Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Read both parts in a go ... Try to pm 😉 please ..
Ok coming to the story ..1st part you enraged the Raya fans with a romantic escastisy between Ram and priya and the way you narreted is just sizzling hot ..and the realisation dawned later on she is Rajat's fiance 😆 But i loved the intro ..coming to 2nd part ..wohhh so You brought priyas entire past with in few lines how she agreed for marrige with Rajat and you gave a correct sentence to him 😆 ..so priya landed in Rams home finally and these two tangled in friendship and now it turned out a royal love affiar ..Oh my this was going to be beautiful ...keep coming them more ..and Romance should be main asset 😉😉😉 😆Good going
Thanks for reading and commenting on each part. RaYa's romance is always sizzling since they became friends first their love is not only physical...in the next chapter that's what I wanna attempt to put across that how when friendship changes to love how physically too one's response changes ( my personal experience with my hubby ;)
Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan
yeah i loved to read on RaYai think i missed this as No pms 😆 .. i was being busy in my office work so couldnt able to locate new ffs or OS ...
Why not I comment if the story is attractive 😉 like our RaYa , And the writer should get encouragement by likes and comments only . But in this BALH forum I have seen many silent readers they dont even like nor comment ,Thats the problem with the readers and they want updates asap 😆 Im not blaming anyone but saying truth ..coming to story ..Yes I agree with you their love story is not only physical it statred with friendship than exchanged into true raltionshiphayeee aaapki personal experience mixing than have to read definately yaar ..common post your next update ASAP 😆
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