Ashlok FF: Heads Over Heels Ch 24 pg 145

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#821

Jane🤗 I read both the parts dear

Brilliant updates jus loved them

I'm not feeling well, ll comment on 3 parts once I'm fine

Thank u so much for pm

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#822

Dearest that was a wonderful update..both are now completely lost in the storm of love. She loves him head over heels and i loved how you displayed their emotions,their fear.
Especially the last part when he wtold her he loved her without any make up on taht part nearly killede me
it was so sweet and pure his innerst Feelings in one sentence!
Pls do update soon👏👏👏👏

Edited by GoWithTheRhythm - 11 years ago

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Omg simply love the update
Continue soon can't wait to read the nxt part

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Nice update so he like her with out make up nice it's good to see them being nice and killing shouting or fighting

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

did not get pm for chapter 20 😳

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

love love love love chapter 21

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Devu

@DEVU.NAIR

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

chap 20 & 21 excellent update jane👏

astha's inner thoughts are well written👍🏼

so the atmosphere changing slowly,they are falling in love😉😳

loved ashlok car sequence❤️

waiting for next updates...update soon...

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sreekailas

@sreekailas

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#828

I want to listen to u.. I like u best without any makeup..
oh dear lord!! I'm dead!!

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#829

Originally posted by: bm11

Yasna, I'm really grateful you always find time to pass you sweet comment to this story.
Even more I like that the story is unpredictable for you😉

Thank you so much😃

yes...this Shlok is full of surprises...and totally unexpected for me