REFLECTION. (MDT series FF) part 2 added - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM


ok then .
But you din't comment on story.how was it?

as usual it was nyc.. but plz contiues ur rest stories also..  specially 

LEFT ALONE (OS) 

 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Mu on the way...good update vikas
loved itt
wonder...m sure ishu will not ask directly like raman didnt ask in the show
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
part 3

Scene starts with Ishita remembering Raman giving money for Saraswathi.She don't know her name but she know what she is .

Ishita is crying as Raman cheated on her.

Ishita "Raman aiseykaisey kar saktey hain.Main janthey hun hummara kabhe waisa rishtha nahen thaa lekin kissey doosree ladkee ke y pass jaakar kyaa shabith karna chathey hain who."

Ishita "Unko mere jaroorath nahen hain.I won't let this happen."

Ishita was completely upset and broken over the fact Raman went for anotehr lady to satisfy his needs.

Then next day.Ishita was ot speaking to Raman.

Then she hears Raman mobile ringing and Raman sleeping so she attends the call and to her horror it is from saraswathi.

Saraswathi "Raman sir  ney mujhye phon ekarney bola thaa."

Same time Raman wakes up and  seeing  his  mobile in Ishita's hand he get angry.He grabs it from hewr hand and goes separate  to attend the call.

Ishita was shocked over it .Ishita goes near him to clear thing but she could hear Raman telling some address.

Raman "House no. 1/1,Mokshagni Nagar.Jyaada ghar nahen hain uss area mey.Sabsey bada ghar hain uss area mey.Tum waha jaon main udhar milunga tumsey."

Raman sees Ishita near him and cut's the call.

Raman  "Koi call attend karthey huen alag aayan isska mathlab yeh hain kee ussko privacy chahiyen.Udhar bhee peechey karny ka kyaa mathalab."

Ishita "Raman mujhsey bhee privacy."

Raman "Tum sirf Ruhi kee maa hon." After a little pause "Hummara koi rishtha nahen . merey zindagee mey gussney ka koi  zaroori nahen hain."

Raman leaves telling this.After Raman left for office.

Ishita then goes to Mrs Bhalla ."Mummyji   Mokshagni nagar mey hummara koi ghar hain kyaa."

Mrs Bhalla "Shaayad nahen hain.Raman ney mujhey kabhee bathaaya nahen."

Ishita  then calls Mihir and asks him about same.Hedon't know either.

Ishita is upset.

Then she calls Mani.

Ishita "Mani ek help chaahiyen."

Mani "Kyaa.?"

Ishita "Ek address bathathee hun who gahr kisska hain patha karnaa hain."

Ishita tells the address and cuts the call.

Ishita leaves to clinic and she was very tensed over turn of events.

Ishita "Raman mujhsey kuch kaisey chupa saktey hain.Mujhesey chodo Mummyiji ko bhee kuch nahen bathaaya."

She gets Mani's call confirming it is Raman's house.

Ishita is upset and decides to go back to home .

Ishita calls Raman "Raman aap kahan pey hon?"

Raman "kyon?Office mey."

Ishita goes to Raman's office only to know that he din't come to ofice .

She knows where Raman would be and decide to confront him there.

She reaches there and she could see Raman was sitting outside and speaking to S.

Ishita could hear Raman's voice.

Raman "I know bachey key liyen insaan kya kya kar ssaktha hain."

Raman "Merey bhee do bachey hain merey pehlee biwi sey."

Raman "Those were my most beautiful moments of my life.I will never get them back."

Raman "Koi nahen samjhega merey andhar kyaa bheethee hain jab unhey yaad kartha hun.Main jee bhee unkey liyen ."

S "Aap pehley biwi bol rahen hain.Mathlab aapka dubaara shaadi huan hain."

Raman "Han merey beti key liyen.Ussko ek maa kee jaroori thee."

S "Beta ."

Raman "Merey saath naehn rehthaa.Issliyen main jaatha hun kee bachey sey door rehnaa kaisa hain.I can understand you I will definitely help you." As she hugged him on comfort.

Ishita comes aside to make a call.Ishita sees Raman coming toward her and goes aways from there crying.

Rama n calls some police officer and tells him  about kidnap of Saraswathi's son and few more kids in that area suspecting human trafficking .

Ishita din't hear any of phone conversation.

Ishita is crying profously in her car remembering Raman telling  that he cant be father again.

Ishita "Raman aap kaisey keh sakthey hain.Aap  bhee jaantheyb hain yeh baath merey liyen kitney important hain.Iss sach ko main badal nahen sakthee."

Ishita "Lekin aap yeh baath sabko kasiey batha sakthey hain.Raman you can't do this."

Ishita "Raman aapkey liyen mujhsey jyaada uss ladkee important hain."

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
nice.
perfect title.
thanks

as usual it was nyc.. but plz contiues ur rest stories also..   unnamed 2Edited by ishra123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
i knw dis is a trady versn bt i lik dis one very much...
seems lik intrstng turns ahead...
updte nxt wen u get tym...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
omg...mu is just increasing...
now m wondering if next step will be towards increasing this mu only or there will be some sort of clarification also...
nyc update vikas
this tym update sooner
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Read all 3 parts superb yar
Totallly different and intersting
Next part kab