OS-Talli Love 2... "Yeh tune kya kiya" ~ NEW PART Up on 20 - Page 12

Originally posted by: SouLScOREr

Awesome

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

super hot n romantic update. sardi me bhi garmi ka ehsaas. too gud yaar. loved priya a lot. her teasing, her fear of loosing ram again and finally surrendering to rams love. superbly written pl continue.

Originally posted by: akilagoud2

superb part
continue soon
thanks for pm

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Originally posted by: rags06

Lovely romantic update😛😛

Waiting for NeVik Raya confrontation...

Please continue soon...

Thanks for PM😛😛😛

Originally posted by: Huma.Malik

Superb update
Loved it ❤️
Plzzz continue soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Sorry yaar ..i guess I amlast one ..but aready i told u ..being my late</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">But what i can say about the update ..this one the best till date written by u ...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">just excellent yaar.. already i read 2 times.. Romantic...and also eternal ..like our raya ..just awesome..</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">thank u for continuing it..now waiting for the next and hope the last part will be rocking again like this ..</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">thank u for ur pm</font>

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Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Finally I read

It was amazing Leena..very very beautifully written

loved each and every line.

Lovely scene between Ram and Priya.

this part reminds me of Raya consummation...lovely.

First Ram tries to tease her but then he becomes scared Priya will misunderstood everything...But finally Woh Priya hi thi jo Ram ko dara rahi thi😆.

They ended up in another love making😳.

Vikram aur neha aa toh rahe hai Ram ke new ladylove ko dhekne😆...Nevik ko dekhne mein maza aayega jab unhe pata chalega ki woh aur koi nahi Priya hi hai😆

Precap seems interesting...Pihu Raya ko ek saat dekh leti hai...lets see what her reaction

thanks for continuing Leena...thank you so much. Please show office scene too

thanks for PM and very very sorry for late commenting.

Originally posted by: ...RamonaG...

Awesome part leena ❤️
sorry for the late comment n thanks fir the pm plz continue soon :)

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Sorry for late reply leena

superb part asusaul

romantic and funny too

lol i was so enjoyed reading , i want my kurtha back abhi ki abhi😆

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Cute_Saakshii12

Waiting 4 the update!!!
Plzz continue soon!!!