Manik-Nandini OS : Her Tears; His Friendship (Based on 16/11 Precap) - Page 2

First of all toh I'm sorry for as always being late, you know how lazy I'm 😃 & Oh yes yes u absolutely stood beyond expectation, not only this time but always you do, & I can say this infinite times without being tired that you are a super amazing writer.👏👏

Beautiful...  if only  Dhruv has a similar reaction on screen!  😃

Please write and post more FFs!😉

Originally posted by: navi04vet

I really hope it happens...

 

Edited by funkylicious - 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ireena7

awww...it's too much sweet and cute OS...and finally Nandu said " I Love U" 😃

really a nice one 👏

 

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

nice os

hope it comes true...

Originally posted by: firefly..

First of all toh I'm sorry for as always being late, you know how lazy I'm 😃 & Oh yes yes u absolutely stood beyond expectation, not only this time but always you do, & I can say this infinite times without being tired that you are a super amazing writer.👏👏

The way you put hold on their emotions, Manik's failed attempt to self control, Nandini's pain & at the end Dhruv's heartbreak but yet keeping control to his heart, everything are commendable. 👏👏👏 This OS can't be better than the way I thaught. You perfectly penned it down how I wished for. Thanks for always fulfilling my demand 😳😳 love you 🤗

P.S. congo for being a sizzler 

P.P.S. start a FF or SS on MaNan please, pretty please!! 😳

P.P.P.S. missed out your poem for a long. Try write something poetic 😊

Love,

Your ever demanding sister Sree(Sardi) 🤗😆

Hahah first of all you're not late yaar.😆 Lazy is my middle name😛😆

Yaar now I really doubt that you own a butter shop.😆 but on the other side, I'm just happy to write for you😳 sachi.

 

Am very happy that you loved it, and thanks for the appreciation. I'm flattered by your comments all the time😳

 

P.S. Thank you.

 

P.P.S FF or SS you know na mai atak jati hu I mean I loose interest but I'll try to write it out before I start it😆 If you know what I mean😛

 

P.P.P.S POEM😆 I lost touch in writing them but will try it for sure😉

 

 

Love Shru🤗🤗

Originally posted by: nits_viratholic

awww so sweet 😊

Thank you dear😳

Originally posted by: funkylicious

Hahah first of all you're not late yaar.😆 Lazy is my middle name😛😆

Yaar now I really doubt that you own a butter shop.😆 but on the other side, I'm just happy to write for you😳 sachi.

 

Am very happy that you loved it, and thanks for the appreciation. I'm flattered by your comments all the time😳

 

P.S. Thank you.

 

P.P.S FF or SS you know na mai atak jati hu I mean I loose interest but I'll try to write it out before I start it😆 If you know what I mean😛

 

P.P.P.S POEM😆 I lost touch in writing them but will try it for sure😉

 

 

Love Shru🤗🤗

AWWWEEE; this is mad adorable<3 wishing something like that actually happens...but imagine; all that in one night lol, literally too much to handle 😆