Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
Hellooos 😃
Woww!!! The update ..those words.. its beautiful (as always) I'm actually tired of saying it. 😛😆
Lemme start my comment/compliment as it is going to be the longest 😆😆 really long one!
Haha! That's Kittu-style! 😃 ALERT : Don't be MAD at me 😆 for the ramble..
The Golden Ticket - An apt title after all! How do you guys do it.. ? Such Bang on Titles each and every time... its beyond my comprehension!! 😆 I can't actually find good titles. It's a tiring task to find appropriate ones. Is this ticket to her happiness, to unburden her guilt finally and receive what she is really deserves .. Love & Happiness.. I hope so..
What is that file?? I'm assuming it is something related to Hospital stuff. It is the file of her reports and prescriptions from the most recent stay in the hospital, after she fought with Maan. Unpleasant memories always makes us vulnerable, how easily we will be transported to that moment.. to that time.. as if we are re-living that moment.. and it depresses us more than anything. That helpless situation.. emotional turmoil.. Few things have capacity to make us helpless and numb. Very true! I remembered what it felt like, or rather, I remembered the feeling of nothingness which had filled me then. It had felt like life was over for me, that I did not deserve to live, that I could not live with the burden of being responsible for the demise of three lives... Three...
I love those lines.. I mean it.. I felt that is too personal to reveal.. something one had gone through. and gave a word form. 🤗🤗That feeling of nothingness.. that pathetic and terrible feeling. It just rips your heart and soul.. as if it is filled with sorrow rather than nothingness.. You can't breathe .. it suffocates you.. I don't deserve feeling.. Gawddd.. how many times did we feel that way?? Geet must have felt so many times.. She killed three most imp people in her life.. Reason behind her parents death.. and Maan.. Maan I feel like saying his name again and again..More than anything, she is depressed and blames herself for Maan's state.. Yes. She blames herself for him this much since she knows that even though Maan is living and breathing, his heart is dead? His feelings are stale now... that is a whole different thing than someone who actually died... The number had only increased a night before I was hospitalised. It was one of the darkest nights of my life, a night when the storm and the rain had been the wildest, yet it had been nothing as compared to the storm which had raged within me, the storm which had led me straight to a hospital bed with an added burden of grief on my already tired shoulders.
I like the way you write.. you pour life into each and every word.. every syllable..every nuance.. I can feel it.. and I live through it. Most of the times I visualize it and watch in awe!! You are truly Talented 👏 👏 Thank you! 😳 I just try to live in the moment that I pen down. I believe that when a writer connects to a story in that way, the readers might too. His sudden appearance had scared me, as had his presence in my room without anyone else being there. The harmless glass of water which he had held up for me bore witness that he meant no harm to me, so I had relaxed myself and took the glass from him to soothe my parched throat. 😆😆 Maan and Harm .. but after whatever happened.. I dare not think that. My cutie pie is going be Gung ho about his lady love!! You bet! And that's how we love Maan, right?
I quite understand Geet's mindset and her thoughts about Maan's presence in the hospital.
Is he laughing at my state..is he thinking that I deserve this? Is he showing some sympathy?
All those negative thoughts block our mind to function properly..
But there is this tiny voice rather than inside the head it comes straight form heart.. cause Heart understands better. Making you look into brighter side..
Very well put!
I had to give him the benefit of doubt because even if his eyes had felt estranged to me on that night, I could not perceive him to be someone vicious and sadistic. 🤗
And the next set of exchange of words.. 🤗 His forgiveness.. Such a relief!! 😊
"I like the night. Without the dark, we'd never see the stars." 😳
He forgave me, my brain had churned the thought over and over again until my eyes closed on their own accord, my shoulders felt a wee bit lighter. A couple of teardrops had escaped my closed eyes and slid down my cheeks. At that moment, I had barely been able to speak. It had felt to me like Maan had given me the most precious thing which was humanly possible.
Geet felt that Maan's forgiveness is the most beautiful thing... finally she can unburden her shoulders.. Feel a wee bit better..
We usually forget that life is a cycle.. and it has to be balanced..
"I forgive you for everything" those words mean a lot to Geet.. and its only cause she has endured so much pain and she knows the value of those mere words...
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"You can't be happy unless you're unhappy sometimes"
We take everything for granted..and complain for every wrong thing. How can one admire one good thing? Only if he knows/tastes worst.. then only one can appreciate the good..and know the difference.
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Exactly! [/B]I hope from now on Maan admire the good things happening in his life.. and for Geet she always balances her life 😉😆 *Dont throw chappals plz* You have to admit that Geet is the matured one in this story! 😃
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Lol! I wouldn't throw chappals at you for saying what I believe too. 😃"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." - It surely depicts Geet's state.. 😊
Ahaaana.. This is my most fav part of all !!! 😆😆 For obvious reason ofcourse!!
Kittu & Vyan ☺️ *sniff* *sinff* I can smell smoke!! 🤣
But whoa. for a moment I totally forgot that I am in the story 😆
It was Vyan, demanding, in his sunny manner, to meet him right away stating that he wanted to discuss something important
You see.. that's the reason I love him to bits!! He and his manners Hayeee
Vyan is such Gentleman ..and about their recent closeness is something I adore in this story. It is decent and pleasant.. Something which makes you instantly smile and adore it
No demands..no expectations.. No complaints.. He reminds me of my own nature to some extent..Not expect anything from those whom I love unconditionally. But itss very hard at times!! It just gets on your nerves!!!
@Bold: Then it's a match made in heaven 😉Ohh Mayyooo I love this scene.. its etched in my mind and heart!! 🤗 everything.. be she pulling his cheek.. he putting a hand on her.. Vyan saying "Most beautiful woman" to Geet!!
Geet's trust on him.. her love for her dear frnd he proved to be. Her encouragement to show what he wanted to .. His restlessness for her delay.. her sarcatsic reply!! everything.. believe me this is going to be cutest and sweetest friendship ever!! 🤗
Embedded in the soft satin inside was a small diamond intricately fixed in its place by the design of the platinum ring. It was the most beautiful ring I had seen till date.
"It's so beautiful, Vyan!" I exclaimed in a voice louder than the usual, attracting attention from the people occupying the nearby tables.
"You think?" His eyes seemed so innocent that I reached across the table and pulled his cheek.
"Of course!" I gave a wide smile. "This is the most beautiful gift any girl could ever get."
"The ring?"
"No, you idiot! The proposal from a guy like you." I meant what I said and I saw him release a long breath. The eyes which had been so nervous a while ago were now soft and glowing as they gazed at me.
Wowww!! Isn't that beautiful thing to share with your dear friend!! 😉 Something close to heart.. 😳
"I'm so lucky to have found you." He is .. 😃 Bloody damn lucky!! 😆
I was speechless while i was reading this..
I leaned towards him a bit. "You love her?" He nodded almost immediately, adding a "very much" before I continued. "Does she love you too?" He nodded again but with a little hesitation. "Then what is this uncertainty about?"
Vyan took a deep breath and released it. "I don't know. I, I just... can't explain." I raised my eyebrows. "I just want everything to be perfect when I propose Kittu."
I was jumping around.. as if Vyan indeed proposed me in real.. and Im getting engaged to him. 😆 silly me!!
Ohh my!! *Shy*
Haha!
We want it perfect for our loved ones.. and we dont even mind the imperfect things in our life.. We want the best for them.. and precisely, the most precious thing we can ever give them is LOVE! We forget that even the simple and not so significant thing can be the best gift if its filled with love😃
You stole my words once again Mayyo!! I love Vyan just like the way he is!! 😆
Keep him safe with you then! 😉
When I left that restaurant two hours later, I was gloating with the happiness I felt for Vyan. The man that he was, he deserved the best of everything, and Kittu was the best for him.
That happens to me .. gloating in happiness as if it happened to me.. something .. so much personal..
You cannot come back to reality... The dear man in her life.. who deserved all happiness..
This reminds me of :
"Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own."
"No medicine cures what happiness cannot." 😳
I love the ring btw.. 😊 its gorgeous!! 😆
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Your choice in music is 👏I love love love love love you sooo much!! Love you to the moon and back!! 🤗
Love you too Kittu! 🤗
PS: I'm going to continue . Going to comment on something which blew my mind!! 😆 Let me process my thoughts!!
[U]I'm all eyes. 😆[/UP
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