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Ram being very impatient instead of warning from Priya he kissed her infront of everyone each time with new excuse.
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part1
heyy akka..!! 
superb stry...interesting one..
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part-2
nicely written...
hahahha..sabudana vada..its ur fav right..? i remember...
yaha ram ka bhi fav ..waah...
awww love my blushing sharma n naughty kapoor😳
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part-3
goood going...
but i didnt expect a slap frm ram instead of sorry...πŸ˜•
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part-4
lovely update...
raya convo is too good...
abhi tak propose nahi kia dono..
aur priya kya sabke samne bolege...😳
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part-5
aww nice updatee..
waaahh priya tried in many ways but ram didnt understood..πŸ˜†
hehehe...ram milne aagaye priya ko waah...nicee..
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Part-7:
Finally shopping done, sab apni apni cars lekar aagaye,sab settled except ram and priya, dono ekdusre ko chodke jaane ka Mann nahi hai,
Neha: guys kithna dekhoge,ram ithna sab kiya dil nahi bhara kya,getting late pls 
Ram gives irritating look to neha finally get in to the car,Priya bids bye to everyone
@9pm sharma house:
Priya standing in balcony looking at the stars,remembering ram kisses she blushing to the core,her thoughts disturbed by mobile ring and she know that who called her
Priya: hi Mr. Kapoor
Ram: hi how r u
Priya frowns eyebrows:am fine,aap aise kyun poochrahi ho
Ram: nahi aaj shopping jyada huyi naa so Priya stopped him
Priya: aapko kuch kehna hai kya
Ram: wo..wo..aaj shopping mein Jo kuch hua uske baaremein kuch kehna hai mujhe
Priya: ji kahiye
Ram: mein wo sab tumhe hurt karne ke liye nahi kiya naahi wo challenge kiya uski wajahse bulki isliye becoz ram feeling lack of words
Priya: coz u love me, lemme tell u Mr.kapoor aapko haq hai, Priya sharmarahi thi wo sab yaad karke
Now ram a bit releived hearing Priya words
Ram: Priya bas 2din ke baad hamari shaadi uske baad tum hamesha mere saath hogi mere paas
Priya : hmm
Ram: sirf hmm,kya hua kya sochrahi ho
Priya: kuch nahi bas 2 din mein mere new life shuru aapke saath Lil excited a bit nervous and a bit low feeling
Ram: Priya mein ye promise nahi karsaktha ki tumhari life full of happiness hogi but ye jarror kehsaktha ki hamesha tumhare saath mein hu and har palko yaadgar banaunga,trust me
Priya: wo mujhe bhi patha hai Mr. Kapoor
Ram: OK ab jaake sojao kal tumhare liye hectic hoga,mehendi aur sangeeth dono eksaath toh pls sleep well darling have tight and only ram in dreams
Priya : aap bina Mr.kapoor bahuth besharam hogaye ho bye good night
Next day:
Sharma house mein full on preparations shuru hogayi hai mehendi ke liye and shaam ko sab KM jaana hai coz already decided sangeet,haldi and marriage in KM for daadi
Evening sharmas reaches KM,kapoors received sharmas,sab busy hai shaadi ki preparations mein,Priya ki aankhen sirf ram ko dhoondrahe hai, uski aankhen hartaraf ghoom rahi hai par ram dikhai nahi diya priya Lil disappointed,
KK comes to priya: Priya tum jisko dundrahi ho wo abhitak tayyar nahi hua 
Priya: maa mein toh bas ghar dekhrahi thi ,KK smiles at her
Kuch dermein sangeeth shuru hogayi
Sab dance karrahethey ,neha and vikram comes with ram 
Ram looking very handsome in maroon sherwani with black stroll with six pack body
Priya ram ko dekthey rehgayi and ram priya ko,neha comes to her
Neha : Priya control sab tum dono ki dekhrahe hai 
Priya bends down her head,both are stealing glances
Sab Jodi ek ek karke dance kiya final turn ram and priya ki
Ram being a man goes on his knees extending his palm,Priya offers her hand
Now both on dance floor,dancing on a romantic music dono ekdusreke aankhon mein dubgaye,ram keeps his one hand on her waist pulling her more close to him,Priya balancing herself keeping her one hand on his chest,she feeling very shy she can't meet his eyes,ram enjoying this, finally song over everyone claps for them, Priya starts to move,ram squeeze her waist,Priya looks at him,ram winks and moves from there leaving Priya in shock
Amarnath kapoor : hi everyone one important news I want to share with u
As u all know meri maa ke liye humne ye shaadi ke sabhi functions yahan rakha hai, par ab haldi rasam hum aisa karengey Issi hall mein two sides mein haldi function hogi ektaraf ram ki dusri taraf Priya ki beech mein parda rahega but rule is rule haldi rasam hothey hi ram ko farm house chalega then hum baarat leke ayengey,kyun sharma ji ab aap khush hona
Ram disappointed with this idea he is not happy with this,
Priya guest room apne parents ke saath time spend kar rahithi,ram Priya ko call kar raha tha 
Priya: ji boliye 
Ram: kya bolu Priya tumne sunana papa ne kya kaha ek hi ghar mein haldi,ek hi ghar mein rahengi par ek baar bhi nahi milsakthey ,Priya hasne lagthi hai
Ram: very bad Priya mein yahan upset hu aur tum hoki ,mujhe nahi baath Karna tumse,ram call disconnect karne jaa raha tha Priya 
Priya: Mr. Kapoor 
Ram: kya hai
Priya : pls sirf kal subah ki baath hai shaam thak shaadi hojayegi tab se mein sirf aapki hojaungi
Now ram a bit cooled
Ram: ok ,waise ek baath kahu aaj tum bahuth cute lag rahi thi
Priya : sacchi
Ram with husky tone: mucchi, priya...Priya
Priya samajgayi ram ki irradey,controlling her shy: ji kahiye mein yahi hu 
Ram: Priya ek do na pls
Priya : ek kyun hazaar dungi lekin ab nahi shaadi ke baad
Ram: Priya this is not fair harbaar mein hi sab kuch karu
Priya stops him: Mr. Kapoor behave urself ye kya bol rahe aap
Ram bits his tongue: sorry kuch jyada hogayi, kya ekbaar milsakthe him
Priya: Mr. Kapoor pls samjha kijiye 
Ram : its OK Priya ab mein rakhtha hu,tum jaake sojao good night
Priya ko samajme aaya ki ram upset hai par wo kuch kar bhi nahi sakthi,Priya phone ko dekhthe rehgayi achanak usko kuch yaad aaya wo kisiko call kar rahithi
Priya: hello neha sorry to disturb u 
Neha : its OK batao kya kaam hai, ab tumhe kya challenge kiya
Priya: nehaaa pls mujhe tumhari help chahiye
Neha : OK kya chahiye,
Priya feeling shy : wo Mr.kapoor room kis taraf hai
Neha : hawww Priya tum toh ram se agey nikal gayi ho direct room 
Priya sternly: neha tumhara hogaya ho toh mein bholu,kal unko first good morning wish mein kehna chahthi hu bas ithna hai tum dimag math chalao ab mujhe batao unki room kahan par
Neha tells her about ram room
Next early morning:
Ram sleeping hugging pillow tightly, Priya at the doorway she looking at him and thinking
Priya : kithna cute hai sothehuye, she slowing goes to him keeps her hand in his hair and ruffles and smiles herself, she bends to his cheek and pecks and mimes good morning, she starts to move
Ram in sleep: good morning Priya, (Priya stunned,closes her eyes,turns towards him hearing his voice) yaar this is not fair, sapno mein kiss dethi ho. Kab shaadi hogi kab tum he hugs pillow tightly,Priya runs to her room
Here haldi preparations started, Priya ready for rasam but ram abhitak aaya nahi toh Kk sends neha and vikram,jab neha,vikram room pe gaye,ram abhibhi soraha tha
Vikram: lazy bones get up come on rise and shine,neha ram ke paas jaathi hai par ram ki cheek par Priya ki lipstick marks notice kiya
Ram gets up with a pouty face:pls yaar aaj kithna accha sapna tha Priya good morning kiss di u know kithna sweet hai, spoil karne ke liye aajathe ho dostho ho ya dushman
Neha and vikram laughs: stupid sapna nahi sachme dekhe gayi , I expected this when she called me yesterday and asking about ur room,very smart and pats his shoulder
Ram bahuth pyarse apni cheeks chooraha tha actually he is feeling her lips
Vikram: oye ab chalo shaadi nahi karni kya neeche Priya waiting tumhare haldi ke baad hi usko haldi lagegi ab pls jaldi Karo
After a while ram,neha,vikram comes down, haldi rasam starts,ram stealing glances 
Neha to Priya 
Neha : tum bhi kamnahi Priya seedha room mein jaakar kiss dediya, Priya ithna sharmarahi hai ki poora laal hogayi ekdum apple ki tarah,ram observing everything
Haldi rasam hogayi,ram aur Priya dono shaadi ke liye tayyar hogaye
Varmala ke liye khade hogaye dono,vikram ram ko uttane ki koshish ki but ram
Ram: vikram no ye kehke ram apna sarjhukaya Priya muskurathe huye varmala pehnadiya then ram bhi Priya ko varmala pehnadiya
Panditji mangalsutra pehnane ke liya,ram pehnadiya phir sindoor bhi,ab phere ke liye ram aur Priya khade hogaye, phere hogaye shaadi completed, ram aur Priya ko SR ke liye farm house bhejdiya sab ne 
In car Priya crying missing her family, ram consoles her,Priya drifted to sleep in middle way to farm house, ram don't want to disturb her sleep so he slowly takes her in arms and takes her to bedroom, total farm house decorated with ballons and roses and full bed decorated with flowers, ram lays her on the bed very carefully, Priya stirrs,cuddles herself, ram smiles at her antics,ram leaves the place after sometime Priya wakes up and open her eyes first she thought where she is by seeing the decoration she understand that today is her SPL night,she gets down from bed, she goes in search of Ram 
Its 7pm @farm.house lawn:
Ram laying on the couch closing his eyes,Priya calmly place her hand on his shoulder,ram open his eyes and get up from couch side hugs Priya
Ram: princess slept well,Priya nods her head,encircles ram with her hands,ram separates her,Priya go and fresh up , saaree dressing room mein hai aaj raath ke liye mein tumhe apni haathon se tayyar karunga and pecks on her forehead,Priya obeys his order as a good student she went to take baath, she comes out from dressing room with saree gifted by ram, wet hair water droplets falling from her hair, ram takes her to the mirror,
Priya: aap kya karerahe ho pls mein karungvermillonram keeps his finger on her lips
Ram: shh.shh. bilkul chup,he keeps kajal,bindi finally adores her with sindoor,ab dekho kithna sundar dikhrahi ho
Priya bends her head feeling shy, ram takes her in his hug, indono ki pyar se ye raath aur bhi sundar hogayi dono do jism ek jaan hogaye,har tarah se pathi,pathni bangaye 
Morning:
Priya pehle uttgayi,ram ko dekhne lagthi hai,ram bhi utt gaya, Priya turns her head she can't meet her eyes she feeling very shy
Ram hugs her:thank u Priya for coming in to my life
Priya hugs tightly: thanks for getting me in your life
After a while ram,Priya reached KM gruhapravesh also done
Both ram and priya enjoying in their love land
The end
Frnds thanks for ur likes 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Story, full of raya moments!!
Love the last part!!
Thanks 4 pm
And plz do write more!!!Edited by .pia_12. - 9 years ago
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part-6
wahh...fantastic update...
i was continuously smiling  while reading πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
beautifully written...
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superb update
beautifully written
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