OS: Forgotten in Epic- I, Wife of The Mortal-Immortal COMPLETED - Page 14

Originally posted by: panchaali

These men may have killed each other in war, brave soldiers gave life in battle fighting for respective kings but see the irony, their lifeless bodies burned in same cremation, blended and ended in same ashes.

How wrong I was. This world that shoved him away with despise has given him the title of "Daanveer," they won't leave him before having its requital to the fullest. He has to offer every bit of his breath, existence, emotion, heart even his soul. Giving everything only, he may finally attain his freedom.

Finally, two cold eyes brighten with a glimpse of smile, "I am betting on a lost battle, where either I lose or I lose. Still I will die in this war, undefeated. They took honor of a warrior's life from me, I won't let them snatch the glory of warrior's death."

I only asked one thing. Why her love for me came so late, just before the battle? But I wasn't expecting an answer. She came with an expectation, I promised her to leave her four sons, alive."

These are my favorite quotes from the update

I loved the way you have written Abhimanyu's death...yes he must have been in the same turmoil

"I don't want future to know me for my Digvijay, but for my daan, and my friendship."

"Don't touch her, let him sleep." I never knew such anger, such austerity could come out of my voice.

"You did your duty third Pandav, only if the arrow penetrated his chest, I wouldn't have any complain. He didn't deserve an arrow in his back."

"Right comes along with duty, Mother. You can't claim even a bit of God's blessing once you discard it."

"Your husband was a great human being. His story will inspire many in future .." I wasn't listening much only observing the speaker, Yadav-Sresth Krishna. Many say he is the avataar of Vishnu, indweller, omniscient. Today I really want what they is true. No, not because he was saying kind words for my husband. But because I want him to read my heart, those unspoken questions, complains I have to God, to all, to this world.

This too is a wonderful para

"Forgive me Pavan-Putra, Dharmaputa is most virtuous man, his nobility is imperishable. But this sinner deserves to earn the little virtue of doing the pyre of my husband. Let the friend of Sutaputra do the cremation of the Aditya-Nandan." Said the queen of Anga.

I soo want to believe this happened truly...

The flame rose up and up towards sky, towards the Sun as like it is trying to return in its ultimate adobe, like it is praying to be one with amorphous omnipresent.

oops it is giving me goose bumps, what lines are these and the Rabindra Sangeet Aguner Porosmoni very well fitted here and yes again it left me in tears though you tried hard not to make us cry, still can't help it..Its Karna's death and his wife has said very rightly

When did his wish is fulfilled in this earth! I can clearly see in future, he won't be remembered for his daan or for his archery but for his tragedy first.

Irony but very true...

So existence of Karna's wife gone with his pyre, may be that's why Shivaji Sawant sir has written in his legendary novel Mritunjayi that at the Karna's wife jumped at his pyre...

Originally posted by: SayaneeH.Lecter

I am sorry Raghu I really n strongly DISAGREE here .. I despise to call a woman like Kunti a "Mother" .. I strongly believe Woman becomes Mother not Giving Birth but Giving LIFE .. A woman who abandon her child in high current of river just to have the "PERFECT STATUS" in society CAN NOT be a Mother.. I could have been sympathetic to her if she herself gave Karna to someone for adoption, I wud have been okk .. I have said it before,

There is a difference between a helpless mother leaving her child in an "orphanage" n a woman leaving her child on road or near vat or something .. Kunti's act was like the later one

Radha was Karna's TRUE MOTHER .. unfortunately Kunti was the woman who bought Karna in this world .. Karna may have a soft corner for Kunti but I don't think his wife will have .. at 1st chapter I gave a hint how she felt about Karna's then unknown mother

However, few days ago I was stunned to hear same things from my Jemma (my TaiJi) .. she too feet the same way about Kunti n I was so surprised seeing her hatred for Kunti .. An elderly woman like her can see things from a mother's POV .. n I felt those words were enough for me

Finally, yes I agree doing duty is must for having right over someone .. the woman is throwing her child on the road can't come back with her claim of love over her child .. can she??

Originally posted by: Raghuji

It's perfectly fine to disagree. I can see the strong logical arguments you have put forth. I don't think she threw without being aware of Maa Ganga. I am not sure kunti consulted or took consent from Surya dev. This is where we need more clarity from Vyasji. Maa Ganga gave birth to Bhishma, why can't she take care of Karn or ensure he is in safe hands ? What about our great Surya dev ? Duty of a father is to show the right path , take Karn to a proper Guru . Did this happen ? If you read the story from a gross level it would sound utter injustice to Karn. I understand we all read it as a story but should not we seek much deeper , decrypt the message ?

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Its simply brilliant 👍🏼 👏

Words fail me to express how I felt after reading the concluding part of this beautiful emotional story of karna & his wife.

I loved the part where Karna was telling to his wife about Abhimanyu, how Karna saw his lost son Sudaman in Abhimanyu. He did his duty as a warrior but lost another battle by being part of his nephew brutal killing.

I also loved the part when Karna's wife gave the right of lighting the funeral pyre of Karna to Duryodhana and the entire convo between Pandavas, Kunti & Vasudev. Very well written and good choice of words.

Originally posted by: Sanskrutiii

Originally posted by: gowri122

Beautiful⭐️

Truly it touched my heart. I now feel like i have swallowed a huge stone😭

If i cud, i want to give u a bear hug😊 for writing this. Whatever i wanted to say to u has been written by countless others here, so i won't repeat it.

All i want to say is, THANK YOU MY DEAR👏

Originally posted by: Sonatia

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im spellbound,speachless dear.awesome.