Barriers of Love - Ishra TS epilogue added - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Ahaha. Mood Karan kar di yeh dono ne. Hope next part confession. Very nice Ankita. Thankuu for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
awww this was so sweet n romantic
stupid Mimi khud fight kro yar y u r involving ishra??
poor ishra
I really liked d update update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
interesting..👍🏼
Edited by MysticRiver - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Superb update...👏👏
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Thanks for PM.
It was Just an Awesome TS.😊
Raman and Ishita Romantic conversation was so nice.😳
But it was disturbed by Mihika and Mihir.😡
ISHRA needs some privacy.
Percap was very Interesting,Raman was drunk and express his feelings to Ishita.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
AWESOMEEE...👏👍🏼

continue ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Thnks 4 the overwhelming response everyone
i will rply everyone individually soon but
here is the next part...
posting it so early because in weekdays cant give garauntee of quick updates...




Part 2


"Akka.." Mihika said shutting down the laptop. "Huh?" She replied absentmindedly. "Movie is over. Achi thi naa?" She asked chirpily. "Haan..it was good." Ishita smiled a fake smile. "Akka...kya soch rhi ho? Itni khoyi khoyi kyun ho?" Mihika asked worried.

"Nahi to..nthng. kuch nhi hai. Movie achi thi." Ishita smiled again a smile which never reached her eyes. They were fixed at the door of bedroom to catch a glimpse of him outside. "Akka..kya dekh rhi ho aap?" Mihika snapped her. "Bhook lagi hai. Budhu ne dinner to karvaya nhi. Chalo kuch khate hain. Kya bnaya apne?" Mihika asked getting up from the bed. "Vo..saag bnaya hai. Chalo..deti hun." Ishita too got up and started moving towards the living area. As they were climbing down the staircase, Raman and Mihir entered the living area.

Mihir and Mihika gave each other I would kill you any time look while Ishra stared at each other helplessly. Raman asked her with actions if she was able to convince Mihika. She nodded in negative and asked about Mihir. He too gave a dissapointed look. Then he gestured her to go to Mihir while he will talk to Mihika. Maybe it could help. Ishita agreed.

"Vese tum log bhi ajeeb pagal ho? Mihika...thode hi time me tumhari shadi hai or kya bacho ki tarah lad rahe ho?" Raman spoke to Mihika. "Or Mihir..itne bade ho gye ho. Yeh kya pagalpan hua?" Ishita tried to knock sense into Mihir.

Mihir and Mihika gave each other most deadly glare ever.
-Tumne bhabhi ko bharkaya mere khilaaf?
-Maine? Maine Kuch nhi kiya. Ulta tumne jeeju ko bura bhala kaha naa mere bare mein.
-Mujhe koi or kaam nhi hai kya. Jo bas tumhare bare me hi baat krta rahun. Apne aap ko itni importance mat do.
-Sab pata hai mujhe. Ki kon kitna important hai or yeh bhi ki tumne hi jeeju ko kaha mujhe daantne ke liye.
-Maine nhi tumne kaha. Bhabhi ko. Jab me khud sorry nhi bola to tmhari ego hurt ho gyi naa.

-Arre humse kisi ne kuch nhi kaha. Hum to bas tumhe ladayi krne se rok rhe the. Raman amd Ishita tried to intervene but to no avail. The fight had reached its peak and the only solution they could find was pull them apart from each other.

"Chal Miku..tujhe bhook lgi thi. Aaja...khana deti hun." Ishita calmed her down. "Haan...chalo khana khate hain." Raman seconded her. "Chal Mihir."

-Akka..me iske saath khana nhi khaungi.
-To mujhe bhi shaunk nhi hai. Tumhare saath khane kaa.
-Khana meri Akka ne bnaya hai. To yahan baithne bhi mat.
-Thik hai. Go to hell. Chalo Bhai hum bahar se kuch mangwate hain.

"Kya??" Raman spoke with a shock. "Pr Mihir...teri bhabhi ne saag bnaya hai beta. Ek baar taste to.." He cut him short. "Kya farak padta hai bhai? Khud hi to kehte ho ki inke punjabi khane me bhi madrasi taste aata hai. Ab kya problem hai. Chalo kuch order krte hain." Mihir spoke and took out his phone to dial a number.

"Par.." Raman spoke. He remembered Ishita's words about making it for him. Pati ke dil ka raasta pet se hota hai. "Mihika..tum apne haath se khilao na Mihir ko." He spoke up suddenly.

"Me or ise khana? In his dreams jeeju. Me essa kbhi nhi krungi." Mihika retorted. "Chup kar Mihika." Ishita scolded her. "Mihir tum log bhi betho. Khao naa. Maine khana bnaya hai. Bahar se order karne ki kya zaroorat hai?" Ishita said. She prayed that he agrees for this was specially made for Raman. She remembered promising herself that Raman will be first to taste it. Aaj dekhte hain...Ravan kumar ungliyan chatte hain ya nhi. But everything was getting ruined here.

"Nahi Bhabhi. Its ok. Aap ise hi khilayiye. Maine order karr diya hai. Spcl punjabi food." He stressed on the last part to show Mihika while she just rolled her eyes and gave an I dont care expression.

The dinner was a silent affair. Ishita, with a heavy heart arranged plates for Mihika and herself. She could see Raman's eyes glued to her and the dish. Mihir helped himself and Raman with food on sofa while the girls sat in dinning area.


As Mimi left for their rooms alloted for the night, Raman, saving himself from the prying eyes of youngers entered the kitchen and hugged Ishita tightly from behind. His behaviour was like a teenager lover who got to meet his love after a couple of days. "Raman...yeh aap?" Ishita was shocked and amused at the same time.

The feeling of her in his arms had made him happier. He wanted to keep her like this glued to him forever. But this was not the time to think about all this. So..in a spur, he spoke "Phone silent pe rakhne. Jab yeh dono so jayenge to me call krunga. Neeche aa Jana." He almost whispered to her while she happily nodded. "Tumse kuch adhoori batein poori krni hai." He said in a husky voice which made her blush. He smiled to see his effect on her and made her turn around to have a clear view of her face. She lowered her gaze under his. "Aaogi naa...baat puri karne?" He asked in a husky voice making her blush all the more. She nodded shyly. Her red apple cheeks made him smile.

"Bhai kahaan hai aap?" Yhey heard Mihir's voice. "Sab ke sab kabab mein haddi. Ise to me abhi..." Raman rolled his sleeves cursing him and was going to beat him when Ishita gestured not to. He didnt want to say no to her..so simply agreed. "Aata hun abhi." He spoke loudly in his signature rude voice. "Tum tyar rehna raat ko." He winked her and left the place but not before giving a peck on her cheeks. Before she could realise what happened, he was gone. She was left only to touch her wet cheeks and enjoy the effects of the first kiss he gave her. "Oh Madrasan...raat ko yad rakhna." He spoke yet again before entering his room giving her cheeks a new shade of red.



At about Midnight:
(These are parallel convos in both rooms)
Mk-Akka yeh sab ladke ek jaise hote hain. Selfish, rude.
R-Aisa nhi hai yrr. Har ladki alag hoti hai.
Mh-Aap to rehne do bhai. Inka jitna bhi karlo inhe hmesha problem rehti hai.
I-Nhi yrrr. Bss thoda patience or pyar se baat kro.
R-Sab thik ho jata hai.
Mk-Pyar...my foot.
Mh-Kuch nhi hota yeh pyar vyar.
I-come on miku. You love him.
Mh-But she doesn't love me back.
R-Are ab ek khane ke liye koi ese jhagarta hai kyaa?
Mk-To yeh baat jakr samjhao naa use.
Mh-Use to itni akal ayegi nhi.

Raman and Ishita are side by side busy texting each other and Raman is teasimg her.

-Bahar aao naa yrrr.
-Aise kaise aau. Mihika sun hi nhi rhi kuch bhi.
-Kya yrr tumhari behn bhi. Ab hi ladna tha ise?
-Meri behn kyu? Aapka bhai bhi to apke paas betha burayi hi krr rha hai.
-Hahaha...very funny. Yeh to me tumhare liye chup hoon. Kuch bol nhi rhaa kyuki tumne roka hai varna abhi essi dhamki dunga ki yehi mihir haath jodta hua aayega mihika ke paas maafi mangne.
-Arre kyu? Hmesha Mihir hi kyu? Kbhi to Mihika ko bhi samajhna chahiye naa.
-Arrre chodo yrrr. Ek kaam kro...jaldi se mihika ko sulado or niche aa jao.
-Raman...okk. try krti hun.


Mihika takes longer than usual to sleep. Ishita tries her level best to stop her talks but she doesnt budge. As Ishita is tired due to whole day stress, sleep evades her. Mihika sees her sleeping and switches off the lights.

Raman constantly tries Ishita's number but her phone is on silent and she is already in deep slumber. He tries to sleep but the fbs of their impending talk disturb him. So he gets up and barges into his room to get Ishita.







I know it was meant to be a two shot. But again...i wanted ishra confession to be more beautiful and romantic. This part got elongated with teasing session only. Next will be the final one with confession and romance. Pkka...and it can take a day or two.

I am not sure about my weekdays as schedule becomes hectic. So..had planned to complete it by today. I missed replying to comments so that I could complete it today itself...for the views were beautiful and expectations high. Unfortunately, this was all I could write. So..ab tak ke liye itna hi. Do share your views about it. Pms I think should be done only after completing part 3. Maybe some find this one boring.

Vese mujhe aaj tak smjh nhi aya...meri story ki start to thodi achchi hoti hai but by the time I reach part two...sab kharab ho jata hai. Is it so naa? Pls share your honest views if you are a true reader. Well...I still need to learn a lot. Its just the begining i guess.

Still...ruhi promise..next part will be last and romance pakka. If you can wait.
Thnks once again for liking.
By the way two and three both start with T...so its still a TS..lol
sorry...if its not wat you expected
feel free to criticize
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amalaziz

wow.. This is Awesome .. Beautiful Start .. Loved it !
Update Soon .

thnks 4 it dear
updated...do share your views about itt
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
finally...u r here anu
ab jaldi se parh dono part and unres it soon
by the way...did you change your username?
Or iska matlab kya hai??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: -Srishty-

The story was going so well when two kabbad mein haddis came. Raman and Ishita's moments before that was so sweet and Ishita speaking Punjabi to impress him was damn cute.

Don't like drunk Raman but I'm sure Ishita will handle him well.

well dear...the drunk scene will not be too much
ishu will handle him
m glad you liked itt
srry..that scene culdnt come in part 2
But promise to make part 3 bful
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