IshRa TS: Girl's Nite Out!!!! (Note: Page 4)

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Just an idea I came up with after the boys night out that we saw.
Hope you guys like it.
Just a note: Hindi isn't my first language so please forgive any major/minor mistakes that I may have made with the dialogues.

"Ishita, tum kahan ja rahi ho?" "Kahan matlab, bahar ja rahi hoon, Vandu Akka, Mihika aur Trisha ki saat," Ishita replied. "Lekin iss tarah??" Raman questioned again. He had never seen Ishita in this avatar before. She was wearing a beautiful black top with a sequined gold mini-skirt, black sky high heels and her hair in beautiful waves. Ishita turned around and was about to reply him when her phone rang. "Haan Mihika, main abhi aa raho hoon," Ishita said grabbing her clutch and rushed out. Raman stood there unable to say anything when Ishita came back again "I will be late. Ruhi ko saambhal lena," she said and headed out again. Almost a minute had past before Raman came back to his senses. " Yeh Jhansi ki Rani aaj is roop mein kisko marna chathi hai?" he said heading out to get ahold of Ishita before she left. He was not going to let her go out dressed like that without a chaperone. Just as he reached the door, Romi and Mihir came looking perplexed. "Bhai, wo...bhabhi..Mihika," Mihir stammered while Romi said "Bhai, Mihika aur bhabhi bilkul mast lag rahi thi aaj." "Chup kar, who teri bhabhi hai, aur Mihika tumhari hone wali bhabhi hai, izzat se baat kar,"Raman admonished him. Just then Bala came by as well "Raman, mujhe lag raha hai ke ye sari ladkiyaan Mihika ki bachelorette party ke liye jaa raha hai , zaroor badla lene ke liye,""Tumhe kaise pata,"Raman asked. "Shravan ne mujhe bataya,unnone Vandu ko phone me baat karte waqt suno hai, wo keh rehti ke wo log kisi guest house me jaa rahi hai," "Bhai, guest house? Lagta hai woh log kisi private party main jaa rahi hai," Romi said. "Hame wahan jana hoga, pata nai, yeh ladkiyaan kya tamasha kada karne wali hai,"Raman said." Lekin bhai, hum usko kaise dhoondenge, agar clubto easy hai, lekin yeh log to kisi guest house main jaa rahi hai na?" "Ek minute," Raman said as his phone rang. It was Neil. "Bhai, maine aapko wo contract papers ready kiya hai, kal aap usko sign karde na. Please mat bhoolna,kal submission deadline hai," Neil said over the phone. "Haan theek hai, waise Trisha kahan hai?," Raman asked. "Trisha? Wo toh bahar gayi hai, keh rehi thi, uski dost ki said girls night manane ke liye," Neid replied. "Girls night, my foot." Raman said and told Neil everything. "Mujhe pata hai wo log kahan hai, maine Trisha ko humari company ki guest house book ki thi aaj raat ke liye, wo saab zaroor wahan hogi," Neil said. "Toh yeh baat hai, meri naak ki niche, mere company ki guest house main, party kar rahi hai, aaj main dekhlungi yeh saab hamari bina kaise party karenge." Raman said determined.

Ps: I wasn't able to fit all the first part in one post, so the continuation is below 😊


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At the guest house entrance.

"Lekin sir, yeh private party hai, bina invitation ke aap andar nahi jaa sakta," the watchman said refusing to let any one of them in. "Kaise nahi jaa sakta, yeh meri company ki guest house hai, andar humari biwiyaan hai, aur tum keh rahi hai ke hum andar nahi jaa sakta. Main dekh ti hoon, tum hume kaise rokhunge," Raman shouted trying to get past the watchman. "Sir, dekhiye, aap ke paas ID card nahi hai aur agar aap yahan dadagiri karti hai, mujhe police bhoolana padega," "Bhai, ek minute, main baat karti hoon," Mihir said stepping up. "Dhekiye bhaisaab, andar humari ghar wali hai, agar aapko yakeen nahi hai, aap unse pooch liye na," Mihir said. The watchman looked at all of them doubtfully and agreed to call the girls. All the ladies came out and without glancing at them asked the watchman why they were bothered. "Maam, yeh saab keh rehi thi ke yeh aapko jhanti hai aur andar aana chathi hai," "Kya, kuch bhi. Hum isko nahi jaante hai, ainda hume faltu me maat bulaya karo," Ishita said and headed back in with the others.

"Ishita, Ishita..." Raman called out annoyed. "Raman, these girls are not going to agree easily, we will need to figure something out." Bala said. All of them sat by the wall thinking hard of ways to get in when they saw a sporty, expensive car pull up. 4 good-looking young man, dressed in suits got down and headed towards the guest house. The watchman let them in without any questions. Watching this, an angry Raman got up and went to the watchman again, "tum inko andar kaise jane diya?" "Sir, inke paas invitation card thi, isiliye." the watchman said and locked the gate. Just then, Romi and the others came up to him. "Bhai, mujhe lag raha hai ke andar zaroor kuch English film chal raha hai," Romi said. "Kya?" all the others echoed. "Haan bhai, yeh ladke sab wo kapde utharne wala types lag raha hai, jo hum English film main dekh the haina, bachelorette party main..." Romi continued. " Bakwaas mat kaar Romi, Mihika aise type ki ladki nahin hai," Mihir said. "Tum kya kehna cha rahi ho, ke tumhari Ishita bhabhi aur Vandita aur Trisha aise hai," Raman asked. "Nahi bhai, main... wo... mera matlab wo nahi tha, main keh raha tha, ke humare ghar ki ladkiyaan aise ke type nahin hai," Mihir mumbled. " Hume kisi bhi tarah inke party main ghoosna hoga, "Raman said looking at the others.

CU: The boys enter the house :)

Edited by ThruMyEyez-Nita - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh wow..i din knew u write OS...this ws awesome...i so wish to see somethin lik this in show too..plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ahem!!! w8in 4 another part :D plzupd8 soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome😉 Main kabse intezaar kar rahi Hun girls nite out ka
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue soon and please PM..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls continue soon and PM me (if you can) of the next update! Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz update soon!! It was amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very well written.. god knows everyone would LOVE to see something like this happening the real show but unfortunately CVs wont let that happen. do continue on with the amazing work 😊
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Awesome title 4 tat situation...plz continue

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