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Originally posted by: Radhikerani
I'm Really Happy That I've Been Able To Satisfy You...But No, This Isn't The End, There Are A Few More Incidents To That...Even I Don't Want To End It So Soon, But You See, It's Mahabharat And Not Krishna-Jeevan-Katha, So I Need To Be Permanently Back At Hastinapur And Kurukshetra. Who Knows, maybe Radha Will Come In Again After The War...And I Do Think That I've Almost Ignored Radha In This Chapter, I Don't Know Why Or How ! 😭
Pink: Oh really? 😃 wow it will be so lovely dear
Green: Yes I also felt so, Gopis were more highlighted than Her. I want a total Radha-Krishna sweet romance 😳 hope you will write one 😃 I am so happy to know that Raas is not the end rather a start of this love story 😊
& yes I know you have to return to Hastinapur, but Pandavas are still in Drona's class so until Kansa vadh nothing much to show there I think. I have a suggestion. Show Ekalavya's thumb cutting, bird-eye test, Karna's demand for Brahmastra & departure, Arjun's success in the crocodile test & achieving Brahmashira one by one in each chapter, along with Radha Krishna divya prem 😊 that may help you, I think. Those are very short facts & would not take much space. Before rangbhoomi, Kansa vadh will be hopefully covered, what say? [I know how difficult it is to handle both Krishna Leela & MB story in a parallel way, but you are handling it so well 👍🏼]
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