,aur batha appa,amma,vanduakka ,balajiju ,shavu aur mihika ke baare mein vahase aneke Baath kisi se baat nahi Hui.
mihir :apki janne ke Baath sab Chennai chaligayi.
ishita:sab matlab mihika bhi.
mihir:ha.
ishita:tum dhono ka shaadi
mihir:hamari shaadi nahi Hui aur apki bina nahi hosakta .apke aane ka indezaar karthi thi avona humare saath...please mana math kijiye
-to be continued
sorry for the mistakes
please comment guys even it's negative
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Edited by lazeema - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
very nice like the kids names very thoughtful ram and aman... raman
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
amazing plz update the next part soon
waiting waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
very nice.. plz update soon..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice update. Waiting for the next part! 
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#20
wow... awesome... but i hope the kids are raman's and were is mani... did she actually marry mani... plsss continue soon... and if u can do pm me