My New OS pyar ki ek Choti si dastan last part updated - Page 8

Jyothi

@jodude

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Posted: 9 years ago

finally today i completed reading all parts😛😆

beautifully written...

its really a lovely stry...

love all the scenes...specially morning kiss..😳

nice ending...

do write more...plss...

thnks for pm

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 9 years ago

Short n simple update n plsss do write more

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rags06

@rags06

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome update😛😛😛

Loved the way you described the love between the arranged marriage couple...

All the scenes and moments were so cute😛😛

Thanks for PM😃

Please do write more😛

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you so much for pm and the beautiful short story on Raya

It was rayalicious . beautiful .. perfect ending

loved the good morning kiss and lipstick mrk 😉

NIce ending

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youandme272000

@youandme272000

Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Read last 2 parts..
Very sweet story de...

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Jyothi

@joemahika

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank u frnds for u support

Thanks a ton for ur likes and comments

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 9 years ago

With all rituals over Raya are now married
with the blessings of elders and have a little fun with friends wedding ceremony is completed. In true sense they arw now one soul...

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Janilover

@Janilover

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

Di last part superbb

nicely peend down loved each and every line
plz start new soon

and thanx for whatsapp PM😆

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 8 years ago

part 1
awww awesome start when I read I felt it like movie Vivah but its the one of the my favorite movie so I m enjoying RaYa into this concept lovely thoughts moving for next...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 2
WWW RaYa took the first step in their relationship while enjoying their courtship period so lovingly I enjoyed it a lot.. even KK is also so helpful. for Ram & Priya in all way too gud superb way much interesting that I thought keep it up moving for next...

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