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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Aashii its so touching update dear

Aman & Asad's relation is getting strong day by day

i am eagerly waiting for the revelation

pls update soon 

thanks for pm


thnxxx dear...
i will update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Hey just read ur story in one go n it is absolutely amazing. Loved the interaction between asad and aman. But I find hardly any convo between asad n zoya. Need some Asya moments too. N plz waiting for the revelation. U got ur 30+likes n replies too. So plz soon. N can u send me a PM plz...


welcome dear...
thnxx for liking my work...
actually asad ayesha meeting was not too good thats why i m focusing on asad aman bond...
i m sending u buddy request so accept it for pms...
i wil update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82

good update..

 nice bonding bw asad and aman


thnxxx dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: keyahira

OMG
Ayesha is like worried if Aman gets too attached to Asad
H.mm what revelations?   ðŸ˜›


u have to stay tuned for that dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333



if a something then it will destroy the whole suspense but i have to admit u think really advance haan point pakar hi lia...


mai bhi mjhe b pata hai..😃
bcz there is a doc in the story 😉
jas puttar moma pe gai hai 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update 
Loving asad and aman closeness and friendship 
Is asad still thinking he can be his son or just enjoying a friendship 
Loved how asad came to say bye to him he took him out and came back and put him to bed 
Aww he kissed him and she caressed the kissed spot 
A feeling 
So engagement he wears a sherwani for his friend 
Love the song so Ayesha in full on appi roll really hopeMeehan don't like her 
So asad feeds aman she feels weird should she feel good or bad 
And then he takes the food and feed her oh oh uncomfortable 
So arman see this hoping she opens up
Oh oh revelation abt 
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50


mai bhi mjhe b pata hai..😃
bcz there is a doc in the story 😉
jas puttar moma pe gai hai 😆


thats great...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update 

Loving asad and aman closeness and friendship 
Is asad still thinking he can be his son or just enjoying a friendship 
Loved how asad came to say bye to him he took him out and came back and put him to bed 
Aww he kissed him and she caressed the kissed spot 
A feeling 
So engagement he wears a sherwani for his friend 
Love the song so Ayesha in full on appi roll really hopeMeehan don't like her 
So asad feeds aman she feels weird should she feel good or bad 
And then he takes the food and feed her oh oh uncomfortable 
So arman see this hoping she opens up
Oh oh revelation abt 
Continue soon


thnxxx dear...
asad is enjoying his friendship only...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Salam... i hope zaida wait nahi karna para... any way thank you sooo much for appreciating my work... i m glad u like it... here the next part enjoy...

                                  Adhoori Mohabbat



Banner Credit goes to Immortal Love... ðŸ¤—


Part 9:


Maliks and Ayesha agreed to arrange all functions together for bride and groom but they prefer to stay at hotel as it's a ritual that bride and groom don't live under the same roof after date fixing and all (it's a ritual in Muslims)...
 
Haldi
 
Next day Haldi was arranged at Khans residence... Ayesha and Maliks came with Shagun Ki Haldi for Nuzhat... They applied haldi on Nuzhat and Arman...
 
Aman: mama yeh haldi kyun lagaty hain???
 
Ayesha: iss se apky mamu or mami or bhi pretty ho jayengy...
 
Aman: mjhy bhi lagani hai mama...
 
Ayan: ohhh apko bhi pretty pretty hona hai par yeh sab shadi k time par hota hai abhi to app bachy ho...
 
Aman: par mjhy abhi lagani hai bad mein chance mily ya...
 
Ayesha: Amann... she left the hall...
 
Aman: sorry mama but...
 
Arman: Aman it's not funny... ab aapi gussa ho gayi na...
 
Aman: I know how to handle her... excuse me... he also left after his mama...
 
Njama: Arman why are you tensed???
 
Arman: nothing baji...
 
Ayan: Aman ne kuch kaha na shayad chance mily ya nahi... aisa kyun kaha uss ne...
 
Arman: wo bas aisy bolta rehta hai bacha hai na... he said while wiping his tear...
 
Asad was listening but remain silent because he didn't want to interrupt in their personal life but he definitely sensed that something is fishy...
 
Ayesha was sitting in the lawn when Aman came and sat beside her...
 
Aman: sorry mama...
 
Ayesha: you know na I can't live without you... she said while shedding tears...
 
Aman: sorry and I promise ainda aisa nahi hoga...
 
Ayesha: promise me you will not leave me... plzzz...
 
Aman: I promise and they hugged...
 
Ayesha was crying her heart out and Asad was witnessing all this with teary eyes... After so many days he really missed Zoya... after meeting Aman he never missed Zoya and he himself don't know the reason but seeing them crying but in such emotional moment they were together so he missed Zoya... if he had handled that matter wisely then his Zoya never left him... He prayed to Allah to give him just one chance and also prayed for his friend who had made a special place in his heart in some days...
 
Mehandi & Sangeet
 
Next day, mehandi and sangeet was arranged... there was a hustle and bustle in the house... Ayesha brought mehandi for Nuzhat and Arman told her to apply it from groom's side but an old lady stops her...
 
Lady: Arry yeh shagun ki mehandi hai jo sirf shadi shuda hi lagati hai or tum to...
 
Arman: meri appi married nahi hain par wo yeh rasam karengi agar apko problem hai to hum apki koi help nahi kar sakty...
 
Ayesha: Arman rehny do na Dilshad aunty rasam kar lengi...
 
Dilshad: Ayesha baat rasam ki nahi hai tum etni aasani se apny rights se kesy hatt sakti ho or jaha tak logo k bolny ki baat hai humey uss se koi fark nahi parta tum Nuzhat ko mehandi lagao gi bas...
 
Ayesha: aunty app...
 
Dilshad: Ayesha late ho raha hai rasam start karo...
 
Arman: appi do it... it's an order...
 
Ayesha applied first dot on Nuzhat's palm and then mehandi designer took the hold... The color of mehnadi was really good and all compliments Arman and Nuzhat...
 
Ayan: chalo aik function to ho gya now sangeet start karen...
 
Najma: haan bhaijaan app hi start karo hum sab follow karengy...
 
Ayan: No way start to groom side se hoga kyun Ayesha...
 
Ayesha: aj to apko start karna hoga Ayan but I promise I will join you...
 
Ayan: okay beautiful...
 
All were enjoying function but Asad and Aman were watching all this from far end of the hall...
 
Aman: Mr. Khan apko pata hai mene pehly kabhi bhi etni achi wedding attend nahi ki... apki shadi bhi aisy hi hui thi...
 
Asad: meri shadi Taj Mahal k smany hui thi...
 
Aman: wao phir to app sab ne boht enjoy kiya hoga...
 
Asad: haan or sab se zaida Zoya ne... he stops in his tracks...
 
Aman: you really love her haina...
 
Asad: hmmm she is my life...
 
Aman: phir unhy jany kyun dia...
 
Asad: I was at mistake now Allah is testing my patience...
 
Aman: mama kehti hain Allah apny sab se best logo ka exam lety hain and I know app pass ho jao gy...
 
Asad: I hope so...
 
Aman: aik baat kaho???
 
Asad: Mr. Khan apko permission ki zaroorat nahi hai...
 
Aman: app na apni life main har kaam dil se kiya karo meri mama ki tarha...
 
Asad: apki mama boht intelligent hain...
 
Aman: akhir meri mama hain... and he giggles...
 
Ayesha and Arman danced on "Kachi Kalliyan Mat Toro" and at end every body joins them...
 
Nikaah
 
Nikaah was going to held in Dargah as per Arman's wish and in evening reception was arranged and Arman and Nuzhat have to leave for Mumbai same evening... everything was planned...
 
Khans were all ready to leave for Dargah but Asad excuses himself and made his way towards Aman's room... he was at door mesmerized by the view Ayesha was getting ready Aman and he was standing on bed (shirtless)... his thoughts griffted to Zoya who always stood up on the bed... Asad mentally scolds himself for always comparing Aman and Zoya...
 
Aman: Mr. Khan apko knock karna tha na...
 
Asad: I m sorry but why are you not ready yet???
 
Aman: bas mood nahi tha...
 
Ayesha: mood nahi tha ya mama ko tang karna ab jaldi se kurta pehn lo hume late ho raha hai???
 
Aman: mama iss kurty k aagy cut hai na...
 
Ayesha: it's a simple cut shona...
 
Asad: cut se kya hota hai Mr. Khan see mera bhi aagy se cut hai???
 
Aman: Mr. Khan apky six-packs hain or mere six-packs on the way hain aisy acha nahi lagta...
 
Ayesha turned towards Asad to look at his six-packs and found herself checking him out but she soon manages to divert her attention towards Aman... Asad was embarrassed in front of Ayesha but her little drooling section reminds of Zoya... Aman was now ready ant brought Ayesha and Asad from their thoughts...
 
Aman: Mr. Khan I m ready...
 
Asad: Mr. Khan Can you do me a favor???
 
Aman: wo kesy...
 
Asad: aaj app mere sath chalo gey nikaah k liye...
 
Aman: I m sorry Mr. Khan but mjhy or mama ko mamo sath aan hai mene promise kiya hai or Khans apna promise nahi bholty... haina mama...
 
Ayesha: hmmm...
 
Asad: okay but wapsi pe aap mere sath aa rahy ho...
 
Aman: promise buddy...
 
Asad: okay see you soon...
 
Khans left for Dargah... Rehan and Maha also left... Arman, Ayesha and Aman were also on their way but stops near the mall because Arman forgot to buy a gift for Nuzhat so he went in the mall...
 
Aman: mamo ko gift leny main etna time kyun lag raha hai???

Ayesha: shona mamo aa jayengy...
 
Aman: iss se acha tha main Mr. Khan ke sath hi chala jata...
 
Ayesha: App wapsi pe Sir k sath aa rahy ho phir ab mama sath enjoy karo na...
 
Aman: mama mjhy na... he stops and placed a hand on his chest...
 
Ayesha: mjhy kya shona... she turns and panicked by seeing him in pain... she made her way to the backseat...
 
Ayesha: Aman what happened is it paining app ne mama ko kyun nahi btaya... she made him lie in her lap...
 
Amna: mama don't cry abhi sahi ho jaye ga... he was controlling his pain but she knew he was acting strong in front of him...
 
Ayesha: hum abhi Dr. ke pass ja rahy hain don't worry shona mama hain na...
 
Ayesha called Arman...
 
Arman: ji aapi...
 
Ayesha: Aman ko pain ho raha hai come soon Arman we need to go to the Dr...
 
Arman dropped his cell on the ground and made his way towards his car... on reaching there he found a crying Ayesha and a pale Aman and they made their way towards hospital...
 
On the other hand all were waiting for Arman... Rehan called him but his cell phone was switched off... and Ayesha was not answering... All were tensed...
 
Ayesha and Arman reached at hospital but there was a strike and doctors refused to treat Aman...
 
Ayesha: kesy Dr. hain app log apko bas apny kaam se matlab hai or patients ke bary main nahi sochty app...
 
Dr. I m sorry mam but we are on strike...
 
Arman grabbed the collar of that Dr...
 
Arman: agar Aman ko kuch ho gya na to dekh longa...
 
Dr: sir app zaberdasti nahi kar sakty...
 
Ayesha: Arman leave him... dr plzzz mera beta boht takleef main hai help him plzzz... I beg of you...
 
Dr: main apky bachy ko treat nahi kar sakta but aik kaam kar sakty hain app kisi or Dr. ko yaha ly aaiye or wo apky bety ko treat kar sakta hai...
 
Ayesha was trying her level best to sooth Aman's pain but Aman's condition was getting worse...
 
Ayesha: plzzz mere beta heart patient hai app plzzz help kejieye... na dr kahan se la sakti hoon...
 
Dr. mam yaha iss waqt koi bhi heart specialist dr available nahi hai but app try kejieye...
 
Arman: aapi Asma bhabi bhi heart specialist hain na unhy bulaty hain...
 
Ayesha: haan Arman Asma hamari help kar sakti hai call her plzzz...
 
Arman: aapi don't cry Aman ko kuch nahi hoga I promise... he searches his cell but he remembered that he had drooped his cell in the mall...
 
Ayesha: Arman hurry up I can't see him in pain...
 
Arman: appi main Asma bhabi ko leny jar aha hoon app plzzz Aman ka khayal rakhna... saying so he left...
 
In Dargah, Rehan was calling Ayesha again and again...
 
Rehan: yeh aurat hamesha hamari family ki khushiyan barbaad karti hai... pehly bhi eski vaja se...
 
Dilshad: beta wo log aaty hi hongy...
 
Rehan: nahi aunty Ayesha ki vaja se meri biwi hum sab se dor ho gayi or aj jab etny arsay bad hamari family main acha time aa raha hai yeh Arman ko ly kar pata nahi kaha reh gayi...
 
Asad: relax yaar ho sakta hai wo traffic main hon...
 
Rehan: nahi Asad sab meri galti hai mjhy khud Arman ko yaha lana chahieye tha...
 
Molvi: maaf kejieye ga app logo ko Nikah mansookh (postpone) karna hoga humey aik committee member k ghar jana hai Quran Khwani k liye...
 
Rashid: molvi sahib bas thori dair rukieye meri beti ka nikah hai or...
 
Molvi: dekhieye humara jana zaroori hai hum sham ko app k ghar aa jayen gy... he left...
 
Nuzhat was shattered and Najma and Asma were consoling her...
 
Asad: Ammi ghar chalty hain...
 
Dilshad: haan beta Nuzhat kafi shocked hai chalo...
 
They were about to go when Arman entred in Dargah... Rehan moves towards him and slapped him...
 
Rehan: kahan thy tum... kuch pata bhi hai aaj tumhara nikah tha or tum...
 
Asad: Rehan gussa hony se baat bigar jaye gi...
 
Rehan: nahi Asad yeh sab Ayesha ki vaja se ho raha hai haina Arman kahan thy tum or Ayesha kahan hai...
 
Arman: bhai wo aapi or main aa rahy thy par...
 
Rehan: dekha yeh Ayesha k sath hi tha or kahan hai wo mera phone bhi nahi utha rahi...
 
Arman: bhai main apko sab btao ga abhi mjhy wapis jana hai... Asma bhabi we need your help...
 
Rehan: pehly meri baat ka jawab do Arman... kahan thy tum... tumhy pata hai hum sabki kitni insult hui hai sirf us Ayesha ki vaja se... or uper se phone bhi nahi utha rahi... pata nai aisa konsa kaam tha jot um dono ko nikah k liye nahi aany dy raha tha...
 
Arman: bhai... bas boht ho gya app kyun aapi ko blame kar rahy hain agar phone nahi uthaya to kya hua hum aa rahy thy na...
 
Rehan: boht jaldi aa rahy thy tum jab k yaha molvi sahib bhi nahi hain wo ja chuky hain or agar tum log late thy to inform kar sakty thy na ab main Asad ko kya koun dekhaon ga... or yeh sab us aurat ki vaja se hua hai... sab usi ki galti hai...
 
Arman: sahi keh rahy hain app bhai sab aapi ki galti hai usy apko inform karna chahieye tha usy apny bachy ko zindagi or moat k beech chor kar apko inform karna tha galti ho gayi bhai...
 
Asad stood rooted on his spot and he felt like somebody has stabbed in his heart... Aman his friend... his Mr. Khan... what happened to him... tears made their way...
 
Asad: kya hua Aman ko???
 
Arman: wo hospital main hai bhaijan or main yaha Asma bhabi ko leny aya tha wo heart specialist hain na...
 
Asad: Asma kyun tum log Dr k pass jaty wo kya kary gi wo heart specialist hai...
 
Arman: bhaijan Aman heart patient hai or aj doctors strike pe hain to humny permission li hai k hamara dr Aman ko treat kar sakta hai bhabi app plzzz aaiye na...
 
Asma: main chal rahi hoon par tum uski condition mjhy btao takey main usy jaty hi proper treatment dy sakon...
 
Asad: haan main bhi aa raha hoon ammi app log jaieye main or Asma hospital...
 
Dilshad: haan tum log jao or mjhy inform kar dena...
 
Asad, Arman and Asma made their way towards hospital where Ayesha was waiting for them impatiently...


Sooo that's it...
kesa laga????
ignore my mistakes...
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next update till 40+ likes and 20+ replies...
with love Ashii...
 
 

Edited by ashiii333 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

thnxxx dear...