MG SS - Woh Ek Din...pt12/pg112/th#2added

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One day change the two lives forever, one night take close two unknown people so close to each other...

Now, how both take U-Turn and take vows with other person...



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Most of my friends Part 1 have been already read this in SS contest... but this Contest stop  in mid busy schedule of works of Writer ... so am continuing ... i hope you all support me ...




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 Any scene or situation , moment of this ff is an imagination. If any match to any other thing that is merely a co-incidence. I haven't copied any scene I want to let u know beforehand. Still if anything match it will be only coincident.


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                                   INDEX

Part 1 (below Post)

part 2 (below post)

part 3 on page 16

teaser on page 22 

part 4 on page 27

part 5 on page 37

part 6 on page 48

part 7 on page 56

TEASER ON PAGE 65

new banner on page 71

part 8 on page 76

part 9 on page 80

Part 10 on page 91

part 11 on page 102

part 12 on page 112

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Part 1

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She sits in front of mirror, her friends teasing her talks about her would be husband, but she lost in own thoughts...

Her heart taking back few days ago, where she meets with him...she coming back home after her trip...

Geet : friends, I never forget this moments which spend with you all ...

Friends: we too

Geet : acha tum sb aa rhe ho na Meri shaadi mein

One said: - why you marring so earlier

He is unknown for you

You never meet with him

Geet : relax nisha

Arranged marriage mein asa hi hota hai

Nisha :- yaar phir bhi At least tujhe usse phle milna toh chaiye tha Dekhne mein kaisa hai About his behavior, his hobbies...Etc...

Geet : tu chill kr Dekhne mein acha hi honga Tum sb aa rhe ho na

Tamanna : of course yaar

                  #

Geet timely reached airport of Mumbai and caught the flight for delhi... Then she takes bus for hoshiyapur...

From here one day journey start ...

Bus stop after two hour near to dabba...

Conductor: bus yaha half an hour rukengi

Uske baad direct hoshiayapur

 (I have no idea about time distance...its only imaginary)

                *****

She felt someone stalking her, she turn and found no one...actually geet going washroom, which is behind the dabba...

She reached near door, before she open the door, someone pulled her by wrist and placed the hand on her mouth & take her in side of dark jungle...

She not understand, it's all happen so fast...he pushed her on mud, then someone try to kiss her forcibly, and other one held her legs tightly...she feared so much, she wriggle under beneath of him ...she panicky try to shouted loudly" help", but before this ...He tied her duppata on her mouth... she slap him hardly, he angered so much, he raise the hand slapping her, she closed both eyes, she loose all hope in this minute, she not getting what she do... before his hand touch her, she throw mud in his eyes, another one try to caught her , she bite on his hand and runs from here...

She running past few minutes but not get right path reached to dabba... She collided with someone; she feared she caught by goons again, now... how she escaped from this situation... her take step back, her foot hit with stone, before she fall on ground, he pulled her by waist and save her from falling, but she start hitting him...

Geet : leave me

He pushed her forcibly and she fall on ground...her fear surrounded again...but He turn to leave, then she realize if he is goon, he never turn to leave , so its means he is not goon...

Before he goes and she stuck in this jungle, she softly said "sorry"

She tries to stand, but she felt pain in foot...

Geet : aahh

He turn and bend to her level and try to see her foot, but due to darkness both felt only presence but not able to see each other...

She again tries to stand ...but he stops her and shouted on her "you are mad"...

Geet : aap asa kyun kh rhe hai

He : tumhare parr mein jb chot aayi hai toh khdi hone ki kya jaroorat hai

Geet : bina khade huye koi kaise chl sakta hai

He scoops her into arms and she start hitting him...

Geet : leave me

He : chup

His angered voice makes stop saying further words...

He : ab ek sbd aur kaha toh chod dunga yhi pe Fir yhi rhehna

Geet : tum mujhe kaha leke jaa rhe ho Mujhe ghar jaana hai

He :- wo toh tumhe yaha is waqt jungle mein aane se phle sochna chaiye tha

Geet : mein nhi aayi

He : fir tum yaha kya kr rhi ho

She not understanding, she tells the truth or not... she suffers horrible instances little time ago...

He : bolne ka kast karengi aap

Geet : wo mein

.

Wo mein

He : bakri ho

Geet : nhi baat krni mujhe tumse

He : as you wish

Bina kuch bataye tum ghar kaise puchongi

She said after few minutes...

Geet : yaha pass mein koi dabba tha Jaha humari bus ruki thi

He : kaunsi bus

Geet : hoshiyarpur jaane wali

He : hmm

Geet : mujhe hoshiyarpur jaana hai

He : hmm

Geet : hmmm Ke alawa kuch bolo na

He : tumhe dabbe tk chodne jaa rha ho

                      **************

He : bus hum puchne wale hai

She sees in his direction and then to him... First time she noticing his looks, his well built abs, broad chest which showing clearly due to opened his first three button of shirt, but his eyes hided...light not reaches properly to his face...she want to sees his face properly...

He sees her and sees innocence on her face, her eyes like Deep Ocean, he want to lost in this deepness & waves of dusk unfurled in her hair... in other words her hair made effect like sunset...

Aagosh mein khone ko ji chahata hai

Usse aur karib se chune ko ji chahata hai

Her sweet voice broke his thought...

Geet : aapka naam kya hai

Before he says something, one person came: - aap dono yaha is waqt kya kr rhe hai

He : woh hum rasta bhool gye the

Aap humari help kr sakte hai

Person: khiye

Both enquire about the bus, and get to know bus leaves half an hour ago...and next bus came after 3 hours...

Geet : mera sara samaan bus mein chla gya

He : relax Inke par mein chot lagi hai Koi medicine mil jaayengi

Person : aap jb tak waha jaake baithye Mein dekhta hu

                      **********

He makes sit carefully on cot... and she is busy drools him openly...

Geet : perfect

He : perfect ...for what

Geet : wo ... Kuch nhi

He : tum yaha baitho

Geet : tum kaha jaa rhe ho

He : garam pani lene

He understand she not getting ...he said "tumahre liye"

He : garam pani se parr ka shek krne se tumhe aaram milenga

                     ***********

 She met with him few times back, but her feeling she known him many years ago...

Abhi toh mile the hum

Par na jaane kyun mahsoos ho raha tha asa

Hum jaante hai ...

Pechante hai

Ek dusre ko

Na jaane kbse

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Part 2

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She met with him few times back, but her feeling telling to her, she known him many years ago...

Abhi toh mile the hum

Par na jaane kyun mahsoos ho raha tha asa

Hum jaante hai ...

Pechante hai

Ek dusre ko

Na jaane kbse

.

Mein bs usse dekhti rhi

Aur wo mere dard ko km krne ki koshish

Ye kaisi dor thi

Jo do anjaano ko band rhi thi

 

He : ab kaisa mahsoos ho raha hai

Geet : acha

He : tum ye medicine lelo

Dard km ho jaayenga

Geet : medicine kis liye

He : tumhare par mein lagi hai

Uske liye

Hum the gum the unhe niharne mein

Pata hi na chala

Kb sb dard dur ho gye

                 ************

He : next bus 3 hours ke baad hai that means around 2 at night

Aur raat ko yaha rukna thik nhi honga

 tum mere sath chalo

yaha se 2-3 kilometer dur ek resort hai

aaj whi rest krlo

aur kal subh wali bus le lena

geet : par

he : tumhe ydi thik nhi lagta

toh hum yhi intzaar kr lete hai

geet :-nhi hum chalte hai

                        *************

Deserted road, cold wind touches both; she steals glances of him in mid...

She again tries to ask his name, she said "suniye"

Before she say further, his phone ring...and he got busy in call...

He : - mein kal Hoshiyarpur puch jaayunga

He also coming hoshiyarpur, that's great...after finishing his call, she said "aap Hoshiyarpur jaa rhe ho..."

He nodded simply...

Geet : kuch kaam hai

He :hmm

Geet : aap bs hmm khte hai

He : hmm

He realizes what he says, and both laughs echoing in this deserted place...

Ek dusre se baat krte gye

Unki pasand , na pasand jaante gye

Both reached to resort and he asks about the room for her, but room is not available...

He takes keys and said to her you go into room and do rest... she nodded simply, and she realizes he is not going with her...

Geet : aapka room kaunsa hai

He : wo ek hi room tha

Tum rest kro

Mein yaha bahar khi baith jaayunga

She not getting, what she do, without saying any word she goes to room...

                  **************

She tries to sleep, but sleep so far from her eyes..., her mind thinks about him... where he goes... Where he sleep ...

She goes near to window and sees he sit on bench in garden near bone fire...

Geet : geet tu puri jhalli hai

Bahar kitni thand hai

Aur tune

Unhe ek baar roka bhi nhi

Unhone teri kitni help ki

Mein abhi unhe bulake laati hu

               ********

Geet : aap chaliye mere sath

He : tum abhi tk soyi nhi

Geet : aap chl rhe hai ya nhi

He : kaha

Before he asks more questions, she held his hand and takes him into room...

                       ***********

He : tum mujhe yaha kyun laayi ho

Geet : aap mein dimag hai ya nhi

Bahar kitni thand hai

Aap bimar ho gye toh

He : par tum

Geet : aap waha couch pe so jaaiye

He : par

Geet : mujhe bhut neend aa rhi hai

Good night

She lay on bed & closed both eyes, after few seconds she opens one eyes, he slept on couch or not... she felt relaxed, he slept on couch peacefully...

                  *************

 

Ek ajeeb se khushi ka ehsaas huya

Na jaane kyun shakun sa mahsoos huya

                     ***************

Sunlight disturb her sleep, she opened her eyes and see all around, and own incidents highlighted again in front of her eyes..., how someone try to force her, he helped her, save her, she sees towards couch, he is not here...

Geet : woh kaha gye

She clutched her duppatta tightly... she sees him in all room, washroom, but he not seeing anywhere... unknown fear surrounded her heart... he leave me alone here...

Geet : mujhe ase kaise chodke jaa sakte hai

She goes outside of room and sees he talking with resort staff member...she felt relax... he sees her, she turn the face and go into room...

He come in room and asked her "what happen"

Geet : kuch nhi

He : kuch huya hai

Geet : usse aapko kya farq pdta hai

He : tum fresh ho jaayo

Fir breakfast krke chalte hai

Geet : hmm

Both silently does breakfast, she not said any word, she not getting why she want he manofy her... why he do this for her...

                      **************

Na jaane kyun wo chahti thi

Wo usse manaye

Par kyun...?

Wo usse puche tumhe kya huya hai

Par kyun...?

Ye wo khud nhi jaanti

                    ************

He : chale

Geet : ye jeep kiski hai

He : meri

Geet : kal raat toh nhi thi

Ab kaha se aayi

He : kal raat ko ye repair hone gyi thi

Kharab ho gyi thi

Geet : hmm

She sits in his jeep silently...

                  ***********

Geet (think) :- ye toh kuch bolte hi nhi

Mujhe hi puchna padenga

Geet : hum kaha jaa rhe hai

He : jaha tk mujhe yaad hai

Tumhe hoshiyarpur jaana tha

Geet : hmm

He : mein bhi whi jaa raha hu

Tumhe drop kr dunga

She happy, she going with him, but she don't want to show happiness to him...

Geet : mein bs se bhi jaa sakti thi

Aap ko meri wajh se

He : mujhe whi jaana hai

Toh socha bus ka fare bch jaayenga

Bina baat ke money kyun waste kiye jaaye

She again angry due to his answer...

Geet : mein bs ek baar ghar puch jaayu

Aapke saare paise lauta dungi

Jo bhi aapne mujhpe spend kiye hai

He : is mehangai mein paiso se kuch nhi milta

Atleast rupees ki baat kro

Geet : mera whi matlab tha

.

Pata nhi khud ko kya smjhte hai

He : jo mein hu

Whi smjhta hu

                         *************

After few minutes

Geet : mujhe phone krna hai

He gives own phone to her...

Geet : chinta mt kriye

Call ka paise

I mean, call ke charges bhi pay kr dungi

He : maine toh kuch kaha hi nhi

Geet : baad mein mujhe sunayenge

Isse acha hai phle sb clear kr du

She informed the family; she stuck in some problem, now she reached home at evening...

                             *****************

he : hum hoshiyarpur 1 hour mein puch jaayenge

tumhe kuch khana hai toh abhi bta do

aage ek dabba hai

She nodded.

                               ***************

Both ordered the food and start eating...

Geet : aapko yaha kya kaam hai

He : shaadi hai

Geet : kiski

Before he gives answer, waiter came and gives bill to him... he paid the bill and go for washing the hand...

                                 *************

Both reached hoshiyapur...

Geet : thanks

He: mein tumhe ghar tk chod deta hu

Geet : nhi mein chali jaayungi

Thanks

He: it's ok

He starts the car engine, but she stops him...

Geet : ek minute

Aap mujhe apna number de dijiye

.

Wo mein aapko money order kar dungi

He : uski koi jaroorat nhi hai

Mein bs yuhi mjak kr raha tha

                             ***********

Here end the story from geet side about one day, which change her life... 


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Nice start
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ek aur naya concept
hum pahle hi itne confused hain ek aur ke aayi
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awesome n interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Nice start
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conho for new story...nice part...geet got lost in jungle and some guy (maan) is helping her