VeeBhav SS : Lethal Captivation...(Ch 5 & 6 -17) - Page 10

NainaSM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

vaibhavi omg

veer ne kyaa kiya ye

veer and vaibhavi scene cute

ye kyaa ? vaibhavi kaha he ?

veer ne bohot galat kiya

continue soon

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882716

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Veer is a singer now n there is no trace of Vaibhavi..
Veer feeling guilty for his mistake...
Cont Sooon
Thanks for the PM

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Areesha

@Areesha566

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

part 2

mujhe iska pm nahi mila *pout*

phir bhi comment kar rahi hoon *toung*

hawww veer you monster, you trick vaibhavi

natasha ke papa ne uska sath nahi diya, but kabir is ready for every challenge *good boy to be papa*

hmmm may be veer in not that big wala monster, but woh chotu wala monster toh hai

what happen to veer?

mrs Rao (woh kon hai?) called vaibhavi's mama, but vaibhavi waha pohonch gayi or baat taal di *uff baal baal bachi*

very nice part
going to read 3 one
ta ta

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Areesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

me back now time to comment on
part 3

wow

veebhas nok jhok was just amazing

waah kia baat hai, vaibhavi ne veer ki chal usi pe maar di

khud media ko paper leak ki baat bata kar heroin ban gayi *way to go
girl*

veer's dialogue ''shit yeh kia hai.. Ya toh mei faint hota hoon ya yeh larki''
was aweseome

i was right veer waqi hi ek bara wala monstor hai

i hate him

i wish vaibhavi usy kabhi maaf na kare

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ranibowsprimkls

@Satrangi_Curls

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

awesome update dear

loved it

the college part was written beautifully

poor Vaibhavi.. how could they do this with her

now what's this??? A leap of 8 years??

where's Vaibhavi??

her mom died.. :'(

Veer is finding himself guilty..

Nats n kabir married.. having a daughter..n one more coming soon ;)

precap is really interesting

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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ashmi

@ashmifebaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

awesome update dear...

vaibhavi run away from her friends...

and veer become singer

waiting for next update...

continue soon...

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Awesome twist. Natasha and Kabir together with a baby and another on the way. Vaibhavi missing and her mother no more - all because of Veer's stupid, egoistic and thoughtless action. Veer is not the same anymore and is repentant but it's of no use now. Please continue soon.

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Replies :)

@ Shivi : Veer... I know... usne bohot hi bura kiya hai... but don't you worry... usko iski saza milegi... haan... 8 saal ho chuke hai... toh obvi na ki Nats aur Kabir ne shadi kar li hai...

@ Naina : Glad you loved it dear! Veer would be punished indeed...

@ Nikita : Glad you loved it dear! Yep... the guilt factor would slowly seep in...

@ Areesha : Sorry chutki... don't know how I missed out on u! Am glad u luvd both the parts! Haan... Veer toh is a monster... Vaibhavi... let's see woh kya kehti hai...

@ Neha : Yep... a leap of 8 years... after what happened in the college... she could barely remain there anymore na... Haan... one more coming soon😉 Am glad you loved this... really!

@ Ashmijoseph : Thanks dear... stay tuned...

@ Devangana : I am so glad you loved it truly!!! Thanks dear!

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