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New FF ~~Itna karo na mujhe pyar~~ part9 on pg32 - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
aweee.e... so it's about raya or not... ???...i know u are a crazy balh fan one of us... please pm...i wanna read it but the thought it's not about raya... stops me...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Plzz update na!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
kaha gayab ho gaye Veena di... plz continue karo na...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Very sorry guys...ghayab ho gyi thi..hihi.but aayi hu phir se update lekar..hope aap sab sath denge...
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally..m ready to pen down...grrr..aise lag hi nhi rha hai ki mne kabhi kuchh likha hai life me...its like for the first time i try to write..hihi..kuchh bhi pta nhi chal rha h kahan se shuru kru kahan khtm kiya tha..raya gye to deemag se imagination bhi chala gya...itne man se aur ummeed se ki sakshi ayegi "itna kro na pyar " me sochke ye story shuru ki to usme bhi sakshi nhi aayi..to m bhi atak gyi...but ye adhuri padi h to kuchh to karna hi padega iska...ab continue kru ya last update likhu samjh nhi aa rha h..last update likhungi to yhi pr finish.without any particular end...jiski jo marzi wo end imagine krle...continue krungi to turn twist hain..hehe..ek story likhne ke liye kitna sochna padhta h..khair aage badhte hain...baki kahani ki progress aur public ke intrest pr depend krega,...

filhal to baat ye h ki chhoda kahan tha...aur jaha chhoda tha public ko wo yad bhi h ya nhi...are yar..nhi bhi yad ho to school days ki trh revision kar lena 6 part hi to hain...khair kahani abhi tak bhuli bisari yado me chal rhi thi...ram priya aur unke yar dosto ke ird gird ghumti hui...jisme pyar takrar ijhar sab kuchh tha...pr ek aise mod pr aakr ruk gyi jahan se sab badal gya...aur hum haqeeqat ki duniya me aa gye...so moving on update hope u all like it...

part 7

priya's POV

pyar bht ajeeb hota h...jb tak sapne jaisa hota h khubsurat lagta h..jb haqeeqat se takra jata hai to insaan handle nhi kar pata h..par kyun nhi kar pata hai...jeena to haqeeqat ke hi sath hota hai na...sapno ke sath to nhi jiya ja sakta...ankhe to kholni padti hain..to theek hai na..jo haqeeqat me hai usme khubsurati dhundhi jaa sakti hai...aisa nhi hai ki har haqeeqat sirf daraye hi...sapne bhi to darawne hote hain..phir bhi hum dekhna nhi chhodte..kuchh dard dene wale bhi hote hain phir bhi hum dekhna nhi chhodte ..mushkil bhi hote hain...phir bhi hum dekhna nhi chhodte...to hum jeena hi kyu chhod dete hain...jaise sapne pyare hote hain..waise hi jindgi bhi to pyari honi chahiye...

inhi sab uljhano me uljhi hui main sapne se haqeeqat me aa jati hu sirf ek aahat se..samne dekha to patidev pyari si smile ke sath khade hain..he wish me morning..m kuchh keh pati isse pehle hi door bell gyi..reply me sirf smile dekar door open krne chali gyi..wo abhi bhi whi khade the...

door pr koi hath me bookey liye khada tha..bola mujhse

boy...excuseme ..mrs.priya ram kapoor this is for u..from ur love..

mujhe kuchh samjh nhi aya..mne phir se patidev ki trf dekha wo abhi bhi muskura rhe the..main kuchh kehti tabse pichhe se awaz aayi...

excuse me..ye mera hai..aap glt room me lekr aa gye..m priya ram kapoor hu.

ufff..ab jake sans aayi mujhe..aur ab mujhe patidev ki smile pr exactly gussa aa rha tha...aur us boy pr bhi..subah subah meri sari himmat par pani pherne aa gya pta nhi kahan se is ram kapoor ke naam ke sath...i was like...gggrrr..to bola mne dono ko suna kar..."exactly...not priya ram kapoor..its priya krishna oberoi..& dnt u dare to forget it again" 

boy...i m sorry mam...wo room no ki wajah se mistake ho gyi..pls m vry sorry..

mne gusse door band kr diya..krishna abhi bhi khade khade has rhe hain..ab to smile aur badi ho gyi...i really hate this man..dnt know ise kis baat se kya fark padega..pr pta nhi kya hai iske andr..jo mujhe bas me kr leta h ..mere gusse ko bhi...main bhi janti hu wo bhi janta hai ki hum ekdusre se na to pyar krte hain na hi apni khushi se sath me...lekin phir bhi use pta hai ki agr wo do min aur mujhe is smile ke sath dekhega to m muskuraungi hi..& see...itna sochte sochte do min ho bhi gye..aur smile aa bhi gyi...kya karu main iska...

krishna...relax yar ho jata h..log hain kr dete hain gltiya...m to ye soch rha hu tumhe gussa kaise aane laga hai

me..vry funny..m chai le aati hu

krishna..nhi mujhe late ho rha h shoot pr jana h whi pi lunga...tum nashta wgrh kar lena..

me..nahi nahi..main bhi chalungi..phir whi se hostel chali jaungi...

krishna...aaj hi.?

me..obviously mera bhi shoot hai..aur waise bhi hum sath me nhi rh sakte to ye kal karna hi hai..to aaj hi kyu nhi..do u hv any prblm?

krishna...no no...main tumhare hi liye bol rha tha..if u feel well.. to aaj hi chalte hain..

me..hmm..m ok..& i hv to..tum bhi yha nhi rahoge..?

krishna...are nhi problm hota h..akele manage krna ghr se..hostel hi bttr h..m to hamesha hi whi se wrk krta hu

me...han i know...theek h phir chalte hain..m bhi taiyar ho jati hu...

krishna...hmm

krishna's POV

ek din me jindgi insan ko sapno se kaise haqeeqat me le aati hai ye ek rat me dekh liya humne..i know humdono pyar bhi nhi krte aur mazburi me hi sath hain..but i felt ye sath itna bhi bura nhi hai..dost to hum hain hi ekdusre ke kabse...aur jante bhi bht achhe se hain ekdusre ko...aur priya to hai bhi bht achhi ladki..we cn make a bttr life together... khair dekhte hain...safar to abhi shuru hua hai..age jane ram kya hoga..nhiii...ram nhi..bhagwan..huh..pr ek baat hai..gusse me dialogue bht sahi marti hai..haha...sun legi na to kha jayegi mujhe..chalo krishna beta...kam kro..abhi sirf shaadi hui pati nhi bane ho tum..aram se raho...

priya...kya soch rhe ho?

me,..kuchh nhi..

priya...kuchh kehna h?

me...nahi to

priya...to phir?

me...kya...

priya...are abhi to keh rhe the bht late ho rha h chai bhi nhi pina h aur m taiyar bhi hokar aa gyi...tum yhi khade ho...aaj yhi khade hokr sab krna h kya?

me...hahaha...ufff..kitna taunt krti ho yar tum..khtrnak biwi ho,..

priya...hihi..taiyar ho jao wrna m chai nashta bnana shuru krungi..

me...nhi meri maa dnt hv time yar..director kha jayega..aata hu 5 min me...

author's POV

dono apne apne mind setup ke sath jindgi ki nayi raho pr nikal pade hain..sath inko la to diya gya h..ab sath me hona aur sath nibhana iska rasta inhe hi tay krna hai...waise bhi is sath me kuchh kami bhi nhi hai sivay pyar ke...aur pyar ka kya h..jaise jindagi se chala gya h waise hi aa bhi jayega...safar chalta h to humsafar bhi bnte hain..kuch pyar se sath aate hain koi dard se sath aate hain...pyar ka sath to chhoot gya..dard ka sath baki hai..dekhte hain kaun kitna sath nibhata h...

jindgi hai abhi to pta nhi kitne mod legi...kaun kaun milega bichhdega..pr chalna to insan ka kam hai..so we hv to continue...

khair...dono pahonch gye...krishna director ke pas chala gya aur priya seedha hostel hi aa gyi...qki usko bhi pta tha ki abhi wo kam krne ki situation me hai nhi...but move on to krna hi h aur krna hi hota..life cn not stop for any reason... aur use pta h ki hostel aayegi to use neha milegi jo uske liye kisi medicine dose se kam nhi h..chahe priya kisi bhi situation me ho neha uska mood fresh kr hi deti hai..priya soch hi rhi ki tabse neha samne se aa hi gyi..priya ne jaise hi use dekha pta nhi kya hua use...usse lipat kr lagi rone...neha is like..itna sabkuchh hua priya ki life me pr itna wierd to kabhi nhi hui itna kyun ro rhi hai...kal to aram se shaadi ki krishna ke sath gyi...shaadi bhi dono ne apni hi marzi se ki...ratbhar me aisa kya ho gya..itna to kabhi nhi roti kisi ke samne jb tak ki tut na jaye...ab neha se handle nhi ho rha tha...wo shuru...now only god knows ki ab kitne kisse bnenge

neha...priya...priyaaa...kya hua yar...kyun ro rhi ho itna...priya...bolo yar...kya kiya us krishna ne...?...jabrdsti ki tumhare sath?...mara tumhe?...torture kiya?...bolo to yar...police station chale kya..koi ehsan nhi kiya h usne tumpr ki kuchh bhi krega wo...

neha ki bate sun ke priya ka rona ekdm se band ho gya wo bas use dekhe ja rhi thi..

neha...kya?

priya..tumhara deemag hai ya atom bomb yar..

neha...oye what do u mean..tum itna ro rhi thi kuchh bol nhi rhi thi to kya kru..ye sb to ayega hi deemag me..wo chhodo pehle bolo krishna kya kiya...kyu rulaya tumhe...?..chhodungi nhi m use agr usne kuchh ulta seedha kiya tumhare sath to..

priya...relax..m ok...relax..kuchh nhi kiya usne aisa..even usne to aisa kuchh bhi nhi kiya jo mujhe ya kisi ko bhi bura lage..he is perfect in his way..yhi soch ke bas rona aa gya ki jisse itni ummede ki usne kuchh nhi diya..aur jisse kuchh nhi manga usne din ki shuruat ek khubsurat muskan ke sath di...kitni ajeeb hoti h jindgi...krishna is a..

priya kehte kehte ruk jati h...neha puchhti h kya hua..aur mud ke dekhti h to samne se sarika aa rhi hoti h

priya...ye yha kyun aa rhi hai?

neha..oh ye...hamari room mate hai..hamare sath hi rhegi

priya...what ..?..pr ye to krishna ki

neha..we cnt do anything..yha ke rules follow krne padenge

priya...pr agr ise sb pta chal gya to..

neha..kuchh nhi pta chalega..m hu na

priya..duffr whi to prblm hai..hum sb to chup rh hi lenge pr tum

neha...arr yar cmmon..m not that bad..relax..kuchh nhi hoga..chalo bf krte hain bht bhukh lagi h mujhe..hi sarika...hw r u..welcome

sarika..hehe..hello..neha..hi priya..m gud..thanx yar

priya..hehe..hi...chale nashta krne..

sab wha se to chale jate hain...pr priya ke dil aur deemag ke liye ek aur uljhan..pta nhi jindgi jb uljhti hai to uljhati hi kyu jati h...hadh h

to b continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Veena di aapne update kiya
Mujhe laga tha k kabhi nhi karoge 😆
Will comment after reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow...finally update...reserved will read and comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow after long gap u updated it..
nice story bt is update me ram tha hi nhi..
priya koi krishna se shaadi kii.. ab a krishna kha se aaya
waiting for next...pls cntnu sooon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by-peeyara

Wow Veena di aapne update kiya
Mujhe laga tha k kabhi nhi karoge 😆
Will comment after reading


Hahahaha...kar diya na ab...ab cmmnt bhi kro
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Posted: 8 years ago
she is married to krishna!! not ram! what!!! means u were true about raya in this but not raya story? :-( so bad yaar...wese its a story..so who is Mrs.Kapoor? or there isnt any Mrs.Kapoor? just plz clear my doubt...is this a raya luv story...coz sorry to say..but if its not am quite least interested in reading it further..