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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: rbb1
Nice update

tks ray ..

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whitelily

@whitelily

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Fantastic update and it is kind of different

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: whitelily
Fantastic update and it is kind of different

hey thanks lily...

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

50 shades for Shlok and Astha...like it...☺️

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naina

@hp_2006

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Shlok's different avtaar in this update...Bad Boy...hmm...😊
I enjoyed reading it Deepa..Shlok's character has different layers in your story..Each layer was pulled out to reveal fresh new traits in his personality...The update was indeed hot..Thank you😃
👏👏👏

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Saumya

@tinkylove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

THAt was really really amazing mam!!!

sorry I couldnt comment earlier!!!

but I used to read all ur updates!!!!

U R DAMN COOL!!!

UR writing r pleasure to read!!!

mast , dhamakedar!!!

That part in 2 nd OS!! Astha took ciggarettes from ANjali room was funny!!😆

On the whole all ur OS r fab!!!

hatts off!!!!

with lots of love mam!!!

saumya

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Lovely Update Deepa...

My God... U have wrote in an amazing way MR.CHARACTERLESS...

Just mindblowing ma...

Only u can write such a unique topic... I really hate when some one call u like that...

The way u have explained Shlok Past was lovely... The way compared Astha with the Bird in Cage and Peocock just amazing...

U have give shlok POV so well... He even worried abt his parents when she called him characterless...Lovely dear...

Astha has called trouble for herself by waking up the SLEEPING LION IN HIM...Tremendous deepu... U r amazing creator...

The way he torture her just unbeleivable...Only a rowdy can do it ...But u ended it up in usual unqiue way say its just what he though...saying he can see HIS ASTHA in Pain... Just splendid dear...

i am admiring the way u write... just wonderful...

I am even struggling to get words to write comments... A BIG HUG to you and HATS OFF to you for the extraoridinary work...

Finally its a very hot and naught OS...

U r a response Writer u know...u even gave warning to the small gals...Just speechless dear...

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Devu

@DEVU.NAIR

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

good update👏

different avatars of shlok,like it😊

thz 4 the pm😛

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Shlok's different avtaar in this update...Bad Boy...hmm...😊
I enjoyed reading it Deepa..Shlok's character has different layers in your story..Each layer was pulled out to reveal fresh new traits in his personality...The update was indeed hot..Thank you😃
👏👏👏

Naina.. thanks a lot dear.. yes.. u care correct.. different shades of a charcter or personality...

Every man has a animal inside .. I wanted to unleash that character...

I was reading some book relating to that last week by Madan .. about Hitler and Alexander's other side or the Animal with in them...

it gave lot of stuff for this subject..