Originally posted by: ApekshaM
omg... I'm mesmerized by ur writing dear.. it actually played the whole sequence in front of my eyes.. he he.. pratap on mission.. u used the names of forum members.. very nice,, I have no words to explain but it was really astonishing episode.. waiting eagerly for next part update asap..
Originally posted by: Red-Devil
Lovely update Aru !!!!πππ
well..padhai kar kar ke thoda pak gaya tha..and then..I got ur PM..
so..I started reading this update...
aur kasam se...jab maine mera aur vaibhav ka part dekha na..there was a constant grin on my face..throughout...π
that was really awesome part..(coz usmey main tha..ππ) 'cute' to be precise..
jee bawdo ho gayo !!@@@π
and..ADB for ur test..!
Originally posted by: ...Kamu...
Reswa
Unress****
Itna badaa update π² how you manage to write my gawd π²
Fabulous job π
Coming to update.
I m toh fan if your write up. Such a brilliant writer you are. Hstss off.
I loved loved my part π so funky I was π trading pratap π€£
Mera sapna pura kardiya tune π
Waiting for your next part.
Originally posted by: RoshiniluvPrAja
aru itna bada stry ..finally pad liya..its really beautiful..har ek scene beautifully xpress kiya h..mujhe jyaada xpress krna nhi aata h..itne me hi meri feeling smj ja..waiting4 ur nxt update
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