MG SS - Woh Ek Din...pt12/pg112/th#2added - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

it's amazing i Loved it. So i guess maaneet haven't seen each other Face. They denied for marriage because of being in love with their respective unknown partners. n they are unaware About The fact that whom are they searching was the same person whom they denied to marry. i think it's very interesting waiting for next dear


thanks dear


try to update next part soon ...hope tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

Nice update...
Maneet refused to marry each other 4 each other


thanks dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

lolz without seeing each other both refused to marry

both love each other
but not sure of others feelings..
superb


thanks dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

try to update tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

maaneet refused to marry each other because they start loving each otheršŸ˜†

kash they have seen each other's pic but...
loved the twist!!!!!
update the next part soon!!!!!


pic dekh lete

toh twist kaise aata 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

maaneet refused to marry each other because they start loving each otheršŸ˜†

kash they have seen each other's pic but...
loved the twist!!!!!
update the next part soon!!!!!


photo dekh lete
toh twist kaise aata
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 5

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I am going hoshiyarpur, but in mid my jeep punctured, and extra tyre also not available... I called adi & he booked resort room for me and I go on walk, I felt so relieved...

Bhag dod se dur...itni shanti... Chalte chalte jungle mein chla gya...

Here , First time I meet her at night in jungle... she mistakenly bump with me... before she fall, I hold her close to me...I save her from falling and she start hitting me...

Thanks ke bjaye ...maar

Wrong combination

I pushed her, she fall on ground... I turn to go, but her sweet voice stop me...She sweetly said "sorry"

I stop on this moment, I heard her painful voice, and I turn & bend to her level and try to see her foot, but due to darkness both felt only presence but not able to see each other...

I try to ask why she is here in jungle at this time, but she is not ready to tell anything, but I feel fear in voice... After continuously ask where about her, she tells about dabba, where bus stops...she going hoshiyarpur...

We reaching to dabba and first time I sees her and sees innocence on her face, her eyes like Deep Ocean, he want to lost in this deepness & waves of dusk unfurled in her hair... in other words her hair made effect like sunset...

I totally lost in her, her voice break my trance, she asking my name, before I say my name or know more about her, one person come...

We enquired about next bus, then I carefully make sit on cot... I see pain in her eyes, I stand for going taking warm water for her... but she stop me...ask to me where I going... after knowing I go for her, she felt calm ...

I simply apply medicine on her foot and she constantly seeing me... I felt her gaze on me... I don't know why...? On this moment I want we both see each other...

Abhi toh mile the hum

Par na jaane kyun mahsoos ho raha tha asa

Hum jaante hai ...

Pechante hai

Ek dusre ko

Na jaane kbse

.

Wo mujhe bs dekhti rhi

Aur mein bs uska dard km krne ki koshish

Ye kaisi dor thi

Jo do anjaano ko band rhi thi

Next bus arrives time too late... I ask you go with me...firstly she not feels good, but after she said yes...

Deserted road, cold wind touches both; she again tries knowing about me, but my phone ringed, I see she totally dislike this, but next moment I see sweet smile... I don't get why she smiling...

She asked to me "you going hoshiyarpur"

He nodded simply...

She : kuch kaam hai

maan :hmm

She : aap bs hmm khte hai

Maan : hmm

He realizes what he says, and both laughs echoing in this deserted place...

.

.

We reached to resort and i ask about the room for her, but room is not available...so, I give my room to her... she simply takes key and left...

So chill outside, I sit on bench and enjoy bonfire... Suddenly she come and says to me "chaliye mere sath"

Maan : tum abhi tk soyi nhi

She: aap chl rhe hai ya nhi

Maan : kaha

Before i say, she held my hand and takes me into room...

I asked why you take me here, she shouts on me, you have brain or not...outside environment is so chill if I fall ill...

I liked her shout...

Fikr thi usse meri

She felt relaxed to seeing sleeping peacefully on couch... I know she gazing me, I don't want embarrass her, I closed my eyes...

At morning, she suddenly angry on me, don't understand why...?

I talking with resort staff member enquire about my jeep; she sees me but goes into room without saying any word, I come in room and asked her "what happen".

She : kuch nhi

Maan : kuch huya hai

She : usse aapko kya farq pdta hai

Maan : tum fresh ho jaayo

Fir breakfast krke chalte hai

She : hmm

***********

After breakfast, we both left for hoshiyarpur... She is so silent, I dislike her silence...finally she speaks...

She : hum kaha jaa rhe hai

Maan : jaha tk mujhe yaad hai

Tumhe hoshiyarpur jaana tha

She : hmm

Maan : mein bhi whi jaa raha hu

Tumhe drop kr dunga

She : mein bus se bhi jaa sakti thi

Aap ko meri wajh se

I not like her saying she go in bus, somewhere I know she said in anger, she is angry from morning , but why, I don't get...

Maan : mujhe whi jaana hai

Toh socha bus ka fare bch jaayenga

Bina baat ke money kyun waste kiye jaaye

She again angry due to his answer...

She : mein bs ek baar ghar puch jaayu

Aapke saare paise lauta dungi

Jo bhi aapne mujhpe spend kiye hai

Maan: is mehangai mein paiso se kuch nhi milta

Atleast rupees ki baat kro

She : mera whi matlab tha

.

Pata nhi khud ko kya smjhte hai

Maan: jo mein hu

Whi smjhta hu

I was enjoying her little anger... actually now I liking irritating her...

In between, she informed her family about reach time...

We reached hoshiayarpur... She wants my number for returning money, I deny for both (money + number)... I tell to her am joking, she smiled and left... I want to drop to her house, bus she denies... I understand her deny & I not said further...

This is our first & last meet...

Vicky : bro ab aap kya karonge

Kaise us tak puchonge

Maan : wo maine soch liya hai

Vicky : bro mujhe bhi btao

Maan : sb kuch toh bta diya

Vicky : bro ek sawal hai

Maan : puch

Bina puche toh tu mujhe chodenga nhi

Vicky : right bro

Aapko kaise pata chala you fall in love with her...

Maan : why I tell you

Ab jaa

Vicky : bro

Maan : go...

*************

Koi anjaana kb acha lagne lage

Kissi anjaane ki ye dil kb parwah krne lage

Wo pass na hoke bhi

Uska ehsaas har pal sath ho

Usse yaad na kiya jaaye

par dil_dimag se wo ek pal ke liye bhi dur na ho

kya yhi ehsaas pyaar hai...?

Sayad yhi pyaar hai...

Ha pyaar hai...

I hope you all enjoying the story...please leave long comments...


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awsemm maan enjoying geet antics
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Posted: 10 years ago
lo Maan babu
ab dhoondho usse
shadi se mana kar diya
ab bhugto
but pyaar kahaan sunta hai kisi ki

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