Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Note on pg 120

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anjubua

@anjubua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Brilliant as always, liked the rescue mission, operation caged tiger
it's was written beautifully. Glad Arnav was able to save shiva he's a good
soul who have ended up with bad crowd, he should get well soon, I think
he will be Arnav's pet project, he will help him lead a good life.
So glad they have finally reunited just waiting for the conversation and how
they lay their souls bear in front if each other.
The last line was poetic amazing , thanks for the update, waiting to read more
👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

awesome awesome and simply awesome ...beautifully written...all required emtions r right there in the update :)...ufff i loved the way u have described her painting...beauty indeed...

whole commando action ...superb...he saved the boy ...wow...in short he saved the future of many :)...

the craving to meet his life...home ...all written beautifully ...loved it to the core...and finally he said "khushi"...ufff amazing

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Oh my god!! don't tell me its over..please don't...I don't want this story to end...its such a beautiful...never even for a moment I felt a lapse in the flow...such a beautiful story presented so eloquently!! I loved the way Arnav bought Shiv home..its sad to see that the tribal wife lost her husband for his foolishness but he saved Shiv and Arnav's reaction to Sushil's death touched me...Daadi's dialogue bought tears to my eyes and Arnav's mother finally bend a little...small mercies!! Finally Arnav and Khushi start their life together!! I loved your Arnav...he was simply the best...And Aman, he was the good soul friend one who would to have...Khushi, Payal and Anjali...what should I say - strong, bold ladies who dealt the cards given to them smartly and wisely!! Khushi was inspiring!!!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

beautiful update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Mind blowing update.

Finally the caged tiger is out. Loved all the rescue process you have written. Awesome.

Loved the way arnav try to tell her what is in his heart, till he come and confess her personally. And Khushi got the massage. You have written brilliantly about her inner feelings, fear of losing arnav, tension, and her eagerness to be with arnav as soon as possible.

Aman is an important part in all this. Without him nothing was possible. Arnav was right that Aman and Khushi are the one who will fight for him and for his safety.

One thing I loved about arnav is that he don't break his promise. He took care of shiva and make sure he is treated well. And he has in his mind that he has to do something for those people.

Can't wait to see him in action.

For now I just want arnav and Khushi to meet and hug. Cried their heart out to each other.

God we have to wait for another week.

Thanks for brilliant update and pm. Loved it.

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

what a beautiful update...and what a sight it will be to see his love standing there in front of proof of his love...literally no words needed...and we are little bit sad that this wonderful story nearing its end...but these two characters of your story are etched in our mind...i always felt blessed the day i found your story ..i think you had already updated four chapter when i found it and i would say a what a wonderful find...loved this story with bottom of my heart ..thank you

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Swetha Jangala

@swethaj

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

AWESOME!!!!!
Loved the update!! Mind blowing!!
Can't wait to know what happens next...
I'm glad the couple will now have some happy time together after all the trials they've gone through...
Please update soon!!
Wafting waiting waiting!
And thanx for the pm!!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Operation successful & finally he's rescued. It was very heartwarming to see Arnav's concern for the boy.

Arnav couldn't have chosen a better way to express his feelings & Khushi's overwhelmed reactions are a proof of it.
He has all his life to give her verbal assurance & confess his love.

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kritash

@kritash

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#199

excitement at its top, then suddenly you fell on the ground on face. it was like that.
i was very happy and wanted to read their reactions, but you played this game and delayed the excitement.
so bad but awesome story, wonderful narration, superb plot, made eager to read more.
wonderful job.

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cineraria

@cineraria

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Picking up the Roomaal.

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I seriously am in a KBA state. Which explains my inability to pick up my roomaal and unres. I thought for a long while, in the last update, I really saw through my eyes all that had happened in the lives of these two happening in the flash back mode.

From their first meet where an angry Khushi tells him to marry her if he cares so much about her well being. And Arnav indeed proposing a marital alliance albeit to aid his political mileage. And the months that follow. The gradual build of their relationship, from tiffs to teasing, to trust, to friendship, to love. Just how beautifully and in so vivid detail have you carved two entwined lives in words. 👏 👏

As I type this, I really do so with a heavy heart for we have reached the final juncture with Arnav and Khushi of Hopes and Ambitions. I'll miss this story terribly, oh hell, I am definitely reading this all over again.

The previous chapter being testimony to their love and aptness of the title. If Khushi represented Hope and Arnav represented Ambition, the word semantics not withstanding, they meant the each other. Khushi's hopes were for Arnav, with Arnav and his ambition was her.

As he finds her standing opposite to her portrait, moon light illuminating them, this scene took my breath away. It's placid, serene and yet taut with anticipation. I loved it. Loved every bit of your writing. You are awesome behen. 👏

Edited by cineraria - 10 years ago

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