SwaRon FF Life Partners *note on pg 78* on 11/4/16* - Page 16

Originally posted by: piyu_swaron

nice update mansi😃

dadi is so sweet I loved her

Taani and dadi's teasing part was amazing 

why swayam's dad behave like that with swayam?

next part exam ke baad update karegi to bhi chalega mansi

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Waaahh jaan!
Now this is how u roll it!
*standing ovation *

Jaan tune kya likha he yaar
Starting se end tak me couldn't stop reading
Haye, dadis too sweet
the convo! An Mai kya kahu .. they were just perfect
Every place every time there wasn't a thing missing!
Extremely loved it!

Aur kya baat he.
3 chapters mai hi 100 comments!
maine kaha tha na jaan ur Fab writer
ab mujhe zara thode tuition's milenge aapse

Just loved loved loved it
love u more

Ab update kar jaldiii

P.s. ab don't deny ki ur not a better writer than me!
Sab tere writing ke diwaane he

Originally posted by: nature2

Great update

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

the update was good 

swayam's mother seems a lil strict i guess 

poor sharon she had a very rough start thr 

thankfully dadi saved her on tat front 

the sweet si teasing in b/w by dadi n tanni was very cute 

n the intro whr sharon meets swayam's dadi was very well penned 

looking forward to the next update 🤗

Originally posted by: LaalIshq

Hm Taani n dadi are too naughty...SwaRon fighting...
Amazing update...continue soon...

Originally posted by: siri456

nice update

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

wow dear aswom update..

loved it...

accha bond ha swaron ka uski dadi ke sath..
nd tanni i love dis girl...

nd swaym apna papa ko hitler bolta ha shyad...

update soon...

Originally posted by: Vani20

Wow.. nice .. update
Luvd Taani nd dadi part!! 😊

Originally posted by: CrazyRedMary

reswa

unres!!

So I just read that intro/prologue. It was really good.👏 I really like that Taani kept come back again and again. Jeez, girl let them be alone😆 Can't wait to see how this story unfolds.😃 Lets continue reading. 

P.S Kind of scared to know what happens next.😳

Originally posted by: shiningshannu

hello dear🤗

i totally liked the update

sharon is orphan😲

but i loved the bond between sharon and dadi

dadi is soo sweet i felt

y swayams mom sounds like a angry saasi maa pf tv serial😆

and wanna know y swayams dad dont like swayam

soo many mysteries i feel

swayam iz irritated with sharon dat was funny

and the eye lock was too cute

and the way dadi and taani teased swaron was too gud

and how can forget the hug eve though swayam did it cos he thought it was taani but it was tto cute

all in all a nice update

do update soon

p.s. hope the comment is long enough

love

shini