Reviving Parud FF Chapter 35 Season 1 Finale in Page 137 - Page 49

Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Hmmm...I am thinking...What should I say now...chalo,I will try...In one word it was ...SENSEOUS 👏
In two words...painfully SENSEOUS ..👏...each & every time I read your writting Sonia, it's a revelation...revelation to the world of romance that you capture so beautifully without making it cheap or vulgar & therein lies your strength ... the entire chapter is so nicely and smoothly flowing that I too got flowed with it even without knowing...every bit of it, I loved to the core ... Seriously, how do you do it every time...each time it's seductive , desirous without an iota of vulgarity...Reading the whole chapter was so beautiful an experience that I felt like I am drifting off to some oo la la land...Everything you wrote was written in pure perfection... what's more it was so visual that I could literally see it happening with Ashish & Sanaya...

Thank you Mano for all your efforts in coming up with Absoulutly bang on edits ...they are always 'ek se badh kar ek' but this time toh you have taken the cake...it must have taken a lot of time , energy & efforts ...just want you to know that your hard work is really really appreciated & acknowledged by all of us...

And now a big ' thank you ' to JJKKL who came up with this FF...you truly are one of a kind JJKKL .. you sure know how to keep your readers on tenterhooks who are left with eagerness and excitement for the next chapter .

Originally posted by: la126

Res

Whoa... 😲
What the hell? Damn it...sensuous one word...bas ☺️
Arrey me blusssinggg ☺️
Sonia ji my goodness... 😳 this is sooo damn hot... 😳
And I loved the way he tried to refrain himself...and alas Jo hona dha woh hogaya... 😆
Loved it loved it loved it... I am like stunned with ur writing that I don't know which part to pick as my favourite...*blussinggg hyperventilating me* 😆


And Mano darling u rocked with ur collages... 👍🏼
Awesome Mano...u even removed paro's bindhi to give a Myrah look...and rose in between...wooowww...i loved it...and got a glance of khusssiii tooo... 😉
Awesome...da



JJKKL dear...mubarak Ho... 🤗 😉 so this FF is turning into a big collaboration of writers... 👏 which is an ahmazing thing...again...
Surprise indeed it was a surprise... 😃


Anddd my blusssing smiley worked wooopieee...i am so happy...today it was dhim tana the epic dhim tana in Malayalam rr...☺️

Originally posted by: -Mukti-

Mano...your edits are simply amazing. I saw you used KKGSR from IPK😉 Thanks for all the hard work you put into it these edits that are a wonderful accompaniment to this wonderful wonderful FF.

JJ and Sonia....this chapter collaboration has me at a loss of words...

let just say I did this



then this...

that is how great, amazing, wonderful, delightful, sensuous and a whole lot of words that I can't think of right now because you'll did this to me with this valentine special...now I need time to recover.

Originally posted by: rithureuben

JJ, you made this update a little hard for me to read. I wasn't sure what to focus on Mano's collages or Sonia's writing. Both were stupendous. Thank you for the wonderful Valentine's gift. Its nice to see Rudra and Paro surrender to the moment and forget the rest of the world for awhile.

Originally posted by: tiniaa

JJKKL , Sonia & Mano !! Thank you all for making my Valentine special.

Originally posted by: varshu27

OMG...what the heck was that...Excuse me while I go get myself a tall glass of ice cold water.😆

Sonia , thank you for this passion filled Vday treat...Mano, ur edits were perfectly done...all the hard work has paid off...JJ, I am eagerly waiting to know what happens next😆...Loved the gifts Rudra brought for Paro...the way he used the rose petals to kindle paro's desire was fantastic😳

Originally posted by: desisoapie

Dear Mano------Let me say that you have done an incredible job with the photo collage. The editing is superb and flows perfectly with the way the story unfolds. The part with the rose is amazing and I love it! I knew you would do great and you have exceeded my expectations! A big hug to you for all your hard work🤗

Originally posted by: Cutemithra

Wow.. Excellent chapter.. Wat else to say.. Totally parudlicious... Loved it..

Be it the writing or the edits, they were just out of the world...

Originally posted by: aaliah3108

What a fantabulous Valentine day treat guys !!!!

Mano, Sonia and JJ... you guys are awesome. Each is a pro in their field of work. Prepping myself to write more... but I need to read it ...once again!!!

I shall be back. 🤪

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

rly a valentine's gift.best chap of this ff.red rose scene,saree scene n the romance which bloomed after that was so beautiful with perfect edits