Here is the review for entries that I prepared long back...
Sorry for not posting before...😳
Entry 2:
CID Highway
Very soothing poem and it did bring an automatic smile to my lips with references to the cases
where good relationships were portrayed (below lines display casual and emotional scenarios) ...😳
where One offering Bhindi without Oil while Other teasing reference of His Secret Crush;
The Injury of Acidic Rain gives ABHIJEET a Pure Smiley Joy
when ACP word Echoed around Him with Proud "I m Proud of U My Boy";
The Memorable moments of First Suspension always Hurts Him in refer
A Soothing tone brings sudden changes as "DAYA U are One of My Best Officer";
The Smoothly Ride chilled with Magical Humming fills
when Two Pals enjoying Journey in their Dearly QUILLAS;
The Flower Bunch coming inside the BUREAU Spraying Black Powder
When FREDDIE puts Gun over VIVEK while He Hugged Him inside arms around;
Inspector ASHA convincing ABHIJEET for Marriage while DAYA referred Her as YAAR.
When a Parade moving on Saddened every Officer on Martyr of ADITI
Replication of Hurting emotions when TASHA killed Brutally and Unfairly.
Dr. NIYYATI Capable Targeting from ACP to any Junior with Sweetly Jovial.
Wait, what did I leave not copying ...😆
The nature of work they do, the dedication and long work hours... crazy investigations that
officers go through.. all these were portrayed excellently...👏👏
I like the way the professional and personal lives of CID officers were blended into the poem ⭐️
and that's an excellent attempt and author has never failed on it..😳
I believe it is submitted for CID - classic, but it has potential to fall under friendship bond
too.. Or Can I just say it is intersection of both ...😉
Entry 3:
CID ki Kahani
CIDien ki Zabani
I really don't feel I could review the poem. NOM. I can't review any poem that is in Hindi, as
my language skills are not so good at that language. 😊 But I felt it is a sad version of how CID
used to be before and deteriorated over time .. I am extremely sorry to the author, if it is not
so.😕
Entry 4:
Friendship;Abhi-Daya
I was so confused on first four lines esp words sermon bestowed etc.. and the title.. I
thought it might be CID highway poem.. too quick to draw conclusions.. 😲
I got into the essence of poem with the line " But spurn to it's hypothesis now," and I felt
"Hooray some one feels the same way I am" 😃 and then got sad for what FW did to the best buddies over time..
These lines were very touchy..
Relation must come up again,
And it makes us feel content again and again !!!!
Nice attempt to display the current state of Abhi Daya friendship and the view of a big fan on that...👏👏
Entry 5:
Pioneering bromance! - Loved title...⭐️
Excellent poem...👏
The simplicity and yet the complexity of the poem is great...⭐️👏
A Punch up dispatched criminals to ambulances
At end both get mitts on relaxed ambiences
When did we see ambulances 😲.. but loved it...😃
cheek by jowl chemistry and innate artistry !! Great ...👏
Its ineffable, can't paint the bond in words of poetry - I disagree. You did paint the bond..😳
Friends of note, Worthy of revote - again excellent..👏
Pirating our hearts on same boat - Sorry but what u meant by boat here? or was it needed for rhyming !!
Gobs of episodes describe Why the bond is precious! - wow...
Both are crumb of donuts, both pieces of cake
No boosting! They are steadfast for friendship sake
Pioneer bromance that was born once. No remake
Started from stream towards massive flood in lake
The last stanza, I could not take out which line I loved...
It's so beautiful that I could not think of what I like most here...I liked everything..
I loved each and every letter of it...
Thank you for such a beautiful poem..😳
ENTRY 6:
That divine thread! - Wow... Cute and great...⭐️
Like their relation knows no ends.
Touched my heart ...👏 I hope FW knows this too...😭
To make us cry with joyous tears - true...👏
One's look that promises the other saying "I'm always there" - uff too touchy...😭
It's a touchy poem and gives such a sooth to reader.😳 also make them cry 😭
Using simple words it created a lot of meaning... and that's beyond excellent...👏👏
Simply great... 👏👏
All comments are my personal views. I am sorry if they hurt anyone..
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