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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

Awesome

Paro and varad and shlok part is superb
Loved it


Thank you😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Hi my sweet jane, thank you for a sweet update. Meant to say this few days back. Sorry for the delay in commenting as always.

I absolutely loved the update. Mothers anguish sons dilemma. Mixed with the most amazing baby sitter in the form of nanny Shlok. the morning feed and the rude but lovely wake up call and the Asths bomb. So very wheel put together in your signature style.
And the sweeties of them all. The call and the request to meet even for ten mints. And the goody basket. Can you send one for me too. I love all things sweet specially if it's sent my way with such love.

Don't we all wish to work for Shlok. Funny and witty.

So the wedding is happening in shumi speed. With the element of Shlok and Astha in full throttle.

Will be waitng for the next update, it's the one right or will you keep us waiting a little longer.

Beautiful update that brought wonderful memories to my mind.
I thank you for that.


Anu, thank you very much for the appreciation.
Nanny Shlok🤣 I wonder how much he would take per hour😆😆😆

I'd have him too gladly.

He is fun. I feel his ironic smile that hides his bruised heart.
His mom sees all she needs to see but she is helpless. She lost her power over him.

Schumi wedding. What esle could it be with these two crazy people.
We still have three weeks ahead and still so many things there are to happen so bear with me😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Efinah36

Wonderful updates 😃


thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jia.astk

Jane...so they finally acknowledged how much they "hate" each other 😆...he "hates" her so much that he cant tolerate to see with another man (of course this man seems to be a beast) & wants to marry in 3 weeks. Shlok seems to be shrewd enough ...so can't he think of the reason why his mother has changed over the years and why she chose to ruin the life of her beloved son?

NA & his infidelity...why did he choose to have a 2nd family for the sake of politics?


Jia, happy to read your comment😊
Missed you😉

I'm sure their hate is very strong😆😆😆
They hate so much they can't marry no one else.
Shlok will know everything surely he understands already.
He just didn;t want to press his mom to open the truth if she was reluctant about it.

His father decided he was able to handle the situation but he failed...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bm11


Anu, thank you very much for the appreciation.
Nanny Shlok🤣 I wonder how much he would take per hour😆😆😆

I'd have him too gladly.

He is fun. I feel his ironic smile that hides his bruised heart.
His mom sees all she needs to see but she is helpless. She lost her power over him.

Schumi wedding. What esle could it be with these two crazy people.
We still have three weeks ahead and still so many things there are to happen so bear with me😉


Oh! My you say lots more to happen before the wedding. Jane keep keep sadism in check... We want to you to race to the Wedding and the to you know what...


And BTW if Shlok is available to baby sit and I can afford him I'm willing to have my third. 😳

Missed your updates . I demand updates. Double.
Edited by Anunilmini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anunilmini


Oh! My you say lots more to happen before the wedding. Jane keep keep sadism in check... We want to you to race to the Wedding and the to you know what...


And BTW if Shlok is available to baby sit and I can afford him I'm willing to have my third. 😳

Missed your updates . I demand updates. Double.


Anu, I know what expectations you mean😳😉

Your third? Oh my😆 he quitted his job so I think he is available but he is not cheap😆

I'm about to update😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 42


Astha finished her job at 4 p.m. and drove home with cosmic speed. This was the day she would remember all her life... She failed to sleep last night. Such nights could only happen once in a life time.

In the middle of the night she told her shocked parents truth about Raichands, truth about Raj and... about Shlok Agnihotri... She spent in parents' bedroom not less than three hours. What was happening there reminded Astha of interrogation in the police station. There were two policemen - bad and good. The night was sleepless for the whole family. Dad was restless. So many doubts were tormenting him. He was about to give away his child to a monster... Mr.Kirloskar had no idea on Raj's past. At the same time the accusation was of the most serious kind and impossible to ignore coming from a man who was a respectable person and a close relative. No proofs made the matter both simple and complicated. The father realized he should break the agreement without mentioning the real reason and so he did. Kalindi was reminding Astha of a police detective. So many questions asked at one hour Astha has never heard. Sometimes it seemed mom didn't need the answer. She asked them for the sake of asking "When did it all start? Did you let him touch you? What was happening between you? Does Paro know? His parents? How can you be so naughty to let a man rush into your room? Did you abuse bawdry with him? And he wants to marry you still?"

Yes, he did... Shlok Agnihotri wanted to marry Astha Kirloskar despite all the troubles she caused him...and she... wanted him too... very much.

Her sense of deja vu was stronger than ever. She stood in her room looking out of the window. The cars were parking. Mr. Shlok Agnihotri got out of his car. Flamboyant, as usual. Astha smiled seeing him wearing the notorious light grey suit "Hey, wet pants" whispered she happily. He took his sun glasses off unlike last time and the next moment their eyes locked and he smiled at her - she felt fireworks began in every part of her body. He stood by the car's door and suddenly she saw him drawing the circles in the air with his forefinger. She was his Minnie after all. His movements raised more intense feelings than she had expected - he "touched" her and immediately it dawned on her she craved for him. Madly. She wanted to feel his hands on her body. Damn, he knew it... All that happened because of him. It was all his fault... Since his heroic climb in her window she stopped eating and sleeping properly and walked around the house daydreaming about him.

The Agnihotris were all present except Madam Rekha. Astha felt acute pain - Mrs. Agnihotri rejected her. She couldn't accept Astha as her daughter-in-law. Astha knew she was not her best friend but still she believed Anjuli would be able to welcome her... What about others? What about the father and Varad?

Several minutes later Astha heard the knock at the door. It was Sushant "Madam, there's a note for you" the servant stood at the door without entering the room.

"Who sent it?"

"Mr.Varad Agnihotri, Madam" she opened the letter and felt deja vu moment repeated itself again.

"Dear Astha,

Let me express my joy and happiness over the fact that nearly two years ago you damaged the car of my brother. I must confess I express delight on a road accident for the first time in my life. It was a blessing in disguise we failed to recognize at first. We accepted no money and you paid us back with the most precious currency - your love to my brother.

God bless you for that

P.M. Astha, dear, please tame his rebellious head as you have already tamed his disobedient heart. He is mad about you.

Varad Agnihotri (your present and future brother in law)

Astha's eyes filled with tears. Sweet, sweet sweet Varad. Helpful, kind-hearted Varad. So understanding, so intelligent, so shrewd.

No stupid questions, no nonsense, arguments, no disturbances.

He knew how she needed support on that day and he was there for her... The family accepted her - that was his message. Despite Auntie's absence they accepted her and approved of her.

Lucky woman was her Paro. Lucky. Happy. Indeed she was a saint in her previous life and God granted her with a husband like that in the present. Astha remembered their spy ride, the scratchers on fop's car and his first "You are too bold, pussy" and then "If you love me, I'll walk across the fire for you"...

She took a sheet of paper and wrote an answer.

"Dear Varad,

All my life I will be grateful to God you both crossed my way on that remarkable day. Money is useless and cold currency for me. His love is all I need.

P.M. His rebellious head and disobedient heart should remain untamed. I'm mad about him just as he is.

Astha Kirloskar (your present and future sister in law)

There was no anxiety, no fear, no tension ... Astha Kirloskar was sitting in the same room she used to sit many months ago. All that was happening around reminded her the performance she was destined to visit. He was sitting opposite her, his elbows on his knees. He was silent. They looked at each other and nothing else mattered.

She has always been persistent, disobedient, bold and courageous truth-seeker. Thousands of time she regretted her tongue was covered with thorns... No one was self-confident enough to come close to her and unmask her. She had a secret no one knew - she wanted to be loved. Madly. Unconditionally. "Minnie" was not plastic, she had a heart and her heart craved for love. No one knew it, they only asked her to keep her mouth shut otherwise Astha Kirloskar would never marry... She tried to fulfill their wishes, she did her best until one day she drove into "him" and looked at him and realized she came into this world not to play the role others wanted her to play - submissive and docile creature to ideally match the social patterns. She was born to feel, to give, to take, to dance, to love and to lust, to get lost and to be found by this exact man... she was born to be human... not a divine goddess...

She was not ashamed anymore to confess to herself she loved him. It turned out she was a romantic soul. Maybe she was born such; just like her elder sister who she used to mock for that weakness but she was likely to become one when he invoked her inner woman onto surface. That woman immediately responded to his call and appeared from the depths of her essence. That woman recognized her man and she became insatiable... she wouldn't be satisfied with less than everything.

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Chapter 43


The house was white and light. Marble flooring were shining like mirrors... The broker was a lively creature, talkative as a market seller "Sir, it's a rare opportunity. Three bedrooms, excellent ventilation, the house is blessed with natural lights, front separate lawn, all rooms and the lobby area has split air-conditioning, servant quarter, pooja room..." Astha stopped the broker.

"Servant quarter? Pooja room?" she addressed to him "Will you excuse us for a minute?" she pulled Shlok by the arm aside "Hey, are you mad? Stop this nonsense immediately"

"What the hell? Why?" he was towering her despite high heels she was wearing.

"We are leaving. Servant room? What for? We are two here, no one else. We can serve ourselves"

"We can be three or four in the nearest future if you wish to" his forefinger touched her palm and started drawing circles... Astha grew red like a beetroot "You are shameless, absolutely shameless!"

"Your flattery feels my heart with joy, baby"

"We are leaving. Pooja room! Oh, my! Shlok, the house cannot cost 25 Cr. It's squandering. She casted a glance at the broker checking of he's not listening and mimicked him "A rare opportunity"... Of course, it's rare. Such fools are rare. What fool will pay such pile of money? Who has 25 Cr?"

"I have" simply answered her fiance "I don't see any problem. Do you like it?"

"No. It's too expensive. We are just two and.." Shlok turned to the broker "Please forgive us. It's just my fianc wanted to express her delight and appreciation on this unique offer. We take it" Astha closed her eyes. Just like that. Just try to argue with him... and it was like arguing with a concrete wall. He was exactly as compliant... She left him and moved through the house alone...without any disturbance.

She loved the light and this house was filled as the broker said blessed with it. It was waiting for her and for him to fill it with their energy and their love. Unfurnished, grand and new it was impersonation of their future. All depended on them. Would they manage to breathe life into it?

He followed her... observing his girl from a distance. She was getting accustomed to her new home. The moment he saw the house a week ago, he was alone, without her, he knew he wanted to buy it for her. His Minnie should have a decent mouse hole she could love.

Every time he saw her he felt his heart became heavier and bigger. She filled him like water displacing all other visions and memories he had had. He felt the thing that happened between them, that bond was more than passion, more than desire, more than fondness. He felt it was divine. Should it happen to him earlier, he would have been scared to death. All that meant restrictions, borders, bounds he hated to lose until she touched him and all the freedom he worshipped suddenly lost its charm. All that he had before was not life - he lived under the glass bell jar stewing in his own air of lechery and prodigality. All that was such rubbish he was sorry he wasted time to it. He was sorry he had not met her earlier. She used to call him brainless, she was right. If he had been wise he would have married her the next day he met her and at the moment he still had to wait for her for a week. The time without her was crawling deliberately slow. He gave her promise not to touch her and every single day he thanked God he still could keep his word especially when she teased him knowing his word was inviolable. That was not his whim that was his only way to prove her she was everything for him except shallow amusement. When he looked into her eyes he saw his unborn children...

Astha heard his steps behind her and looked back at him "Hey, Mr.Spender. How do you feel squandering money?"

"I squander my money. What else it for? Think other way - I invest"

"Shall we go to have a look at bedroom?" her cunning smile was tickling his heart like feather.

"Your wish is my command" she took his arm and made him follow her in the huge room with grey marble floor "Look, do you like it?"

"Yeah, it's all right. Looks fine to me"

"Where would you like to put the bed?"

"Anywhere where you will be... I don't care"

"You don't care? How is it possible? If there's no bed then there will be no..."

"Minnie, when you make love to me you won't think about bed. Trust me. The floor, the wall or warm shower will be enough" she felt something heavy and warm filled her belly as if someone pored hot water in her...She understood it was physical desire. Strong and powerful emotion making people lose mind clarity "Do you feel the same?" she looked up at him.

"What exactly?" he narrowed his eyes.

"Warmth inside" she touched her belly.

"I live with it since I touched you for the first time" she turned her face to him and stood on her tiptoes "Will you congratulate me on the house purchase?" she was looking at his lips... Instead of kissing her he turned her and hugged her from behind nuzzling her ear with his nose and she felt more than heard him take a deep long breath "You make me... want... to... eat you up"

The shivers ran down her spine "I want to be eaten... all...up" but still he hasn't kissed her. Not once. She was beginning to go crazy "Kiss me, please. If you kiss me now I promise never to call you names"

"You won't keep your promise anyway. You are too candid and hot-tempered for that and besides if I'm going to kiss you now I don't know if I'll ever stop. Not now" she rushed out of his hands and turning around hissed at him "Don't you ever touch me then, laddie. I said please God damn it. Women never ask men to do it. Men should guess themselves..." his little duchess was furious. He kept silence looking at her petite figure. Astha made one step forward to him showing she was not at all afraid "What? What that cunning smile means? Why are you staring at me, Mister Fop?"

He was looking at her with helpless adoration "I was just thinking..."

"Oh really? You do sometimes? What about?"

"I was thinking... if sex with you is one-hundredth as fun as arguing with you. I'll be one happy lucky bas***d"




Chapter 44

Chapter 44



Edited by bm11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u for the double update jane😊
Amazing update as usual jane[=D<]
Shlok and astha, they both are inseperable. Only week for marraige
What happened to anjuli? 😕
Shlok is waiting to start his new life😉
Btw i loved the letter convo bet varad and astha❤️
P.S. Jane, i expected to see paro-shlok convo
Edited by charanyaaj - 10 years ago
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Lovely update that was Jane...
Shlok and Aastha are inseparable day by day... I loved Varad's letter to Aastha!
Yay! bas***d Raj is out now... The want for eachother is growing now...
Loved Shlok for keeping up the promise, but is he going to break it?
Edited by .Natasha. - 10 years ago

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