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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: pravalika9291

Amazing update

Things started taking interesting turn
But naku ardham kanidi amar evaru 
1st update lo amar gurinchi mention chesaru
And inko anthani gurichi mention chesavu ashok tho athanu every
Cont.soon

amar is different from Aman.
Amar is Raman.
Aman is a goon hired for kidnapping Raman's family for purpose.
You will get to know in next update.
Using telugu .Great
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Awesome update...pls update the next part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
wen r u updting next part... waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
update soon plz 
waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
its gettng more intrestng lyk watchng a movi.. 
waitng 4 nxt updat... 
continue soonn 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
part 12

Scene starts with Ishita sitting beside Raman and asking him what happened .What is he hiding from her.

Ishita "Raman mujhey bathayiyen naa.Kyaa huan.Mainey aapko itnaa serious kabhee nahen dekha.Koi business deal key wajaha sey aap aisey nahwen ho sakthey hain.Baath kuch bahuth serious hain."

Raman "Ishita abh main tumhey kuch batha nahen paaonga.Tumhey jaroor bathaonga.I love you."

Raman goes to the outhouse even Ishita follows him there.Mr Iyer suggests Raman  to shift from outhouse along with Ishita.Raman does the same.

Then around dinner time Madan comes along with the accountant and Hercules was there.

Raman goes outside to meet him.

Raman "Seedha pooch rahan hun .Aman kahan hain?"

Accountant acting as scared "Sir mujhey nahen patha sir .Aman kaun hain."

Raman "Raman Kumar Bhalla naam hain mere.Suno Raman Kumar Bhalla.Tum bologey tho ashen nahen tho merey pass bhee tareekey hain main ussey kahen sey bhee dhoondhnikaalonga."

Raman "Ussko tho mujhsey koi nahen bachapaayega.Tum ussko bachaaney mey kyon jaan jhokey pey daal rahen hon."

Accountant "Mujhey sach mey nahen patha sir.Main kissey Aman ko nahen jaantha."

Raman "Madan kyaa karengey hum isska .Issko sach mey Aman key baaeey mey nahen patha honga."

Madan "Sir choddengey ussey.Ghar jaaney dethey hain."

Raman "Theek hain ghar jaon.Akeley kaisey jaogey pehley hee tumhaaarey uupar attack huan hain.Main kissey ko bhejtha hun tumhaarey saath."

Raman "Kissko bhejhu." Looking at surroundings while all the family members are gathered outside.Looking at Hercules.

Raman "Hercules saheen rahega."

Madan  "Han sir .But who aapkey alaawa kissey key baath nahen sunega.Ussey raasthey mey shak ho gaye tho usska jaan bhee le legee."

Raman  taking out Hercules chain as sign of giving him freedom to follow its will.

Accountant is scared seeing Hercules coming near him and blood marks on its white fur was clearly visible indicating the Ambush happened in morning and Hercules recoiling it.

Madan  "Han sir yahen theek hain.Subaha Hercules ney jiss goondon par attack kiya.Who log abh ICU mey hain accountant ko bachapaayegi."

Raman "Tums ach mey kuch nahen jaanthey hon naa.kyaa hain na Hercules ko gussa aayega tho who merey alaawa kisse ka nahen sunaga.Ussko thoda bhee shak hon tho doosro ko kuch karney lkaayak nahe n chodegee."

Raman "Theek hain tum jaon."

Raman signs Herucles to do what he has to and it waits for few time and follows accountant and then starts barking at him and he scared to hell.He heard about the morning incident it single handedly took six armed goons now he is alone unarmed.

Raman was watching them and he is not stopping Hercules.Then Hercules started running to Accountant.

Accountant started screaming at the sight of charging Hercules and was running but Hercules cornered him to run inside.

Accountant "Bathadoonga sir main bathdoonga."

Raman stops Hercules .

Raman "Tum tho kuch nahen jaanthey ho naa."

Accountant  "Sir maaf kardo sir galathee hogayee.Paisey ko laalach mey aagaya thaa."

Raman "Mujhey tumhaarey kahaani nahen chahiyen.Aman kahan hain."

Acc. "Sir usskey baarey mey maun naheen jaantha main tho uss agents kaa madad kar rahan thaa."

Raman "Tumney kissey ko dekha un loogey key saat.Aadmee lamba hoga ek haath ko goli lagee hain slinge mey rakha hoga."

Acc "Han sir mainey dekha hain ussey.Who mera ghar aaya thaa unn agents key saath aur mujhey malik saabh ko phone karney bola thaa."

Madan  "Sir Aman hee hain."

Raman "Madan police ko bulaao aur issey  andhar karwaon.Yeh dass saal key andhar bahaar aaya naa tho main tumhey naheen chodoonga."

Madan "Sir naheen aayega.Main khud ussko dekhoonga."

Raman "Tum out house mey rahon.Hercules ko khula chodo.Main khaana bheejoonga tumhaarey liyen."

Madan follows instruction given to him by Raman.Madan was a good security to have will go to any extent to save his master and Raman proved his worth for him to be his master.

Then all go inside.

Then mrs Iyer after understanding the drama Mihika,Ishita and Ruhi used to do for Raman.

Mrs Iyer "Mihika tum hey aaj kuch seekhna nahen hain kyaa?"

Mihika  "Amma .Sabh akka ka plan thaa.Main bass ussko madad kar rahen thee."

Ishita "Mera plan thaa.Main kabhee iss tarah plan naheen karthee.Raman aap bathyiyen naa yeh mera plan thaa kyaa."

Raman "Amma plan kuch accha tha but sada huan thaa yeh Ishita ka nahen ho saktha.Mihika ka hoga."

Mihika kept an annoyed face.While Ishita sign of victory.

Raman "Ishita ka plan tho poora sada huan hoga.Maximum kaam bhee nahen karaga." Ishita hits Raman on his back .

Mihika  "Han yahi hain."

All laugh at them even Raman is not letting the troubles to even grace his family by letting them know it.

Subbu was seeing them.

Ishita smiles seeing Raman finally back to her Ravan Kumar mode.

Ishita "Raman kyaa khaayengey aap aaj?"

Raman "Tumhee banaa loo.Mujhey kuch kaam hain main abhee aaonga."

Ishita "Theek hain."

Raman goes inside his room and signs Bala to meet him and Bala goes inside.

Then outside Madan rechecked the peremeters and was confident over his security measures and his assistant Hercules was alos keen.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Continue soon...
Hercules is superb...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Superbb
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
superb update
where is aman?
herculus is as always superb 
cont.soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
its so exciting like reading a thriller...
waiting for next part