"my first fanfic"continued by me(part 17) - Page 8

                            PART-15
uv,ashi,tia,amy,kabir,varun,smita,ranveer and chandni reach adi's home.ranveer presses the door bell and grandpa opens the door!
ranveer=namaste hum adi ke dost hain un se milne ke liye aaye hain
gp=aao aao beta andar aao
they all enter the house and sit on the sofa!
gp introduces himself to uv,ashi,tia and ranveer and they also introduce themselves to him!
gp=aao beta main tumhe adi ke room le jata hun!
in the room,adi is sitting on bed doing nothing and getting iritated with bunty's activities
gp and others enter his room and seeing chandni adi gets xcited!
gp=adi beta dekho tum se milne ke liye tumhare dost aaye hain tum sab baat karo main bahar hi baitha hun!
and he leaves!
uv=so dude how r u feeling now
adi=better!
amy(looking at chandni)=better kaise feel nahi karoge koi khaas jo samne hain
and every1 out there tries to act as if their throat is not clear(to tease chandni)and chandni gets embarassed
ashi(looking at bunty)=hey ye lil champ kaun hai
adi=ye mera cousin hai ye plaster aur vo ink se bhara face isike badolat tha
every1 out there laughs
ashi=okayyy so lil champ kya naam hai tumhara
bunty=i m bunty
ashi=hi i m anvesha aka ashi
they both shake hands!ashi picks him up and introduces him to every1!
ashi=bunty ye hain kabir
kabir=hello
ashi=ye hain smita aur ye amy
smita and amy=hi
ashi=ye hain varun
varun=hi
ashi=ye hain chandni
chandni=hello
ashi=ye hain ranveer and ye hain uv
ranveer and uv=hello
ashi=and ye hain tia aka timbo aka timblet aka papa's princess aka angel aka make-up box
every1 laughs and tia gets angry but still she politely talks to bunty
tia=hi bunty
bunty=hi tia aunty
tia=tia aaaa.....aunty
bunty=haan
tia=what
adi=tia dun mind bunty aisa hi hain bunty chal sorry bol tia aunty ko
tia=!!!!!!!adi!!!!!!!
adi=oh sorry just slip of tongue bunty sorry bol tia didi ko
bunty=sorry!ab se main aapko tia aunty nahi bolunga
tia=good boy
bunty=ab se main aap ko sirf aunty bolunga
every1 laughs.....
tia=!!bunty!!
tia is like running after him in the room only but ashi takes bunty's side and picks him up and defends him
ashi=timblet baccha hi to hai!dun act crazy!
chalo now u both patch up
tia and bunty patch up!and now they r like friends!and now bunty dun call tia ...aunty
after that they all like sit together and chat but bunty gets bore and leaves from there to play
uv=lets play a game
ashi=physco is room mein cricket khelne ka irada hai kya
uv=shut up wacko!main kisi indoor game ki baat kar raha hun!hmmmmmm lets play spin the bottle aka truth game
amy=gr8 idea
tia takes a bottle and spin it on the table!
the bottle points at uv
amy=i ll ask the question
uv=ok
amy=hmmmmm have u ever fallen in love
uv(looking at ashi)=yup
ashi gets lil embarassed
and every1 is like .........wowwwwwww
amy=ok ok ook with whom?
uv=hain ek ladki jo sabse unique hai
amy=kaun kaun
uv=hmmm meri mom!
and every1 laughs........and ashi takes a breath of relief
smita=ok now lets spin the bottle again
she spins the bottle and it points at chandni
amy=okayy now chandni se question kaun poochega
adi=main poochunga miss parandi se sawaal
chandni(confidently)=poocho
adi=soch lo miss parandi is sawaal ka jawaab dena shayd tumhare liye mushkil hoga
chandni=tum bas sawaal poocho
adi=thike agar yahi marzi hai to yahi sahi!kya mujhse pyar karti ho
chandni gets shocked to hear that!
adi=now tumhara jawaab
chandni=mujhe der ho rahi hai main ja rahi hun bye
she leaves after a while others also leave
adi(to himself)=is sawaal ka jawaab to main tum se le ke rahunga miss parandi!!!!!
Edited by srishti bhutani - 17 years ago

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... 👏 damn gud......n d bst part is dat 4m d nxt part d AC scenes vill start...n u seriously make dem seem realli cute shrishti 👏 👏

haila...........ab ayega mazaa. 😳 👏 👏 good. mazedaar scenes likho

😳 .Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow maza aa gaya yaar.well dun yaar. 👏

                        PART-16
Its a new day!chandni comes to the office but adi stops her way at the entrance!
chandni=adi mera raasta chodo!
adi=no ways!pehle mera jawaab!
chandni=is sawaal ka koi jawaab nahi hai
adi=jawaab to hai par tum de nahi rahi ho
just then kabir comes and says.......
kabir=adi leave her way yaar jane de use kyun bachpana kar raha hai
adi=mujhe to mera jawaab chahiye
chandni is just silent and somehow confused and a bit embarassed also
adi=ok let me simplify things for u!tumhare paas is jawaab ko dene ke liye is mahine ke end tak ka time hai!aur mahine ke end hone ke liye sirf aath(8)din baki hai
he sees his watch and says..............ur time strts now!!!!!!
and just goes away with kabir!!!!!!
just then after their exit amy comes and says....
amy=hey hi chandni!
chandni=hi
just then kamini comes and asusual in her rude tone she says.....
kamini=what the hell is this!yahaan tum dono kaam karne ke liye aati ho ya fir gossips karne aur hasne ke liye
go back to ur work
chandni-amy=yes ma'am
kamini goes from there amy says...
amy(in her mimic voice)=get back to ur work!!!!!uhhhh
after that they get back to their respective seats to attend the calls
chandni is thinking about what adi said!
then after a hour or two its break time every1 is in the canteen, amy is sitting and solving crossword chandni comes to her and sits with her
amy=hi chandni
chandni=hi
amy=chandni yaar ye 4 letter word kya banega!dekh iska clue hai
something very special,beautiful,and priceless!it happens but only one time
chandni doesn't reply she is lost in her own world!
amy shakes her ........chandni kya hua
chandni gets back to reality and says.........kuch nahi tum kya bol rahi thi!
amy=main bol rahi thi ki yahan kaunsa 4 letter word yaahan fit baithega clue is.......something very special,beautiful,and priceless!it happens but only one time
just then they hear a voice saying.......love........!its adi's voice!!!!!!
adi=the answer is love
and he strts staring at chandni
amy=oh ya !love ye mere dimag mein kyun nahi aaya!
chandni avoids adi's look and goes from there just then tia,uv and ashi also come!they stop chandni on her way
ashi=are chandni kahan ja rahi ho
chandni=vo main vo
ashi=duh uh!kya vo main vo chalo vahan amy aur adi baithein hai vahaan chalte hai!chaloooo
tia=ya chalo na chandni
ashi justs drag her by pulling her hand to amy and adi's table
ashi=hi
adi=hi aao na baitho!aur uv,ashi,tia kaisa chal raha tum sab ka music
uv=gr8!rocking!
just then ranveer comes and says.....
ranveer=tia hume aapko hub mein dhund rahe the aur aap yahaan hai!aapse ek kaam hai
tia=ya sure tia abhi aati hai
tia goes with ranveer in a deserted corner of the call centre
tia=haan ranveer kya kaam hai tumko tia se
ranveer=kya kaam hai!!!!!!for god sake kya kaaaaaaaaam haiiiiiii
tia=haan kya kaam hai
ranveer=rehne dijiye aap jaiye
tia=ok!
ranveer=ab ja bhi rahi hai
tia=ha to kya tumhe tia happy birthdaywish karen
ranveer=kya
tia=to tumhe kya laga tia itna important day bhul jayegi
tia knows that uv se lekar adi tak sabne tumhe wish kar diya hoga and tia hi ne tumhe sabse late wish kiya hoga but tia tumhe surprise dena chahti thi!
she forwards her hand and says....happy birthday
ranveer gives a sweet smile and says.....thnk u
and then tia takes out a red rose and beautifully wrapped box and hands it to ranveer
tia=for u
ranveer=tia is sabki
tia=bas haan ab rakh bhi lo
ranveer=thx
he opens the box and its containing a teddy bear and choclates
ranveer kisses tia's forehead and says....thnx again!!!
there in the canteen.......adi is whispering something in ashi's ear!
adi=tumhe pata hai aaj maine miss parandi ko problem mein daal diya vo month end ki deadline dekar
ashi laughs not so loudly but in a deliberate manner
ashi=next tumne kya plan kiya hai
adi=nothing bus month end tak main usko deadline ke baare mein kaise na kaise yaad dilata rahunga
ashi=duh uh vo to hai hi par aur kya karoge
adi=aur kya
ashi=lagta hai uv se physco ka tag tum par laga dena chahiye
adi=hey ashi adi rox mind it ok
ashi=what adi rox agar rock karna hai na to apna us par impression jamane ka kaam jari rakho!carry on with that
adi=realli
ashi=yup
and adi begins to think about it!

OMG!!!!!!!Its sooooooooooooooooo chweet shrishti...

seriously hats off 👏

u know vat, im hopin dat if der is a Season II Of IC, dey shud use ur fic 4 d storyline....

seriously.......its damn gud 👏 👏 👏

oh ya n d AC scenes r really damn gud too 😳 ...deyr realliiiiiii cute

yes, i can imagine the scenes and i am loving it. 👏 👏. the credit goes to you, you are doing a very good work. 😊

thxxxxxxx! 😛 i will write the next prt veryyyyyyy sooooooooon! 😃

Wonderful job srishti. If you can, could you possibly do some in English as my Hindi isn't that strong yet. Thanks.

                        PART-17
its evening time and adi is roaming around in his room!thinking about some ideas of impressing chandni!bunty is sitting on bed and just looking at him!just then their landline phone rings and its chandni on the line
bunty picks it up!
bunty=hello
chandni=hello!can i talk to aditya
bunty=ohhh just a minute
bunty informs adi about the same
bunty=bhaiya
adi=kya hai
bunty= kisi ladki ka phone hai aapke liye
adi=ladki ka
bunty=haaaaaan
adi=to is mein muh banane ka kya matlab hai idiot
vahaan se cordless de
bunty=ye lo
adi takes the phone and speaks to chandni
adi=hello
chandni=hello adi main chandni bol rahi hun
adi=chandni!ek minute
adi keeps the phone on hold and tells bunty to go out
adi=ab tu yahi tika rahega kya bhaag ja yaahan
bunty=kyun
adi=jata hai ya
bunty=ja raha hu ja raha hun dekhna ek din mera day bhi aayega
adi=haan haan thike stupid
bunty goes from there and sits in the living room from the other landline he dials the no.of his girlfriend
there in adi's room adi again again speaks to chandni and somehow strts flirting on the phone
adi=ya chandni bolo aaj hume kaise yaad kiya
chandni=ab main kuch kaam ki baat karu
adi=kaam ki baat!!!!mere sawaal ka jawaab dena hai kya
chandni=mujhe kisi ke sawaal ka koi jawaab nahin dena
adi=to fir
suddenly there is a cross-connection between the landlines of living room and adi's room!so indirectly adi is now talking to bunty's girlfriend bubly and bunty is now talking to chandni !
chandni=mujhe aaj ke din ki chutti chahiye
bunty=haan bubly kal main tumhe apne ghar mein dvd pe superman returns zaroor dikhayunga kal school bunk kar
lenge kya farak padta hai
adi=kya tumhe superman returns dekhni
bubly=haan aur choclate ice-cream bhi khaani hai
adi=what
chandni=adi mujhe chutti chahiye aaj ki aur tum picture dekhne ki baat kar rahe ho
bunty=haan fikar mat karo phir hum soft-drink bhi peeyenge
chandni=kya??????
adi=chandni r u ok!
bubly=are fir to hum tumhare ghar par video games bhi khelenge
adi=!!!!!!!video games!!!!!!!!
chandni=adi tumhe lagta hai mental hospital mein jaana hoga! u r sick!disgusting
and she puts the phone down
adi=hello chandni helloooooo
and his phone also dissconects
adi thinks aloud.........video games,soft drink,choclate ice-cream and super man returnssssss
confused adi goes to living room and sits on the sofa
and thinks aloud........ye chandni ko kya ho gaya
bunty who was already sitting there says.................lagta hai cross connection ho gaya tha
adi=kya
bunty=haan tabhi mujhe lag raha tha ki meri girlfriend bubly baar baaar chutti kis baat ki maang rahi thi
adi gets angry and pulls bunty's ear
adi=abhi teenager bhi nahi huya hai ki teri girlfriend bhi hai !!!!!!!bunty aur babli!!!!!!!
bunty=ahhhhh kaan chodo varna main dadu ko bolunga
adi lets off his ear and says........tabhi main sochu ki chandni ko superman returns dekhne ki kaunsi dhun sawaar ho gayi
bunty=ab jo huya galti se huya sorry!iske compensation mein main ek idea deta hun
adi=kaisa idea
bunty=chandni didi aapki girlfriend haina
adi=haan to
bunty=to un par impression jamane ka idea hai mere paas
adi=kya
bunty=birthday celebrate karo apna aur unhe dinner pe invite karo
adi=kya par mera birthday to ho chuka!
bunty=tab chandni didi yahaan thi
adi=nahi to
bunty=to bas birthday manao impression jamaao
bye! bye!
he leaves from there and adi begins to think
there in the call centre chandni is sitting with amy in the canteen!she is really angry
chandni=ek to vo bakwaas kar raha tha aur mujhe aaj aana bhi pada kyunki usn e chutti nahi di uhhhhhh
amy=cool down yaar zaroor koi confusion rahi hogi
just then adi comes and apologises
adi=actually cross-connection ho gaya tha us waqt sorry for that
chandni=its ok!
amy=ok now both of u be friends again and shake hands
c'mmon now
they both shake hands and patch up
on the other hand of ic where every1 hangs out yuvi is talking to sid
uv=dude what shud i do
sid=now what can i say dude
uv=u have to say!mujhe ashi ko propose karna hai!but the question is kaise
sid=i think tumhe use ek rose dena chahiye aur propose karna chahiye
uv=sid dude ye kaunsa 1960's ka propose karne ka tareeka suggest kar rahe ho!she is not asha parekh she is ashi anvesha bannerji ray!use propose karne ke liye to koi wackiest idea sochna hoga
just then they see ashi and tia fighting
tia=u punk tumne dare bhi kaise kiya tia ko rakhsh raksh
ashi=rakshasni timbo
tia=ya whatever kehne ki!u know wat tia ahuja hona aisi vaisi baat nahi hai!
ashi(in her mimic voice)=tia ahuja hone aisi vaisi baat nahi hai!cut the crap and shut ur mouth u make up box
uv and sid come and both try to control tia and ashi's anger
uv=countdown tia
tia=what cowntdown
sid=ashi plz control ur anger
tia and ashi are still fighting and ashi angrily says
ashi=now i will slap u timbo shut ur mouth
tia=no tia will not shut her mouth do whatever u can
ashi is just about to slap tia but tia puts her head down and by mistake ashi slaps uv!
uv=wackooooooooooo!
he is also about to slap ashi but ashi puts her head down and by mistake uv slaps sid
sid=ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dude
just then ranveer comes and tries to settle down things!he also apologises in the front of the employees who were disturbed and asks them to go back where they were
ranveer=tia ashi aap dono to second standard ke bacchho ki tarha ladti hai!tia say sorry to ashi and ashi aap bhi sorry kahiye
tia=tia is sorry
ashi=i m also sorry
ranveer=gud ab ashi aap uv ko bhi sorry kahiye
ashi=i m sorry physco
uv=its ok!
ok now ab hum sab dost hai alright!
sid is still in pain
ranveer=sid hum to aapko bhul hi gaye uv chaliye aap sid ko bhi sorry kahiye
uv=sorry yaar sid
sid=its ok dude
and now all of them again become friends!!!!!!!!
ps:trina the masala of the fic comes when u write in hindi only but still i will try to write most of the prt of the fic in english so dun worry 😊