My New OS pyar ki ek Choti si dastan last part updated

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Posted: 2014-11-07T22:47:33Z
Hello everyone this is my new OS on our lovely couple Ram and Priya
Ram and Priya they are getting married, OK story starts like this
Sharma House:
Shiny talwar (Ram's uncle, he is the reason for this marriage, he wants ram and Priya marriage) 
Shiny talwar: sudhirji kahiye aap iss rishthey ke baare mein 
Sudhir: kya kahoon shiny mere taraf se koi problem nahi ek baar apni beti se poochna chahtha hu uski decision 
Amarnath kapoor: ye bhi teek hai Sudhir ji aap bhi unka decision jaanleejiye aur hum bhi apne bete se poochenge 
Shiny : OK then we make a move baaki sab aaram se sochke baath agey badayenge hum chalthey hai
Shipra sharma : bhai aap Priya ka bhi Maama ho toh mujhe yakeen hai Priya iss risthey se kush rahegi hum kal tak humara decision batayenge
Krishna kapoor : shipra ji Priya par koi dabav math kijiye , namaste ab humein aagya dijiye
Next day:
As Priya and Ram accepted for marriage so everyone gathered in sharma house to fix engagement date
Priya and ram are seated with their families,opposite to each other both are stealing glances,they didn't get time/chance to talk with each other privately 
Finally date fixed 15 days ke baad engagement and 2 months ke baad shaadi
Sab log khush hain lunch time hai toh, sab enjoy kar rahe hai lekin inn sab ke beech ye dono ek dusre se baath karne ke liye taras rahe hai, ram ko mauka mila Priya se Milne, priya bhi chahthi thi par kismat saath nahi di KK Priya KO lekar gayi and ram KO shipra ji lekar gayi, dono hi opposite corners mein baithke baath karrahethey, ram and Priya unki baathein sun rahethey lekin dhyan ek dusre pe hai, they lost in each other eyes, both are in their own dreams, KK notice kiya inn donoki halat, 
KK : shipra ji yahan aayiye pls, Priya sapno ki duniya se bahar aajathi hai aur apneaap KO sambhalethi hai
Shipra: boliye samdhan ji kya baath hai koi kami rehgayi kya
KK: haan ek kami hai shipra Ji, now Priya feeling tensed
Shipra : ji boliye kya Karna hai mujhe
KK: aapko nahi inn dono ko Karna hai ek dusre se mulaqat baathein Karna chahiye ek dusre ko jaanna hai pehchaanna hai 
Shipra : hey bhagwan ye humne kya kardiya saari shaadi ki baathein final Kardiya lekin khud bacchon ko ekdusre se baath karne nahi diya
KK : isliye bulaya aapko ye dono ekdusre se nazar hi nahi hatarahi hai, agar aap bura na maane toh kya ram aur Priya ek dusre se akele baath karsakthe iss bheed se alag pls
Shipra: aap aise kyun pooch rahi ho accha ek minute Priya tum ram ko apna room dikhao jaao 
Priya feeling very shy and Lil embarrassed
Ram ke paas jaake bolthi hai
Priya: aayiye
Ram keeping his hands in to his pockets
Ram : after u 
Priya impressed with his behavior, she starts towards her room
Ram gives HiFi to KK 
Ram : thank u maa, love u, KK signals him to go with Priya by showing her hand towards Priya
In Priya bed room:
Priya standing in the balcony, folding her hands looking at the sky
Ram slowly goes towards balcony and stands behind Priya , Priya suddenly turns saying
Priya : papa wo mein and stops looking at ram , she already having tears in eyes
Ram ko ehsaas hogaya Priya kya feel kar rahi hai ram holds her placing his hands on her shoulders, Priya already crying like a kid in between she tries to say
Priya: wo mein ek din bhi nahi rahi hu mummy,paapa,bhai ke bina ab ekdumse unko chodke by then she is crying uncontrollably ,,ram feeling helpless he don't know what happen to.him he can't handle her tears, he taken her in to his hug he didn't tell a single word,Priya feeling secured in his hug,Priya sab Kuch bhulakar ram ki baahon mein rehgayi, patha nahi dono aise kabtak ekdusre ke dhadkan ko sun the rehgaye, Kuch der baad neha,Vikram aajathe hai
Dono eksaath : hu hu abhi saari pyar dikhaogi toh shaadi ke baad kya karenge
Ram and Priya ekduarese alag hojathe hai and Lil embarrassed looking down
Neha goes to Priya and hugs her and says 
Neha : am very happy for u both ram and Priya looking at each other they even didn't blink for a sec
Vikram : OK agar hogaya toh chale bahaar sab jaane ke liye tayyar hai bas aaphi ka intezar hai
Ram Lil disappointed: arey ye kya baath hai mein Kuch bhi nahi baath kiya kithna Kuch poochna hai and he realize what he said just then all kapoors and sharmas reach there and happy that their kids are happy with each other 
AK: beta aisa disappoint math ho ab zindagi bar usike saath baath Karna hai toh ab chale bahuth kaam baaki hai
Finally all are at the parking lot still discussing something just then ek little girl comes to ram and gives a chit ram opens the chit and he is very happy 
At kapoor mansion:
Ram receiving the moment Priya hug, wo baar baar wo chit ko padke kush horaha tha 
KK: waise writing bahuth acchi hai mere bahu ki
Ram without noticing haan wo toh hai and he is feeling shy looking at his mother
Ram : maa wo mein mein KK shows her hand and takes him to balcony
KK: padke sunao kya hai letter mein
Ram now very embarrassed but finally he reads: Mr.kapoor mein aapki mere dil mein kya chal rahi hai batadiya lekin aap Kuch nahi bola meine mauka hi nahidiya sorry ye mera mobile number, mein aapka call ki intezaar karungi
KK: toh call kiya tumne, ram just nods his head telling no
KK: baath Karo beta she is perfect for u and Priya tumse bahuth pyar karegi 
Ram : I know maa, mein isliye call nahi kiya, mujhe usse kya kahoon maa mujhe Kuch poochna tha bahuth Kuch kehna tha,lekin poochne ki Kuch kehne ki jarrorat hi nahi
KK confused : matlab kya beta
Ram : maa Jis tarah wo aaj mujhse bejijak baath ki and ye letter, indono se meri saari tension khatam ab baath karne ki Kuch bacha hi nahi am happy maa and I I 
KK complete: u love her, now call her am going
Sharma house 
Priya apne haath mein phone lekar wait kar rahi thi and she is lil upset just then phone rings,
Priya: hello in low voice
Ram : hello
Priya samajhgayi ye call ram ka hai
Priya : aap 
Ram : haan tumhi toh number bheja tha and tell u very cute, short and sweet love letter
Priya feeling very shy,she is blushing now
Ram: batao kya bolna tha I mean number kisliye diya
Now Priya hurt 
Priya : wo wo mein aapke liye number diya she is sobbing ram ko samajme aaya ki unki baathon se hurt Hui
Ram: hey relax mein aise hi kaha I know tum mere liye hi number diya now am telling u mujhe Kuch nahi chahiye
Priya happy: aapko Kuch bhi poochna nahi mujhse
Ram : no kyunki I know u and u r so special for u Priya 
Priya: hmm
Ram: sirf hmm ithna short reply hello mam am ur fience 
Priya: wo mujhe bhi patha hai Mr.kapoor
Ram: then Kuch romantic baath Karo Kuch do Kuch lo 
Priya: ahem ahem agar aapka hogaya ho tho mein phone rakdu
Ram : how rude Priya OK bye good night
Priya: one minute gussa ho kya
Ram: not at all sweetheart
Priya: mujhe jaldi soneki adat hai aur kal se engagement ki tayyari shuru ho rahi hai
Ram : OK then good night princess muahhh and cuts the call
Priya shell shocked, she didn't expected this from ram 
Priya looking at the phone and feeling happy she hugs phone within a sec beep sound 
Priya opens the message its from ram 
" princess good night with kiss symbols"
Edited by joemahika - 2014-11-13T08:39:07Z
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Posted: 2014-11-07T22:58:45Z
Awww so cute n sweet OS plsss continue soon with more phone wala romance busss aur kuch nahi chaiyeee
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Posted: 2014-11-07T23:29:49Z
Sweetest os di ..
 i just loved it .. 
 and please continue this .. 
 plzzz

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Posted: 2014-11-07T23:57:48Z
Part 2:
Priya ki morning good morning hogayi hai ram ki good morning message dekh kar 
Sab sharma house mein chai ke maje leraheythey sab bahuth khush hain Priya ne confess kiya ki she likes ram and she is happy with this marraige and discussing about engagement preparations they hear door bell ring so Priya goes to open the door she is laughing whole heartedly she opens the door the man there mesmerized by her smile she looks at him and she didn't expected 
Sudhir: ram, beta tum yahan iss waqt sab theek haina tabi peeche se awaaz aathi hai
KK: bhagwan ka reham hai sab theek hai sudhir Ji bas mujhe aapse permission chahiye
Shipra comes there with chai and sabudana vada 
Ram and Priya busy in their work, Priya busy with karthik discussing about engagement preparations ram looking at her without blinking,KK and Sudhir and shipra observing Ram 
KK : ram vada lo beta without looking plate he places his finger in to the chai cup as its very hot tea he shouts, Priya runs towards ram, and takes his hand starts wiping his fingers blowing air tabtak Priya ki aankho mein aasu aa rahi thi ram puts his hand on her shoulder Priya wahan se utt ke chale jaathi hai ye kehke
Priya : mein first aid box lekar aathi hu,ram ko bura bhi lagraha tha aur wo khush bhi hai Priya ki care dekhke, ram Priya ke paas jaana chahtha hai lekin kaise sab yahan aise 
Ek dum chup hogaya sab 
KK: ruladiya na meri bahu ko ab jaake maanao ussey aur usko batao kyun aaye hum yahan, ram face enlightens but looks at Sudhir for permission Sudhir ji just blinks his eyelids ram runs from there towards Priya room
Priya she is crying and thinking herself ithna bura kyun.laga mujhe aur mein ro kyun rahi ho ram mujhe ithna kyun affect horaha hai 
Ram goes to her
Ram: priya ,Priya didn't turn again he calls Priya look at me once pls this time Priya turns towards him 
Ram: Priya ithni Choti baath ke liye koi rotha hai kya pls I can't handle ur tears princess pls
Priya wipes her tears, ram ki haath ko lekar 
Priya: abhi kaisa hai 
Ram: Kuch nahi hua tension math lo can I tell u something 
Priya : aapko mujhse Kuch kehne ki aur poochne ki permission ki jarrorat nahi hai
Ram: OK thank u for this lemme tell u aaj tumhare care dekhe am feeling very happy am blessed do din mein kisike liye mein ithna special bangaya, now both are looking at each other
Karthik comes there calling priya both comes to reality Priya wipes her tears
Karthik : oops sorry di wo maa bularahi hai aapko
Ram and Priya now in hall 
KK: ram tumne toh Kuch khaya hi nahi tumhare fav sabudana vada
Shipra: Priya tum jaake fresh up hojao tumhe baahar jaana hai Priya goes from there without asking any.question
Ram : wow sabudana vada he starts relishing every bit and praising it's my favorite 
Shipra: ye Priya ne prepare kiya hai toh full credit goes to Priya 
Ram now blushing and very happy also that she takes care of his likes and dislikes
Priya comes out wearing black and maroon Saree with white lace work as border her lite makeup given more beauty to her loose hair and lip gloss she is looking simple and elegant 
Sab Priya ko dekhthey rehgaye KK goes to her and put Kala tikka back side of the ear
KK:Sudhir Ji ab hum chale Priya ko hum khud aakar drop karengey aap chintha math Karo 
Priya : hum matlab mein kahi jaa rahi hu kya maa 
KK:ram ne Kuch bataya hai ki nahi Priya nods her head KK looks at ram, ram put his hand on his forehead 
Ram : maa wo wo mein mein
KK: samajgayi mein kuch kehne ki jarrorat nahi, priya ram ki dadi aayi hai wo tumhe dekhna chahthi hai toh hum hamari guest house jaa rahe hai wo isliye kyunki shaadi se pehle tum KM me nehi aasakthi haina toh ab hum chale Priya simply nods her head 
Ram expecting Priya in front seat but his bad luck Priya goes to back seat,KK in front seat
Ram stealing glances through rare mirror Priya in her own world looking outside KK stops the car
KK: ram wo side mein car park Karo mein doosri car mein pahunjaogi mujhe kuch purchase Karna hai ram very happy he stops the car and goes to open the door Priya asks
Priya: maa aap bhi aayina Jo kuch bhi Lena hai humsaath mein lekejayenge aap akeli kyun looks at ram Priya ko ram ko dekthe hi samajgaya ram khush nahi hai
KK: rehne do Priya dekha ram mere bahu ko meri fikar hai lekin bete ko nahi ekbaar bhi nahi poocha abhi se joru ka ghulam bangaya kya jamana aagaya
Ram pouts his face: maa pls u know me aise math kaho sabse pehle aap phir koi bhi
KK: I know it pagal am just kidding u both enjoy and pls jaldi pahunjao and Priya pls front seat pe baithjao nahi toh ye ustad rear mirror pe tumhe dekhne ki chakkar mein patha nahi route miss kardega saying this she bids bye
Now Priya in front seat and ram asusual driving seat 
Priya feeling very shy and she is blushing her cheeks turned into crimson red she didn't dare to look at him she looking outside ram enjoying her discomfort and blushing beauty
Ram wants to tease her more he wantedly changing the gear, when he changing the gear he wantedly rubbing her thighs doing acting that it happened accidentally now Priya she is very uncomfortable she can't tell him ram enjoying her discomfort he again want to change the gear his hand back touched her thigh she suddenly catches his hand she looking down now she turned in to pink shade from top to bottom ram realized what she want to tell he stops the car
Ram: Priya kya hua, Priya just nods her head miming nothing, Priya released his hand from her grip all through this she looking down actually she is blushing
Ram taking her face in to his palms open ur eyes Priya,priya slowly opens her eyes but her eyes downcasted,look in to my eyes 
Ram: am sorry tumhe pareshan karne ke liye nahi kiya mein ye, kal tumne mujhe apni insecurities bataya, wo letter and aaj ghar mein Jo kuch hua inn sabse mujhe ye toh patha chal gaya ki mein tumhare liye special hu and mein ye confirm Karna chahtha tha ki tum mujhe mann se bhi accept Karo isliye ye sab tum hurt huyi ho toh sorry Priya keeps her hand on his lips and nods her head negatively
Priya:aapko haq hai mein aapko Mann se bhi accept kiya 
Ram holding her hand: I know it Priya, Priya frowns her eyebrows , jab bhi mein tumhe touch kiya ur cheeks turning in to crimson red color u blushing so mujhe samjme aagaya saying this he slowly pulls Priya to him now both are very near to each other they can fell their breath both are looking in to each other eyes ram gives a peck on.her hand she closed her eyes ram looking at her beauty and thinking Priya ur special for me I just love u slowly release her hand now Priya settles in her seat and says 
Priya : i think ab humein chale chahiye maa wait kar rahi.hogi and pls
Ram giving side hug to her 
Ram: no need to xplain princessab chale I promise mein aur kuch nahi karunga he entwines his palm with her again pecks and starts their journey to meet daadi

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Posted: 2014-11-08T01:11:39Z
Wow...
Such a lovely and cute updates...TongueTongueTongue
Read both the parts in one go...
Beautifully written... Insecurities and consolations were too good to be true...
Please continue soon...TongueTongue
Thanks for PMTongue

Edited by rags06 - 2014-11-08T01:13:38Z
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Posted: 2014-11-08T02:54:57Z
Very cute plsss continue soon
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Posted: 2014-11-08T04:00:39Z
lovely os
continue soon
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Posted: 2014-11-08T05:48:23Z
Superb OS Jyothi ClapClap
Very well written
Now waiting for the next update Big smile
Thanks for the PM Wink
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