NEW ASHLOK FICTION : GUILTY Chapter 29page 140

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sreekailas

@sreekailas

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Anu diii..I wish u were here so that I can hug with all my might... You know what I'm actually proud of myself! Yes! For insisting u to start writing stories too.. I always knew that u r an excellent writer..but ..I don't know how to say..you're simply brilliant! The way u wrote this one.. I must say I felt like reading Dan Brown's! Yes..Dan brown's novel added with elements of humour! Don't think that I'm flattering u..but honestly I really really really loved it..i only read till chapter 8.. I'm commenting b4 reading d rest coz if I continue reading..I will b too lost that I won't b able to even comment properly!
Wanted to add something else too.. Shlokie's self talk!! Thats just hilarious!

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

such beautiful updates😃

thanks for the PM😊

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

ok now our det. Agnihotri started to lose in her dreams😳

and he had bitter past also like Aastha

thats why they felt so connected to each other😊

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Hi Anu...

A Big Sorry for not responding to your update dear...

will go to each chapter and will write my comment..

pls forgive me...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Chapter 2:

Wonderful update dear...

u have described shlok character so beautiful...

Poor Shlok might fall for astha very soon...

Astha still in a shock...My god she is married to some one else..

waiting to know how the story unfolded...

Thanks for the wonderful treat...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Chapter 3:

Nice update as usual anu...

Loved the question session...

The inner feeling of Shlok for astha's answer...u nailed it ...

Shlok has studies her well...

Feeling pity for astha...

she has answer him in a polite way...

wondering whats in her mind...

Another awesome creation...

rushing to read the next chapter...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Chapter 4:

Amazing update dear...

Lovely the way u have described shlok inner feeling...

He described her as cow girl...sound interesting...

Which he has a bad option abt girl...

Feeling pity for Astha...is her marriage only for namesake...

Why there are staying in seperate room...

rushing to read next update...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Thank you Sathya for helping me to upload the pic. I troubled you a lot. You were a sweet heart. Love you.
🤗

No Thanks and Sorry between friends Dear...

A Friend in need is a friend in deed...

I am there for you anytime...

Love you and will do anything...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#379

Chapter 5:

Beautiful update dear...

I am in totally love with this cow girl and dec shlok...

my god...mindblowing update...

Loved the way u described Astha's room...

Poor shlok its very difficult for him to control his inner feeling...

Astha fainted seeing his husband body...so sad...

Shlok suspecting Astha as a killer...

Too good dear...u r a great writer...

Thanks for the wonderful treat...

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: rbb1
yay another update thank you

Sorry for the delay in replying! 😊

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