New FF ~~Itna karo na mujhe pyar~~ part9 on pg32

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Posted: 2014-09-14T09:43:40Z
Hellooo everyone...

hanji to m finally aa hi gyi..bht socha...jinhone kaha padhenge raya ke bina bhi..unke bare me bhi aur jinhone kaha raya ke bina nhi padhenge unke bare me bhi...chalo me going to write..with rampriya & without raya...dekhte hain kya hota h...I am on the way..hoping for best result...



actually jabse mne suna h ki sakshi ka naya show anewala h on love triangle. .tabse hi mere deemag me khujli chalu h...to serial ka to ata pata h nhi ki ayega ya nhi pr m chalu ho gyi apni imagination lekar...kya karu adat se mazbur...lol..aur to aur mne iska nam bhi whi rakh diya jis nam se serial ki news h..hihihi..so here I am presenting a new ff..named..

"itna karo na mujhe pyar"

charactes are like that...

ram kapoor as ram kapoor

sakshi tanwar as priya

ronit roy as krishna 

jai kalra as vikram shergill

tarana raja as neha

baki ke character kahani ki demand ke hisab se judte jayenge...

preludes. ..

its a story about three people whom r connected together bcz of some fizzy circumstances jise hum so called pyar kehte hain...jo inhe apas me milata aur juda karta rhta h..pyar ki khasiyat ye hoti h ki hum uske ant tak uske anjam ko nhi samjh pate hain pr uske ant ko pane ki chah me use sath lekar chalte hi jate hain...

they all r working for a drama company...they r actors with at their glances. ..

scene .. priya's view...

whenevr I am with him..dnt why I lost my self in his charm..but hv to b vry strong bcz he is not mine..main ye sochte hue ram ke sath chalti ja rhi thi..achanak wo ruka aur bola..

ram...priya u r too good jan

me..excuse me...main apki jan nhi hu apki jan wo gyi...dnt u get that..

ram ajeeb si nazaro se meri trf dekh rha tha par m chali gyi usne awaz di priya priya keh kar..pr mne ignore kar diya...

achanak meri ankh khul gyi..dekha to khud ko bed pr paya..itni tired aur neend me thi ki mujhe kuchh yad nhi rat me kya hua..pr ye sapna hamesha mujhe yado me guma deta h...I only remember my husband's few words. .whe he wishprs in my ears last night...

"this is 4th time priya when I carry u ..its really very preciouse to me..to having u like this in my arms..I feel so protective for u when I do this"

I really pitty for that man..uff..how could I do this with him..I was searching for him then I saw him sleeping on floor vry calmly. .he had an beautiful smile on face...ufff he is so handsome..I cn undrstand why everyone fall for him..pr main use jaga nhi payi aur apna blancket uske upar dal kar balcony me chali gyi...


to b continue. ...

if u all want to read more please let me know..

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Edited by veena23 - 2015-11-03T09:51:15Z
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Posted: 2014-09-14T10:02:48Z
Awesome concept pls continue soon
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Posted: 2014-09-14T10:33:16Z
Wowww interesting story...
Continue soon plsss...


Uff !!! Like button is not working properly I'll like this later
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Posted: 2014-09-14T10:37:46Z
Thanks for the pm Smile

Yaayyy like button working now Smile Tongue Edited by jodude - 2014-09-14T10:39:21Z
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Posted: 2014-09-14T10:38:34Z
interesting concept Smile
continue soon
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Posted: 2014-09-14T10:55:33Z
Lovely concept
continue soon
Thanks for the PM Smile
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Posted: 2014-09-14T11:12:18Z
awesome concept thanks for pm continue soon
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Posted: 2014-09-14T11:14:25Z
hmm welcome back boss ...!!!LOLTongue
intersting n very nicely described intro ...Tongue
love triangle Day Dreaming
waitinggg ... update soon ..!!WinkSmile
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