"my first fanfic"continued by me(part 17)

hey guyz!

"my first fanfic" was a fic by a very old member of this forum aditya_rikh but he didn't complete this fic !day b4 yesterday i just went through this fic and have to say its awesum!something very different!so i was interested in continuing this fic so i just pmed him and he has given me the permission!

this fanfic is a remix--fusion--india calling fanfic!obviously the original theme of this fic is by aditya!so a huge round of applause for him personally by me coz this idea is awesum!i hope all of u r interested as earlier when aditya strted off with this fic!but still if u all dun like the masala of remix in this fic then i won't continue it so do write ur views!

here is the indroduction of remix for those who didn't watch it earlier and the first part of this fic by our old member aditya_rikh!

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now a brief
introduction of remix to all of you who doesn't know much about it.
those who know can continue from the next paragraph.
it is astory set on the backdrop of a school for rich but scholarships
are also offered to the poorer students .four protagonists (ashi,yuvi,tia,
ranveer)play in a band called remix ,ASHI daughter of a super star single
mom.YUVI-son OF A POLITICIAN, is a music freak, loves ashi.
TIA-plays a self obsessed teenager who is caring about her friends
and a total romantic she loves ranveer.RANVEER-possibly the best
looking guy in the school ,his character is also a total romantic,loves tia
but just can't get along with her courtesy some ppl,comesfrom a poor family
there are other characters which obviously involves students of the school(maurya high)
now the charactersin my story will be VRINDA ,friend of ashi sweetest girl you'll ever see
(playedby the same girl who is playing smita in I.C. ) .MEHER and PRI -tia's angels
these girls play the part of tia's friends.meher -quite a beautiful girl
who carries herself very well.pri is an overweight girl-tia's best friend.SIDD
-a rank joker ,is dating meher and a popular dude in school.best friend
of yuvi.VARUN-has changed in the story from a nerd to a stud,ranveer's friend
LATIKA-principal's dughter and a total loser kind of vamp.MR. JAMWAL-
principal of the school and latika's father.GLORIA-p.a to mr jamwal.
now i'm starting the story.everything in (       ) will be things whichppl think
in their minds.

       the story starts in the khanna mansion...............
vishesh,dadaji and adi on the breakfast table.dadaji is seen saying
something to adi in actions.
VISHESH-dadaji ,yeh kya khichdi pakate rehten hain aap log haan,hoon adi
kya baat hai,kabhi,kabhi apne bhai se bhi apne dil ki baatein kar liya karo.
ADI-bhaiya,aap bhi na yeh dil wil ki baat and all that ,yeh adi ka style
nahin hai,yeh ityadiyon ka style hain,you know na adi rocks.
DADAJI-haan ,vishesh hum toh bas soch rahe the ki kyon na aaj sab bahar dinner
karein,bahu ko bhi kaam se thodi fursat mil jayegi.
      meanwhile kamini enters ....
KAMINI-dadaji aap bhi na bilkul bacchon jaisi baatein karte hain ,aapko malum
hai na office mein kitna kaam hai and.....
VISHESH -haan dadaji ,aur maine kucch guests ko bhi bulaya haiaaj raat ki
shift mein.
adi,kamini aur dadaji vishesh ko dekhte hue ek saath =kise

vishesh-yahi kuch maurya high ke students hai jo call centre ke upar project report bana rahe hai

adi=oh c'mmon bhaiya ab vo bacche aayenge india calling mein nt happening at all!

kamini=darling tumhe mujhe batana chahiye tha

vishesh=are aap sab itna over react kyun kar rahe hain sirf dus bees students hi to aa rahe hai

chandni is getting ready 4 office

bg=chandni puttar vo tu doodh vale ka bill bhar dena

c=bhar dungi bg!accha bg aap jab mumbai aai hai tab se aap sirf hisaab-kitaab hi kar rahi hai!kahi ghumne nahi gayi

bg=lo kar lo gal tu kabhi lekar hi nahi gayi

c=to thike kal chalte hai juhu beech

bg=aaaho ji

and then both ghumaofy their parandis in the air

there in maurya canteen tia is talking to her angels

tia=angels tia can't tell u ki tia kitni worried hai!ek to tia ko headache ho raha hai aur upar se tia ke dark circles ho gaye hai kyunki kal tia thik se soi bhi nahi

meher=to tum inhe jaldi se thik kar lo tia kyunki aaj to hume call centre mein jana hai

pri=haan tia aaj to hume jaana hai bahut mazaa aayega

tia=gosh tia can't understand ki tum dono us tacky se call centre mein jaane ke liye itna desperate kyun ho rahe ho!call centre ka naam hi itna non-happening hai aur vaise bhi pri vahan tumhe khane ke liye kuch nahi milega

Edited by srishti bhutani - 17 years ago

wow remix n ic's fusion....2 of my fav shows......sounds really intrestin....

n a damn gud start 👏 ......hats of 2 both u n aditya 👏 👏 👏

n d line "and both ghumaofy their parandis in the air"😆😆 was jus tooooooo funny😆

plzzz continue d fic shrishti.....im sure ull rock it!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by crazy_heenz - 17 years ago

it's really very intresting plz plz continue bt i hav a request plz ADI CHANDINI ko alag mat karna na.they shud b 2gther for ever n ever.

d 1st part is gr8 shristi 👏 remix nd ic 2gether 😳 😃 wow,definately a new concept 😳 pleej cont asap.

thx sayanti but the credit of first prt must go to aditya_rikh as he is the real writer! 😊

yeah please continue...i read what i wanted to see onscreen...very nice.. 👏 👏

its really nice
remix n ic 2gether is a gr8 concept
pls cont soon

now srishti u must cont it.it's public demand. 😉

ok guyz here i m continuing the fic with my own imagination! 😊
                              PART-2
maurya scene...
uv is in his room and getting ready and he asks sid.....
uv=dude tum ready ho na
S=yup dude i m ready
uv=vaise jumbo ne kitne baje bulaya tha hall mein!
S=10 o'clock oh gosh abhi to 10:10 ho rahe hai
uv=oh shit we have to rush dude c'mmon
S=ya ya chalo
and they both rush to the hall and join the crowd of students who were goingto call centre!jumbo(principal)is making an announcement

J=ok i hope all of u r ready to go!i repeat aap sab vahan maurya ki bus meinjayenge aur vapas aapko maurya mein hi chod diya jayega and jo students hostel mein nahi rehte vo sabhi maurya se apne ghar apni vehicle par jayenge!aap sab vahan lagatar 10 din ke liye jayenge night shift mein!is that clear!
everyone begins to talk
tia=oh gosh!night shifts mein to jag na padega aur late night jagne se tia ke dark circles bhi ho jayenge1oh tia's GOD help!!!!!
ashi=bhaggu se help mangne ki kya need hai timbo main tumhari help kar deti hun mera sleeping bag lelo!
tia=oh shut up u punk!yahan tia itni serious hai aur tumhe mazaak sujh raha hai!
meher=don't worry tia maine ye cream le li hai isse tumhare dark circles nahi honge!
tia=how thoughtful!thx babes!
meher=its ok tia!
jumbo=silence!!!!!!i repeat is that clear!
every1=yes sir!
jumbo=ok then as i call out ur names plz head towards outside!
TIA AHUJA,RANVEER SASODIYA,MEHER,PRIYANKA,VARUN,NAKUL,SIDDHARTH,YUVRAJ DEV,ANVESHA BANNERJI RAY,VRINDA,AMAN,MARIYA and then he took some more names..and RHEA thats it!i hope all of u will have a nice experience out there!

these maurya students enter the call centre and report at the reception!meher beginsto talk with tia..
M=tia this call centre is really cool isn't it
T=true babes call centre itna bhi tacky nahi hai jitna tia socha tha!
receptionist jenny informs vishesh about the same!and vishesh tells aditya to brief the maurya students!
aditya goes to them and introduce himself!
A=ok every1 i m aditya!aditya khanna!but all of u can call me adi!welcum to india calling!mere elder brother vishesh khanna ne mujhe bheja hai aap sab ko brief karne ke liye in short aapko ye call centre dikhane ke liye aur samjhane ke liye ki yahan ke employees kaise kaam karte hai!so follow me!
he takes them to the hub area where emplyees attend calls and how they strike deals and all !but while explaining all this aditya's mind was sumwhere else he was looking sumwhere else and tia observes this . later he takes them to canteen area and the place where employees hang out!then its break time!
aditya=ok guyz its break time u all can have something in the canteen!
both the employees and the students r in the canteen!
tia,ranveer,uv and ashi r sitting together!
uv=i tell u guyz aditya is reeli cool!
R=haan vanna unhone hume bahut acche se attend kiya!kyun tia!
tia=ranveer tum thik keh rahe ho par
ashi=par kya timbo1
tia=tia ko aditya little bit strange laga vo jab hume xplain kar raha tha to vo continuously ek jagah stare kar raha tha!
and ashi,tia,ranveer and uv strts thinking about the same!

ps:every1 i mean all my ic and remix pals plz keep reading this fic!everytime i will try to make this fic more and more interesting!

cool
awesome cont soon
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