Butterflies - Ishra TS - COMPLETED - NOTE PG 19 - Page 5

Originally posted by: -Srishty-

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Oh gosh I'm having this goofy smile on my face right now. I'm seriously smiling like a fool, I think Im in love!! I LURVED this sappy, mushy story. You know some time ago, in another IF section, I was known as the mushy queen because that's what I wanted all the time.

Even though the most important part was Ishita and Vandu's talk, it was filled with romance and the whole scenario with the family, Mihir, Mihika and Raman's one liner it was so relatable to the show. Almost as if you were inspired by a particular scene and I hope we get to see a light hearted moment with all the family teasing Raman and Ishita in the show too.

It was magnifique. Hope you write the second part very soon.


P.S- I did listen Naina on repeat while reading and it fit to the T.

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Edited -

see this is why I tell you to write more and more often at that as well

Aani 🤗

What a lovely part Bhanu - it had everything and yet it left us wanting for more - you know why I say the last words 😉😆

Ruhi once again paving way for Papa dearest to romance her Ishimaa - choo cute😛 And her spilling the beans on her chachu innocently at that🤣 - kids really do say the darndest things dont they?🤣🤣🤣

And poor papa he had to take charge again - reminded me of the scene when she asked how babies are made and dear old dad jumped in without a clue as to what the question is only to have the wind knocked out of him when he did but somehow he managed to save the day 🤣🤣🤣

I actually took inspiration from that scene. I love that scene a lot and watch it multiple times. More than the awkwardness later on, I love it when Raman is stumped when he gets to know which trap did he fall into 😆😆?

And then came the lovey dovey bits - Oh I so know why puttar picked Sea over Snow 😉🤣🤣 yes snow does have an advantage but it can also have repercurssions of the kind that are his very grievance 🤣🤣

SHIT I am so gonna get a PM about this right or a comment - seedhi hoon nahin? - you cant blame me for this one Bhanu...dont tell me you didnt know what you were putting out here when you did it🤣

Seee ... this is the same reason I took your Langa Ghoda comment in a different tangent altogether. I guess rather than sending a PM to you, gotta have a serious discussion with Swathi ... am sure someone else has kidnapped our poor Aani ... Faceoff movie yaad aa gayi 🤣🤣🤣

And how cute is it - puttar asking her to not fidget or mutter an Aiyoo - he so knows her like the back of his hand doesnt he? 😆

And teasing, sly, puttar 😛 Oh I so cant wait to see him on screen ☺️ and I loved, LOVED how you wrote about him not even trying to touch her but his looks *swoon* ☺️ reminded me of the line - Maine nazro se tujhe choo liye from the song Tujhme rab dikhta hai

You can easily blame all this sappiness on the "Kya" of RKB. I am in ☺️ land now courtesy this guy.

And I so love how you have made use of Vandu here - she is so pretty and such a good actress but in my opinion so under utilized on the show I could so see the scene happening between the sisters Bhanu and love how she guided him - I know this part must have come to you easy-peasy right? 😃

😳 .. Aww you know me well.

Cant wait for the next one and you better make it quick

It is almost ready. Am struggling with the ending.

PS - reminds me mam you havent commented on my OS's - the last 2 so far 😳
2 .. 😲 ... I just know one. And that one I intend to as soon as I finish this part. When did you write the second one ?? PM me the second one ... will you pretty please 😳

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

The conversation at the dining table was hilarious

Raman's texts were cute, restless 😳

And the Vandu Ishita conversation was soo natural

Beautifully written Bhanu