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part 15

Ishita was shocked listening this even Mihika.

Ishita "Raman aap kya keharahen hain?" Even though Ishita don't like Shagun she never hated her but she always pitied her for what she was.

Indirectly she has a soft corner for her as it is because of her that she got a husband like Raman and  biggets void of her life is filled with Ruhi.

Raman "Ishita ussney poorey zindagee khudkey baarey mey socha but marthey waqt ek maa ke taraha mar."

Raman "Ishita tum jaantheyhon naa main Aman ko dhoondh rahan hun.Ussey key haath Shagun ."

Then Raman tells her that Ashok's partner employed Aman for this job to kidnap his family but Parmeet reminds them about Adi being Raman's son and biggets weakness.

Then Shagunnand Ashok have an argument to not go after Adi as he is legally his son and don't play with Adi's emotions .This was overheard by Adi and he gets to know about how he got manipulated by his mother since childhood and Adi silently calls Raman and tells him over what happened and Raman rushes to help him and asks him to come out of house quickly.

Raman was able to save Adi but they got Shagun whome Raman tried to save along with Madan,Hercules and others help but it proved to be disaster and they could'nt.

Raman "Ishita main kuch nahen karpaaya.Adi bahuth roo rahan thaa.Mainey ussey samjhaaney key bahuth khoshish kee .Theb mujhye patha chala kee who loog tumhaarey peechey aa rahen hain issliyen main yahan aagaya bahaana banaakey."

Ishita "Aapney mujhey bathaaya kyon nahen."

Raman "Shagun ney hummarey saath bahuth kuch kiyan lekin usskey mauth key baad hee humey usskey acchey kaam yaad aayengey."

Raman "Shagun Adi ko bachaaney key liyen apney jaan de dee.Main usska khooni ko saja jaroor diladoonga."

Raman "Ishita tumhey Adi ko samhaalana hoga."

Ishita "Raman Adi aapka beta hain matlab mera beta main jaroor usska khyaal rakhoongi."

Raman  "Ishita mujhey do din bahaar jaana hain.Tum kuch bhee problem ho mujhey phone karkey bathadena."

Ishita "Ishita Adi ko ek maa kee jaroori hain.Tumsey acche ma main ussey kabhee nahen de paonga." Holding her hands as Ishita have tears in her eyes.

Raman "Madan.Hercules megha aur kuch security aa rahen hain tum ghabaraana math.Who log apney jaan dhaav pey lagaakey hummarey raksha karengey.Romi bhee aarahan hain."

Raman then deletes the recording of Ishita voice from his mobile which was recorded of her previous conversation.

Raman "Ishita mera phone tap mey hain aur mera saarey conversation record hongey  safety key liyen."

Ishita's mind gets diverted from Shagun's death to Raman's safety.

Raman understood by change in her expression.

Raman "Ishita unkaa target main nahen hun.Mujhey kuch nahen hoga.Just trust me for this time."

Ishita "Raman aap mujhsey har baath kyon chuppathey hain.Aapko mujhpar vishwaas nahen hain."

Raman "Ishita mujhey tumpar poora vishwaas hain" signing to Mihika dna Megha to leave.

Raman drags her closer.

Raman "But kyaa karon tum to chothee baath pey hee rothee hon.Poora seti hon.Kuch bhee ho rona suru kar dethee hon.Yeh baath bathadiya tho aasun ka tank khula hee rahega aur main apney biwi ka khoobsuurat smile miss karoonga.Issliyen nahen bathaaya."

Ishita gets a smile on her face hearing this and clears her tears.

Ishita "Hum Ruhi ko kyaa bathaayengey.Raman ussey bahuth effect karega."

Raman "Rihi ko math bathaon.Ussey yeh kehnaa ke who out of country gayen hain aur nahen aayegi."

Ishita "Raman aap Adi key aaney thak rukhengey."

Raman "Nahen Ishita main abhee jaa rahnahun.Tum Ruhi ko samjhadeena hum day out doosrey din rakhengey."

Raman leaves telling this.He changes Hercules chain  to that action mode one.Rechecks Madan's system and his gun then leaves alone.

All discuss about Shagun for few time and give her their sympathy.

Around afternoon Romi brings Adi along with him .

All are confused initially who he was but Ishita confirms this .

Ruhi gets excited to see Adi .Adi's condition was little worse as his eyes were red crying continuously.

Ishita understood situation will get worse and take Adi alone to other room to speak to him.

Adi "Aunty papa kahan hain.Who mujhsey door kyon jaa rahen hain."

Ishita "Aise baath nahen hain Adi papa loves you papa loves you very much."

Adi "Aap papa key support karengey.THo who mujhsey milney kyon nahe aaye.Jab sey yeh huan hain mainey papa ko nahe  dekha."

Adi "Papa mujhsey gussa hain.Mainey papa ko kabhee pass nahen aaney diyan.I always hated him .Shagun mama ney mujhsey jhoot bola tha.Papa abh mujhsey door jaa rahen hain." Crying profously.

Ishita "Adi aisey baathey nahen karthey.Shagun mama ney jho bhee kiyan who sabh past tha.Abh usskey baarey mey baath nahen karthey.Who abh yahan nahen hain.Unkey baarey mer buraayi nahen karnaa hain." Clearing his tears.

Ishita "Papa tumsey gussa nahen hain.Tumpey guss hothey tho Ruhi ko bhee door rakhengey kyaa."

Ishita "Aiasa nahen hain.Papa sirk ussko pakadnaa chahtha hain.Issey humey kuch nahen hoga.Papa ko hummara safety important hain"

Adi was hearing carefully.

Ishita "Tum abh roon math.I know tum Shagun sey bahuth pyaar karthey hon.I can never fill it for you but tumhey kuch bhee chahiyen tum mujhey bathaon  I am there for you." Seeing Adi cry.

Ishita "Tumhey kuch bhee chahiyen mujhey bathadena.Main tumhaare mama hee hun."

Ruhi comes rushing there and Adi clears his tears.

Ruhi "Ishima papa kahan gayen hain."

Ishita "Tumhey papa sey kyaa kaam aagayan?"

Ruhi "Ishima papa ney mujhey promise kiyan tha kee main jho bolungi wohi karengey.Abh who kahan gayen."

Ishita "Papa ko kuch urgent kaam thaa issliyen bahaar gayen.Tumhey kyaa chahiyen."

Ruhi looking scared at Adi.

Ruhi "Aap nahen dengey mujhey patha hain."

Ishita "Aisey kaisey mere baby mujhey poochegee aur main nahen doonga."

Ruhi "Aap papa ko phone karon main unsey poochunga aur who aapko bathaayengey."

Ishita does same and  as Adi wonders seeing Ruhi doing that .

Ruhi "Papa mujhey chats khaana hain.Aap Ishima ko boliyen naa."

Ruhi directly keeps call to Ishita.

Ishita "Raman bilkul nahen abh khaana khaaney ka time hain chats bilkul nahen .Who bhee  yahan iss season no way main nahen allow karoongi."

Raman "Please save me yaar.Ek din rules follow nahen karoogi tho kuch nahen hoga.Sirf chats khaaney key liyen pooch rahen hain tumhey banaaney nahen bol rahen hain."

Ishita "Raman usska peet kharaabh hoga.Raman nahen."

Raman and Ishita have  a huge argument over allowing chats for Ruhi.While Ruhi sat beside Adi and was enjoying the argument.In end Raman wins as Ishita agree to allow chats.

Ishita goes outside to tell Romi to bring chats for Ruhi and Adi.

Adi "Ruhi Ishima aur papa argue kar rahen hain tho tum hass rahen thee."

Ruhi "Uffo bhayya.Kyaa hain na yen mera secret hain.Merey liyen naa kuch cheejey papa allow karenegey aur Ishima nahen aur kuch Ishima allow karegee aur kuch papa nahen."

Ruhi " Jab mujhey jissey poochna hain ussey poochlooni aur who doosrey ko manaayengey."

Adi smiles seeing this.He remembers on what ever Adi ask Shagun will give money to him or allot servant for it.He never had fun Ruhi is having seeing tiffs between her parents.

Adi "Jhadhaa bada huan tho."

Ruhi "Kyon hoga.Maon hoo naa kuch nahe n honey doongi main patchup kardoongi."

Ruhi "Main papa sey roothney ka acting karoongi aur papa mujhey mananey key liyen Ishima ko manaayega."

Adi laughs at this.

Then Ishita comes there and bringing what they want.

Ishita serves them .

Ruhi and Adi both sit silently.

Ishita "Abh khaon .Papa sey merey ladaayi karkey laayen hon abh khaa kyon nahen rahen hon."

Ruhi "Mujhey khaana nahen aatha.Hummesha papa khilaathey they naa."

Ishita "Tumhaarey papa ney naa tumhey bigaadkar rakhdiyan."

Keeping a paani poori in her mouth carefully.

Ishita "Adi tum khaon naa."

Adi don't know what to say.H enever had habbit of eating road side food  he knew in his memories Raman making him eat.

Adi "mujhey bhee nahen aatha."

Ishita smiles and makes him eat too.

Ishita "Adi tumhey aur chahiyen."

Ishita,Adi and Ruhi have fun time as Ishita makes them eat and Ruhi patoying her as she called Raman for it.Adi laughing seeing Ruhi that way forgetting everything.

Ishita "Ruhi main Ravan Kumar nahen kee tum mujhey pataon.Maska maar rahen hon."

Ruhi "Nahen Ishima.Main jaanthe hun naa merey Ishima mujhpey kabhee naaraz nahen hongey." Hugging her and winking at Adi.

Ishita "Sweet baby.main abhee aathey hun." And goes for hand wash.

Ruhi "Bhayya Ishima humpar gussa nahen karegee.Yeh baath bolon who bahuth asaani sey calm hojaayengee."

Adi was in different world seeing his own sister enjoying her life with his parents.

Adi "Tum papa ko kaisey convince karoogi who gussa hon tho."

Ruhi "Secret bathaon.Papa ko kuch nahen boolna.Jab papa ka gussa hongey naa tho main roona suru kardoongi aur waapas papa mujhey manaayengey."

Ruhi telling all her secrets.

Ruhi "Bhayya aap hummarey saath rahogey."

Adi "Han main bhee yahen rahoonga."

Ishita comes there.

Ishita "Ruhi abh tumhey competition hain.Papa Adi bhayya ko more gifts layengey."

Ruhi "Nahen main papa sey fight karoongi aur gifts ley loogi."

Ishita "Tum papa sey fight karoogi."

Ruhi whistles as Hercules buzzes there.

Ruhi "Bhayya ek importannt rule hain hum sabh ek party mey hain aur papa akeley ek party."

Ruhi "Hercules hummara main member hain who papa ko rokhega aur pataayega bhee."

Adi and Ishita laugh telling rules to Adi

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update...👏👏👏👏
cute family moments..
Thanks for the pm...😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww I loved this update
ruhi is so cute
I just loved this mother children convo their family time
superb update
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Posted: 9 years ago
so nyc.. loved it how easily Adi feel comfrtble wwid Ishu.. 😊 
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Thanks for the pm dear
Nice update
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soo nice... Cute Ruhi Adi bond...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww...
poor adi... he s goin to enjoy the parents love...

now whr did raman go...

waiitng for nxt part
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part 16

Scene starts with Ruhi telling Adi about Hercules.

Ruhi "Bhayya Hercules hummesha hummarey party mey rahega.But Yeh papa key alaawa kissey ka baath nahen sunega."

Ruhi "Papa ney issey training diyan hain."

Adi "Ruhi main HERCULES ko jaantha hun.Delhi mey pap ney merey saath rakha thaa."

Ruhi "Uffo aaap hummarey summer house gayen they?"

Adi "Han.Bahuth bada hain ."

Ruhi "Bahuth maza aaya hoga naa?"

Adi becomes silent Ishita understands the situation and covers up for Adi.

Ishita "Ruhi bhayya aakeley they naa tho games kaisey khelengey,"

Ruhi "Han Akeley boring hoga.Bhyaa kaun kaun they aapkey saath?"

Adi "Daadi daadu Romi chaachu aur Megha chichi."

Ruhi "Miss M bhee thee."

Adi "Han."

Then Ishita gets a call from Raman and kids get excited.

Raman "Tumney Ruhi ko de dee unkaa chats?"

Ishita "Apney beti sey hee poochloo?"

She keep phone in speaker .
Raman "Ruhi milgayen tumhey tuhaarey chaats?"

Ruhi "Han.Papa Ishima ko chats khilaan a hee nahen aatha.Aap hothey tho bahuth acch hotha,"

Ishita looks at Ruhi shocked.Adi laughing.

Raman "Kitnaa pataogee yaar.Tumhey aur chaahiyen tho Ishima ko bathaadoonga fir sey jagada math banana.Fir uss Jhansi kee Rani ko manaaney me arsoun lagjaathey hain."

Ishita holding Ruhi ears.

Ruhi "Papa aap kabh aaogey?"

Raman "Aaj raath ko aajaonga.Kaam poora nahen huan."

Raman "Adi kyaa kar rahan hain?"

Adi "Papa main yahen hun?"

Raman "Sorry yaar main udhar nahen thaa.Kaam aagayan thaa.Main aaj aajaonga"

Adi "Koi problem nahen Ishita aunty thee naa  yahan."

Raman "Theek hain.Koi problem hon tho Ishita ko bathadena who khudh dekhegee."

Adi "Papausskey baarey mey kuch pathachala?"

Raman "speaker cut karo."

Adi keeps it in normal mode and Raman tells him something and then Adi passes call to Ishita.

While both Ruhi and Adi go after Hercules.

Ishita "Raman kyaa huan thaa?"

Raman "Bhaag gaya bandha.Police yaha  dhoondh rahen hain.But narrow escape thaa."

Ishita  "Raman tho aap ussko pakadney gayen they?Kyaa jaroori thaa aapko jaaney key liyen?Aap kissey aur ko bhee bech saktey hain naa?"

Raman "Ishita itnaa kyon chilla rahen hon?"

Ishita  "Aap aisey karengey tho main kyaa karoongi.Aapko jaaney kee kyaa jaroori thaa.Aapko kuch hogaya tho?"

Raman "Mujhey kuch nahen hoga.Yaar main tumhey itney asaani sey chodney waaley nahen hun.Jindagee bar sathaana hain tumhey."

Ishita smiles "Theek hain aap waapas aarahen hain naa?"

Raman "Han abhee nikal rahan hun.Waapa aajaonga"

Raman "Adi ?"

Ishita "Abh  normal hain.Ruhi sabh samhaal rahen hain.Adi ko occupied rakha.Pehley ro rahan thaa.Abh theek hain.Raman aapko yaha  honey chahiye thaa.Aapko miss kar rahan hain."

Raman "Ishita thankyou yaar.Tumhaarey wajaha sey ho rahan hain.I don't know know how to handle situation without you."

Ishita "Kyaa Raman aap mujhey thankyou bol rahen hain.Rama Adi sirf aapka beta nahen hain.Mera beta bhee hain.Main bhee ussey kuch nahe  honey doongi"

Adi listens this from door .

Adi gets tears in his eyes listening this.

Then Raman cuts the call .

Adi comes and hugs Ishita.

Adi "Aunty I am sorry."

Ishita "Adi kissliyen?"

Adi "Mainey aapsey bahuth baar rudely behave kiyaa thaa."

Ishita "Oh oh ussliyen,Mainey tho uss samay hee maaf kiya thaa."

Adi "I am sorry."

Ishita "Tum ussey rude kehrahen  hon?Tum tho papa ka hee beta hon naa?"

Ishita makes Adi sit beside him. "Yeh tho tumhaara genetic problem hain tum kyaa kar saktey hoin usskey liyen."

Adi "Genetic problem"

Ishita "Tum iss baath pey naa bilkul apney papa pey gayen hon."

Ishita "Raman bhee naaa kabhee ussko gussa ayega thoo kuch nahen sochengey.Bahut saarey experiences hain merey.But abh aadat hain."

Then Ishita starts telling about few funny incidents related to Raman's rudeness and Adi completely foregets everything in stories.

Then after dinner Adi and Ruhi sleep together in Ruhis room but not before their argument over room.

Ruhi "Ishima merey room Adi bhayya ko de dengey kyaa ?"

Ishita "Kyon tum  bhayya key saath share nahen karogee?"

Adi "Main nahee karoonga."

Ruhi "Main nahen karoongi.Mujhey naya room chahiyen?"

Ishita "Kitnaa jhagada karogey tum log.Papa aayengey aur decide karengey .But abh tum logon ko share karnaa hoga."

Then Ishita makes Ruhi sleep after bedtime story and Adi was also sleeping there.

Ishita gets happy seeing both brother and sister sleeping together.She know brother and sister tiffs can never be avoided.Then Ruhi having new fear of loosing her position in house.But she is princess of house everyone is after her only.She is first love of her parents .

Ishita looks at them sleeping by door and smiles thinking Raman's dreams are getting filled now.He have been dreaming of this day from years.