OS:Humari adhoori kahani last part on page 30,thank u note on page32

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi friends,
This is my new os
Hindi and English is not my mother tongue so sorry for the mistakes
 
Raman and ishita was separated.Raman was not able to see ishita in pain and the pain was increasing day by day he was looking for a reason which can make ishita separate from him.but it was not easy for him at last he got the reason that is shagun and mani, shagun's marriage break's up and he had asked ishita to go from his life, saying that he still love shagun and he would like to live a life with his two children's and wife shagun.ishita was not ready to end up the relation. she was not able to believe this,she thought that raman was loving her It was not only a thought it was true, but why he took a decision like this?.Raman had said her to marry mani which is her love of her life.it was unbelievable for ishita to hear something like this from raman .she wanted to argue with him but she was not in a condition because shagun was back to bhalla's house and raman was happy with that life. Amma and appa forced ishita to marry mani and have a new life. At last ishita was ready for the marriage with mani.
 
After 6 years
Bhalla's house was changed a lot each and every person in bhalla house misses ishita very much.simmi was divorced from param and now she working in a school who does not depend on his brother who was totally wrong and romi is working in small shop and Mr bhalla also .They were giving rent to raman to live in the house.no one of the family members was talking with him for the past 6 years.ruhi who was totally broked up infront of her father's decision had divided not to live with him and was living in school hostel.Iyer's was shifted to Chennai.mihir who was still with raman and believes that some other reason is there him to leave ishita .adi and shagun only the two person who was happy in the house. raman who was living like man without soul for the past 6 years with his ishita's memories .he didnot loss his ishita but also his family.he was not able to concentrate in business all deals was done by mihir. Mihir and mihika who was not get married,the family was not against their marriage but they have taken a decision that without ishita they won't get married.
 
bhalla house
raman's room
adi:dad kal schoolmei meeting hai
Raman was going to say something but mihir interprets andd says
mihir:adi tum tumhari mamaki saath chalo kal papako business tour hai
shagun enters the room
shagun:kis tour ka Baath karahihu
mihir:woh actually we have some projects in US so we have to go it is for 2 week
shagun:wow USA mei mein bhi avunka
Raman:no need of that
shagun:please Raman mein bhi avunki sabki biwiyon honki waha
Raman:koun kaha tum meri biwi ho,u r just adi's mother and not yet married so please be in ur limits and leave me alone
shagun gives him a disgusting look and goes from the room
Raman:when is the flight
mihir:10in the morning
by saying this mihir comes from the room and sees shagun who was thinking something .mihir goes near and say
mihir:kya sochrahihu.r u thinking about how to come with us to USA agar aisa haitoh please apni gandi dimakse kuch math socho.badi mushkilse bhaiko manadiya,it's after a long time he is coming from a trip so please don't disturb him let him have relax for a while
by saying mihir gone from there
next day morning Raman was ready to go,he went to his mother to say he is going but she didn't respond ramaan feels so sad
mihir and Raman reached USA
they finished their meeting and gone for a walk mihir was saying something to raman but raman was in an another world suddenly he fell on a lady who was coming opposite to him he was on the top of the lady.he was shocked to see her and she too ,mihir comes near and helps them.he was also shock to see his ishita bhabi and there was two childrens with her (twins ram and aman)
Ram:(gets angry )can't u see ur eye my mom suffer pain because of u.
raman was fully shock to hear mom from that child and also feel so sad to see the mungalsutra and sindhoor of some other person in her
precap Raman and mihir stays at ishita's house and conversation between raman and children
 
hope you guys like it
please comment even if it is negative
 
part 2-page3
part3-page6
 part4-page8
part5-page10
part6-page16
part7-page19
part8-page21
part9- page26
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