ROSID FF: Love is Inseparable UPD 44,46,47(2), 48(4),49 Completed FF - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetal1979

 i totally agree with justi this ff has still lots of potential dear and i m happy u continue the ff nice update dear waiting for nxt update and u know that romance with lots of emotion is my weakness 😊 


Yes Sheetal dear.  Reopening this FF now.  WIll update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Friends,
Happy for your valuable feedbacks.  As requested i am reopening this FF again.  

This revised updates will start from Part 28 i.e. after Siddhant see ROli in the office of client.

Lets see how the story goes in the revised direction.

Hope you all like it and provide your feedback for the same.  

I am sure that none of the update from 28 to 31 will be same in the revised FF & going to take a new turn entirely...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 28 (Revised)

Siddhant was restless the whole night.  

He was unable to believe whether he saw Roli in that office.

Siddhant remembered her how he saw in that office that day.

She was looking like a middle class girl with glass bangles, simple ear ring and forehead filled with Sindoor and Mangal sutra was on her neck.

Siddhant remembered she neither wear mangal sutra nor the sindoor when they meet in the court.

Siddhant started thinking what it really means?

Is the remarried to someone in the middle class?

Siddhant was thinking, ROli how come you can do this?  You know i have been waiting for you only all these years then how you can do this?

He was feeling upset.

Siddhant to himself: Roli, i never thought you will take steps away from me to this level.  I did had hope all these days that we will get together some or the other day. But you completely disappointment me Roli...

Siddhant after spending a sleepless night with all these thoughts got ready to office the next day and went to office.

He was unable to concentrate in the work even.

Siddhant throughts were around Roli.  He was pulled towards her by heart.

Siddhant was thinking, Oh God!  Why i am behind her when she did not think about me and join hands with someone else.

No his efforts were in vain.

All these days he was passing with a positive push that she will be coming back to him on some day.  But now his hope is crushed & his heart is broken.

When his PA tried to talk to him something he replied very rude while PA was wondering what happend to him suddenly.

Then later Siddhant realised he misplaced his anger and asked sorry to him.

Finally by evening, Siddhant get into the car and started his journey, but unknown to him he was driving towards the client office and he stopped with a sudden brake outside that building.

After few minutes, Roli came out of the building.

Siddhant got down from the car parking it somewhere and followed her.

Roli was going with her colleague talking to her.

Siddhant was following her few feet behind.

Friend: Roli, you said Gitesh birthday is coming.  Did you purchased dress for him?

Roli: Yes.  I purchased last Sunday.  He was very happy on seeing the new dress.

Friend: You love him so much right.

She asked seeing Roli's excited face on talking about Gitesh..

Roli: Yes.  He is my life.  Then why not.  I love him so much.

Siddhant was shocked hearing this and stopped where he was.

He was unable to believe his ears...

Siddhant was thinking, Roli what you mean by those talks?  I know how many times you told me that i am your love & i am your life.  Now same dialogues for that Gitesh...  I cant believe.  

Siddhant was very upset.  He went back to his car and started his journey towards his house.

He was completely broken now.

The doubt he was having whether she remarried is now confirmed..

Siddhant did not feel like having dinner too.

He went to bed which was failing to give comfort and sleep to him...




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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 29 (Revised)


Siddhant was very upset for the past 2 days and he was unable to even concentrate on the work.

He avoided speaking to anyone as he fear he may misplace the anger and shout at them.

Siddhant instructed his PA to cancel all the appointments or meetings.



It was a saturday..

Siddhant thought of going somewhere for a change.

In the college days, he used to sit in the park near his room which used to give pleasure to him.  That fresh air, green atmosphere which he likes always.

Siddhant went in seach of that park after somany years..

He parked the car and went inside the park.

Infact that was the park where Roli & Siddhant spent the whole night on the previous day of her birthday night.

Siddhant entered into the park and sat in the bench chair like cement benchles available for sitting purpose.

He closed his eyes with those golden memories for a while.  

Where he pulled her towards him and they were spending the night sitting without sleep hugging each other.

He can still feel the touch of her on his waist with passion & love.

SIddhant thought was disturbed when a ball hit on his leg.

He opened his eyes and looked at a child of around 4 years coming towards him with fear on his face to take the ball.

The child was fearing what if he scold for throwing the ball on him.

But Siddhant did not feel like scolding at the boy on seeing him.

Siddhant took the ball and gave it to the boy.

Boy: Thank you.  you did not scold me.

SIddhant: Scold you for what?

Boy: For throwing the ball on you.

Siddhant: It was thrown when you were playing right.  you did not mean to hit me right.

Boy: yes.

Siddhant: Then its ok.  there is no wrong in it.

Boy: You are very good uncle.

Siddhant smile.

He took the boy and made him sit on his lap.

SId: What is your name?

Boy: Gitesh..

Sid: Gitesh... Your name too..

Boy: Why uncle?  YOu know someone with this name.

SId: Not known person.  But heard about that person just recently who is disturbing my mind.  

Boy: Am i too disturbing your mind?

Sid: not all all.  You are giving pleasure to my mind.

Boy: Thank you

Sid: With whom you have come?  Are you alone in the park?

Boy: No uncle.  I have come with my mom.  She is sitting that side while i was playing here.

Sid: Oh ok.  

Boy: Uncle.  I am going otherwise my mom will search for me.

Gitesh tried to get down from his lap while Siddhant placed a kiss on his cheeks and waved good bye...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Banu 👏
Thank you so much for continuing the ff 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: justloverosid

Awesome update Banu 👏
Thank you so much for continuing the ff 😃


Thanks a lot Ani Dear.  
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 30 (Revised)

Siddhant returned to his house.  His thoughts were around that cute boy who he met in the park.

Unknown to Siddhant, he was remembering his childhood days on seeing that boy.

He was feeling like looking at him as a child..

He was thrilled by this new feeling.

His heart was suddenly filled with happiness.

Siddhant went to have dinner happily.

He told to serve too as he was feeling happy.

Siddhant slept remembering that boy in his mind, his smile, his cute face everything was occupied in his mind.

Even in the dream, that boy was coming towards Siddhant.

Siddhant who got up realised it was just a dream and smiled.

He drink some water to relax himself and went to the balcony.

Siddhant decided to go to that park and see the boy the next day too.




Siddhant now was feeling like he got some meaning to wait till meaning and this thought itself was giving pleasure to him.

He got ready happily and went to office.

He greet himself 'Good morning' to all staffs & PA too.

His PA was wondering how his boss got such good mood over night when he was upset for past few days.

Siddhant told him to arrange all the cancelled meetings on that day.

PA was literally surprised on his new level of energy which he never seen in the past.

Siddhant was busy the whole day having meetings of all the past 2 days.

By evening, he rushed towards the park.

Siddhant sat in that same bench and was waiting for the boy.

But he cant find that boy coming to play for long.

Siddhant was restless and eager for Gitesh..

After few minutes of waiting he got that happiness.

yes.  the boy finally came to play in that park.

Gitesh too noticed Siddhant in that bench and rushed towards him happily.

SIddhant took the boy and made him to sit on his lap and kissed on his cheeks.

Siddhant took out the chocolate he kept in his pocket for him and gave it to him.

Gitesh: Thank you uncle..

Sid: With pleasure my child.

Siddhant was himself shocked on telling 'my child' to him which came out spontaneous without himself thought of it.

Siddhant hug the child tightly.

He was getting unexplainable happiness with him..

Siddhant kissed the child again while Gitesh too kissed Siddhant.

Sid: Gitesh, you come here to play daily.

Gitesh: Yes uncle.  My mom after coming from office bring me here to play for sometime.

SId: Your house is nearby only.

Gitesh: yes.  it is near that side.

Siddhant remembered on that side only his room was there.

Sid: Gitesh, i too was living there once when i was studying college.

Gitesh: Is it!

Sid nod his head as acceptance.

Sid: Gitesh, dont you have friends to play with you?

Gitesh: No uncle.  there is no friends near my house and i play alone in the park.

SId: Wont your mom play with you.

Gitesh: No uncle.  you know she will sit that side and will be crying till i return from playing.

Sid: She cry?  But why?

Gitesh: No idea.  

Siddhant was not interested to know about his mother further as it is not good to enquire such with a small child.

Sid: Gitesh, Can i play with you?  I will come here daily and play with you.  Is it ok for you?

Gitesh: Really!!  I will be happy uncle.  

Siddhant started playing with him throwing the ball.

Gitesh as well as Siddhant was happy playing together...

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Posted: 9 years ago
very cute conversation between Githesh and Siddhant... loved it so muchhh..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deeksha.aiyer

very cute conversation between Githesh and Siddhant... loved it so muchhh..


Thanks a lot Deeksha dear.  
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 31 (Revised)

SIddhant started living with new energy now for that boy who he meet daily in the park.

Gitesh has become Siddhant's reason for running his life.

Siddhant reach the park daily and play with him in the park.

But he never seen his mother yet.

Gitesh rush towards him as soon as he reach the park and starts playing with him.

After playing for some time, Gitesh goes back to his mother waving bye to Siddhant.

The days were passing...




One day Siddhant was struck in a meeting and was unable to come to the park.

Gitesh who was expecting Siddhant to play was upset.

He was no more interested to play alone and went back to his mother 'Roli'

Roli: Gitesh what happend? Dont you play today?

Gitesh: My friend has not come today to play with me.

Roli: Which friend?  You used to play alone right.

Gitesh: Yes i was playing alone.  But now i am playing with that uncle friend.

Roli: Uncle friend? Who is that?

Gitesh: That uncle friend comes here daily to this park and play with me.  But today he has not come. I am getting bored to play alone now.

Roli: You never told all these days about any uncle friend.

Gitesh: You never asked me thats why.

Gitesh said raising his shoulders a little.

Roli remembered Siddhant talking in similar way raising his shoulders and those same words.

Roli: Just like father..

She said to herself.

Gitesh: Will you play with me Mom?

Roli: I am not in any mood to play Gitesh.  

ROli was thinking, the game the fate played with me is enough.  

Gitesh: Then with whom i will play.

ROli: If you dont want to play lets go back home.

Roli said & took him.

Siddhant who just rushed into the park found Gitesh missing.

Sid to himself: Oh he left today it seems.  

Siddhant left the park from front gate while ROli was leaving the park from another gate.

Edited by banuprasa - 9 years ago