New FF ~~Itna karo na mujhe pyar~~ part9 on pg32(Page 29)

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Posted: 2015-11-01T11:03:16Z
Originally posted by resha123


wow after long gap u updated it..
nice story bt is update me ram tha hi nhi..
priya koi krishna se shaadi kii.. ab a krishna kha se aaya
waiting for next...pls cntnu sooon...


Hahaha...pehle se hi tha krishna..thank u
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Posted: 2015-11-01T11:47:40Z
is baar to ise complete krne ka pakka irada h mera..chahe jo ho jaye..shuru kiya h phir se to khtm hi krke manungi...mtlb aaj ki date me aisa hi josh h..kal ka pta nhi...khair moving on update...hope u all like it...i know bht sare padhne wale naraz hue honge ki raya ko nhi milaya..bole ya nhi phir bhi i know..but now m focusing only on a simple sweet love story with turn twist...likhne ke liye to kuchh dino ke liye raya gye mere deemag se abhi mere liye ye bas ram priya h..jo jindgi ke alag alag mod pr alag alag tareeke se alag alag wajaho se milte hain..ant kya hoga pta nhi..par basic si story pyar ke mayne ke liye hai...kaise pyar logo ki jindgi badlta hai..aur kaise logo ki jindgi se pyar ki wajah se log hi badal jate hain..hahaha..mujhe malum h meri bate bht gol gol lagti hain sabko..but cmmon..aram se bate keh di jayengi to kahani kis baat ki aur writer kis kaam ka...anyways..here is next update...

part 8...

Krishna's pov..

mere samne baitha director jane kya kya samjha raha hai..pr mujhe jaise kuchh bhi nhi sunayi de rha hai..m bas apni kal raat ki harkato me uljha hua hu...kaise aise kr rha tha m?... agar priya ko thoda bhi andaza ho jata to kya sochti wo mere bare me...? kaise ye sab aya mere deemag me..jbki m achhi tarah se janta hu hamari shaadi...

director.. Krishna dhyan kahan h tumhara?... kuchh keh rha hu main tumse

me...oh m vry sorry ..pls kya main aaj ke liye break le sakta hu..kal rat me kuchh kaam ki wajah se night out hua to bht headache ho gya hai..pls

director...are u sure? ..ya kuchh aur prblm h..help chahiye kuchh..dekho tum mere hero ho..mujhe tumhare comfortability ka khyal to rkhna chahiye...agr kuchh crisis ho to..

me..nhi nhi..m ok bas thoda headache rest krunga sab theek ho jayega...

director... theek h..aaj chhutti krte hain..waise bhi aur bhi logo ko bulaya tha wo aaj nhi aa paye...mne bola tha hum kuchh naya shuru krenge..but wo kafi huge hone wala hai to bht sare plans aur log judne wale hain is project se..to hum next week ki meeting rakhte hain..sabko tabhi ek sath sabkuchh btayenge..tab tak tum bhi apna shortout kro..jo bhi issues hain..

me..oh great...thank u soo much ,.milte hain phir next week me...

director.. sure ..tc

oh god achha hua one week ka time de diya director ne...kya karu..priya se milu..?... ghr le jau use..? ..pta nhi use kaam hoga..yhi rhne du? pr phir bhi..use btana to hoga ki mujhe one week ka off hai..aftrall she is my  wife...inform krne jaisa bta deta hu..phir wo kuchh btayegi hi apne programs uske hisab se dekh lenge kya krna hai..pr pehle vikram se mil leta hu...aya bhi nhi h..call hi kr leta hu...

me...kahan h be...aya kyu nhi aaj?

vikram..aa rha hu..out of city tha

me..are kal rat me to mere sath tha out of city kab gya..?

vikram..are tu marwayega mujhe..aur khud bhi marega..tha tere sath pr drink jyada ho gya tha aur neha ne call kr diya to mne socha btaunga to whi aa jayegi to bol diya out of town hu..subah usne ghr pr pakad liya..& u know her na...to mujhe sach me out of town bhej diya uska koi kaam krne ko

me..saale to nashe me sochne ko kisne bola tha..ab ayega kab...?...

vikram..aa rha hu yar..on the way hu..1 hr lagega..

me..theek h m lake pr wait kr rha hu..aake pehle mujhse milna

vikram..ji nhi..pehle to m bhagwan se bhi nhi mil sakta..neha se mile bina

me..ufff..jo bhi h..khtm kr ke mil mujhse bas..wait krta hu m..

priya's pov...

ufff yaar kuchh krne ka man nhi ho rha...kya kru...pta nhi aage sab kaise manage hoga..upar se ye sarika..samne rahti hai to Krishna aur bhi deemag me ghusa rehta hai..pr wo to rahega hi...pati h mera,..aur achha hi to hai ki wo hai deemag me..atleast aur logo ko to deemag se nikal paungi...ufff...sab itna uljha hua kyu hai..upar se meeting bhi postpone ho gyi next week ke liye...pta nhi kis bewkuf ki wajah se...kam se kam meeting ho jati to kuchh kaam to shuru hota...khair...Krishna se baat karu kya..? bolu ki m free hu? lekin pta nahi..wo free hoga ya nahi?... kya karu yar

neha...kya h madm..aajkl deemag satak gya h kya..? kya khud se badbadati rhti ho..

me...hihi...are wo yar meeting postpone ho gyi..for one week

neha...kyaaa?

me..ufff..itna kyu chilla rhi ho...hoti nhi hain kya meetings postpone?

neha..are mera mtlb h maza aa gya..ab m vikram ko chhodungi nhi

me..goooddd ab usne kya kiya yar?

neha...are usne kuchh kiya nhi..relax...ab karega..do din baad hamari anniversary h

me..anniversary? ..shaadi kab ki tumne

neha...oh shut up..dnt b drama queen.. janti hu m tum bht achhi actress ho..pr mujhse natak mat kiya kro..

me..hahahaha..sorry baba..pr kya tum bhi..har baat ki anniversary mnati rhti ho..

neha..are cmmon..rishte majbut rhte hain yar unhe aisi tazgi dete rhna chahiye..mera to ab program fix..pr tum kya krogi? yhi rahogi? akele rhna padega m to jaungi kahin kahin vikram ke sath

me..whi soch rhi hu..krishna se baat kru ya nhi..pta nhi free hoga ya nhi..soch rhi thi..ye one week uske ghr pr reh kar aate hain..sabko janne samjhne ka mauka mil jayega isi bahane...but..pta nhi wo free hoga ya nhi

sarika...kaun? .

me...wooo..areee..hum..

neha..are vikram yar..m uski band bajane ki soch rho hu to ise badi sympathy ho rhi h uske sath

me..hehehe..han

sarika...oh mujhe laga priya kahin ja rhi h..m to kahin nhi jaa rhi..tum yhi rho priya.

neha..are nhi usko jana hai

me..nehaa

neha..han..jana h na tumhe..tumhare ghr..last week tumhari mom ne bola tha bht din se nhi gyi tum..ab one week mila h to jake aao..

me..ohhh..han han...wo..

neha...kya yar tum bhi..chalo m chali apni setting krne tum apni kro..& sarika tum kahin nhi ja rhi na ...to pls to kamre ki setting kr ke rkhna baby...

sarika...hahaha..neha bhi na..ajeeb h

me...han pr bht cute h..best frnd...

sarika...han tumhari

me...of course meri


Krishna's pov...

kab ayega yar ye...half hr to nikle..aur pta nhi kitna time lagayega..kal rat hi bol rha tha mat pi itna..tab mujhe dialogue de rha tha...mard ban yar..sala..ab khud mard nhi bnega...aur apne chakkr me mujhe bhi tang krega...tab tak priya ko hi call kr leta hu

me...priya kuchh baat krni thi..free ho kya?... agr kaam me ho to koi baat nhi

priya..nahi bas tumhe hi yaad kr rhi thi

me...kyu..?... i mean koi prblm h?

priya..kyu tumhe sirf prblm me hi yaad kiya ja sakta h kya? ..tumhara naam krishna h to khud ko sach me Krishna samjhne lage ho

me...hahaha...sorry yar..m to aise hi..gussa kyu ho rhi ho

priya..gussa nhi ho rhi hu..bas thodi irritate thi..any way ab theek hu btao tum...

me...nahi theek h..baad me baat kr lenge..when u feel bttr bta dena m aa jaunga..

priya..nhi tum kyu aaoge? 

me...are kya hua h tumhe...aise ajeeb se kyu baate kr rhi ho? ab sach me tension ho rhi h..theek to ho?

priya...han yar theek hu..are wo one week ki chhutti ho gyi..aur yha rhne ka man nhi ho rha tha aur tum bhi free nhi hoge to soch rhi thi ki ghr chali jau ki kya kru..to whi irritation thi..nothing else

me..oh..ok ok..are free hu main bhi meri bhi hui one week ki chhutti...m bhi ghr hi jane ki soch rha tha..to tumhe chhod dunga tumhare ghr no problem..

priya...oh...apne ghr jaoge na..

me..han maa papa ke paas..yha akele kya krunga tum nhi rhogi to

priya...kyaaa

me..nhi kuchh nhi..aau m pick krne..

priya..nhi m hi aa jati hu tumhare office wha se chalenge dono..mere liye easy h paas hi to h na..tumhe ulta ana padega na

me...theek h aa jao...chalte hain sath me..

flashback by krishna...

priya ka wait krte hue..Krishna kal raat ke bare me sochne lagta h...kal kitna kuchh hua..ek din me jindgi badal gyi..shaadi ho gyi..dosto ke tamashe me  pehla kiss bhi hua..jo bht ajeeb tha..kuchh to  samjh nhi aya jo samjh aya wo bhi samjh nhi aya..pr itna samjh aya ki pehla kisss kuchh to bht ajeeb si cheez hota h..wo bhi jab aap bilkul assure na ho ki wo ho hi jayega...pr usko hontho ko chhuna aur mehsus krna ki samne wale ne bhi kuchh harkat ki..ajeeb hota h...m janta hu wo hamara first kiss jaisa kiss nhi tha..shayad uski trf se to tha hi nhi..pr usne mna bhi to nhi kiya..shayd meri himmat itni us kiss ne hi badha di jo m kal raat khud ko rok nhi paa rha tha..vikram nhi hota to pta nhi m kya krta ..pr kya karta yar..ek to shaadi hui thi..upar se ghrwalo aur dosto ne mil ke itna bore kiya ye bol bol ke ki kiss krna hi padega..shart harna bhi musibat hi h..pr sharte bhi to itni ajeeb rakhte hain..priya bhi na..kuchh help nhi ki usne isliye har gya..khair har ka fal meetha hota h ye pehli baar pta chala..wo ek pal jb chhua use...pta nhi kitni bijliya daud gyi body me..mtlb aisa nhi h ki mne kisi ko kiss nhi kiya h ya pyar nhi hua h mujhe ya m ehsaaso ko nhi samjhta ..pr uske sath pta nhi kya alag tha..shayad uska reaction kuchh alag tha..uske hotho ki harkat kuchh alag thi..uski sanso ki mehk kuchh alag thi..ya mere dil ka ehsaas kuchh alag tha jo ek simple se kiss me kuchh alag sa feel kr rha tha...uske baad jab hum ghr se mere room pr aaye ek sath..priya to car me hi so gyi thi..ajeeb ladki h..hamesha yhi krti hai..aur aise so jati hai..ki use uthane ka man hi nhi karta.lekin uthana pada ab hr bar car se god me lekr nhi jaa sakta m cmmon mere ghr me seedhiya hain yar..wha se wo pehli baar mere ghr me aayi ..phir mere kamre me..phir mere bistr me...wha tak bhi mere ehsaas normal hi the...m use sota hua dekh rha tha...itna shant simple sa chehra..hotho ke kone pr halki si smile uski khubsurti ko aur badha deta h..mujhe pta nhi uski khubsurti ko kaise describe kru main..pr shayad uski simplicity aut sachhai use jyada khubsurat bnati h...kuchh der usko chehre ko dekhta rha..aur ajeeb si feeling hui mujhe..turant m wha se bahar aa gya..vikram ko call kiya..bola use ki priya ko dekh kr kuchh ho rha h mujhe...kya kru main..i dnt want to do anything wrong with her yar...to sala hasta h bolta h m janta tha isiliye tere ghr ke baar me baitha hu..aja yhi...thank god wo yha aa gya tha..m turant baar me aya..sala masti me pee rha tha...yha meri lagi hui thi..aur usko party sujh rhi thi

vikram...relax yar m hu na..tu baith mere sath aaj hum party krte hain

me...chup kr yar..mne socha bhi kaise priya ke bare me aise..u know kaise hui h hamari shaadi...m to pyar bhi nhi krta use phir...sirf isliye ki meri shaadi hui h aur m mard hu m apni feeling nhi roke paya...vry bad yar

vikram...are tujhe kyu lagta h tune kuchh glt socha...cmmon b a man..pati h tu uska

me..pati hu..pr wo mujhse pyar nhi krti h ram se krti hai..m bhi to usse pyar nhi krta 

vikram..to tu sarika se pyar krta h

me..nahi..ab wo meri jindgi me kahin nhi h..pyar to usse m tab bhi shayad nhi krta tha..pyar m shayad kisi se nhi krta hu

vikram...to phir kya prblm h...priya se lar le..ab to wo teri biwi h..

me...chup kr yar..aisa nhi hota h..pyar bolke nhi hota khud hota h..

vikram..han to tu khud hi kreg na..kisi se mang ke thode hi na..be a man

me..bas mere bhai..tujhe chadh gyi h..jake so ja..m theek hu ab..so jata hu m bhi

vikram..are yha..no...no..teri suhagrat h yar..m jaa rha hu..mujhe kabab me haddi nhi bnna..hahaha

me...sala sharabi..abhi isko kuchh bhi bolunga smjh nhi ayega..ja mere baap..jahan jana h jaa..pr aram se jana

pr achha hua vikram aa gya tha atleast usne mera deemag change kr diya..kya kare shayad yhi insaan ka nature hai..sach hi h kuchh bhi ho mard wale jazbat to aahi jate hain pr achha hua..kuchh bhi bigdne se pehle sambhal liya usne..bhale hi khud sambhlne ke haal me nhi tha phir bhi..uske baad m aram se jakr usi kamre me so paya..priya ko dekhte hi hue..lekin kuchh nhi hua uske baad mujhe..pr ye jarur socha mne..ki iski sadgi aur sachhai kabhi khtm nhi hone dunga..isko har tarah se khush rakhunga chahe ye jaise chahe..to kya hua humdono pyar nhi krte pr sath to hain hum..aur is sath ko khubsurat bnaunga main..vikram sahi kehta h..pyar to kisi se nhi krta main..to isse hi kyun nhi..khair pyar ko baad me dekhenge..abhi to sath imp hai..aur ye sath achha lag rha h mujhe..chehre pr ek sukun aur muskurahat deta h ye sath..

yhi sochte sochte aur muskurate hue so gya krishna..aur subah uska whi muskurata hua chehra priya ke samne tha..

priya aur vikram ke eksath ane se Krishna ki soch ka silsila disturb hua

kriahna..are tumdono sath me hi aa gye..kab se wait kr rha tha to koi nhi aa rha tha..

vikram..are yar neha ko to tu janta h na..der se ayi to der hua

priya..aur mujhe bhi usne hi late kraya..

teeno has padhte hain..but chuki priya aa gyi thi so Krishna uske sath chala gya aur vikram apne room pr..neha ke tantrums jhelne..

to b continue...
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Posted: 2015-11-02T05:39:49Z
Originally posted by veena23


Originally posted by peeyara


Finally padhliya
Mai iver confident hogayi thi k mujhe story yaad hai but yaad nhi tha Ouch LOL
Pehle yeh update padha uske baad reverse mai saare updates padhe tab yaad aayi story LOL
Shaadi hogayi krishna se , par kyu Confused
Aisa kya hua RaYa k saath k sep hogaye n priya ne krishna se shaadi ki LOL
Krishna ki gf se shaadi chupani bhi hai Shocked
Waiting for next one so that pata chale k shaadi kyu huyi n ram kaha hai

P.S i am glad k Sakshi ne itna karo na pyar nhi kiya, its not gud show, story is destroyed n heroine ka role toh mujhe bilkul accha nhi laga LOL


Hihi..are m to writer hu phir bhi revision ki jarurat padi yar..so i can understand..

Oh mne dekha hi nhi wo serialTongue

Dekhna bhi mat kabhi LOL
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Posted: 2015-11-02T05:58:13Z
Itni jaldi upxate Shocked Big smile
I liked it
Shaadi kyu huyi kab bataoge
Ouch i am curious LOL
I loved Krishna's FB, the way he described Priya n her beauty Embarrassed
And the best dialogue was "haar ka phal meetha hota hai " Smile
So krishna is ready to fall in love with priya n i am excited to read their journey Big smile
P.s di i am complety ok with Krishna n priya story LOL kuch naya hai n i love new things Wink
Jab se show khatam hua hai sach mai raya pe imagination bhi khatam hogayi Ouch
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Posted: 2015-11-02T09:39:11Z
Part 7
After long u had updated Veena di
It was nice but can't understand their is two Priya one is wife of Ram and other is Priya who has married to Krishna 
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Posted: 2015-11-02T09:46:52Z
Part 8
Seems Krishna is hiding something with Priya but it's did not look like a compromising marriage as Priya always think about Krishna but love Ram.
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Posted: 2015-11-03T09:40:48Z
Originally posted by peeyara


Originally posted by veena23


Originally posted by peeyara


Finally padhliya
Mai iver confident hogayi thi k mujhe story yaad hai but yaad nhi tha Ouch LOL
Pehle yeh update padha uske baad reverse mai saare updates padhe tab yaad aayi story LOL
Shaadi hogayi krishna se , par kyu Confused
Aisa kya hua RaYa k saath k sep hogaye n priya ne krishna se shaadi ki LOL
Krishna ki gf se shaadi chupani bhi hai Shocked
Waiting for next one so that pata chale k shaadi kyu huyi n ram kaha hai

P.S i am glad k Sakshi ne itna karo na pyar nhi kiya, its not gud show, story is destroyed n heroine ka role toh mujhe bilkul accha nhi laga LOL


Hihi..are m to writer hu phir bhi revision ki jarurat padi yar..so i can understand..

Oh mne dekha hi nhi wo serialTongue

Dekhna bhi mat kabhi LOL



LOL
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Posted: 2015-11-03T09:43:03Z
Originally posted by peeyara


Itni jaldi upxate Shocked Big smile
I liked it
Shaadi kyu huyi kab bataoge
Ouch i am curious LOL
I loved Krishna's FB, the way he described Priya n her beauty Embarrassed
And the best dialogue was "haar ka phal meetha hota hai " Smile
So krishna is ready to fall in love with priya n i am excited to read their journey Big smile
P.s di i am complety ok with Krishna n priya story LOL kuch naya hai n i love new things Wink
Jab se show khatam hua hai sach mai raya pe imagination bhi khatam hogayi Ouch


Aww..sooo sweet...thank u sooo much yar..it means a lot...aur achha karne ki himmat milti h..to ab aur achhe se pakaungiTongue
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