Ashlok OS-This Is Life(Part1-pg3)18/12/2014 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome meeru! 👏 I'm speechlesss!
I was on a roller coaster riding with Shlok when crashed with 😲 Astha sitting on a railway station and crying! 😆

And married with a 2 yrz old kid! And separated with Shlok! What happened when did they get married! 😲

And believe me i scrolled back to see if i missed out anything about marriage! 😆🤣

And men will be men agree with you meeru a gal can't even have a little adventure like playing in rain! It's so unfair especially for women! 😡

They too have a same heart inside them like men that contains the same wishes and the same will to live and enjoy life! Even if they are physically different from men 😔 It's like the men have reserved all the enjoyment and adventure for themselves! 😡

You really defined that scene so well! Hats off to you! 👏

And ofcourse will wait for your update buds with bated breath! Do update soon! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
WOW meeru wonderful work!
So thwy met
He fell in love
They married and know she thinks hr us a liar someone who uses woman and throws the away? Why what haopend
So she will leave :( sad and she is taking their son with her holy fuuu
Pls continue soon it is so interesting to wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Magnificent update that fired my imaginations beyond capacity! What caused Ashlok's separation? Was Shilok unfaithful to Astha? OR Was there any form of domestic violence? OR Did someone put spokes in their wheel?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
awesome update 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Wow Meerab beautiful OS dear Ashlok first meet was so romantic n now 3 years passed Ashlok r married n having a boy now she is leaving him forever what happen that she take this drastic decision???? Waiting for next part to clear all my confusion n thanks for PM 😃!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
interesting..
so shlok fell for astha d first tme he saw her... wow love at first sight...
they married..& even hv a 2 yr old son.. but astha going to her parents house forever...
continue soon..
& surely convert it into ss no problem... v wil enjoy reading it...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
just read the first part dear,wat can i say u always brought ur stories here filled with something magical,in meerab's style,loves it very much❤️🤗
am always eger to read ur stories bcz u wrote it in a simple and cutie way😳
loved this story very much dear,love at first sight😉😉
their first meeting and the flashback wrote beautifully❤️
egerly waiting for the next parttry to update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Meerab,

Maan gaye.. aap ustaad ho..
don't know from where do u search for themes and bring in variety in concepts..
I loved this simple ..seedha ..saadha.. astha..
loved caring shlok ..
the rain and the busstand..the rascals..so real.. so true..
a person coming for help .. and he becomes a lover in the due time..
the handkerchief tale. .loved it..
Why their wedding is broken ..
waiting for the mystery to reveal...
as always written very bfully..
Edited by deepavasudev - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Part 1:
Nice start Meerab...
u have written it so romantically...
Its started with the lovely rain scene...when he first saw her...
so beautifully written...
loved the way he went to gave her lift by saving her from those goons...
the convo inside the car was so lovely...
the way u described shlok though was so magical...
The end part...felt so sad...
why did astha decided to go away from him...
will he come on time to take them back into his life...
Thanks for the wonderful treat dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Beautiful Update

Romantic scenes were just sizzling
but now they parting ways

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