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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey VeeBa fanatics😃

the following poem is my tribute to the wonderful couple we all have come to love since last 7-8 months❤️ i had originally planned for an OS but couldn't find ideas, so penned this...😳
Please read on...


Timeless Love


The Kookaburra Croons,

the song of eternal love..

Battles were fought..

Teeth bared and hands clinched..

From the second they opened their eyes..

Bitter foes they were..

I'm not less, you are not more...

I hate you you hate me...


She fell he laughed..

He fell she guffawed..

Though they couldn't stay a day apart..

There came a ship carrying her to far lands...

His joy knew no bounds..

Yet something pricked..


Wheel of time revolved..

Tiny fingers grew to mighty clasp..

Lion learnt to roar..

Lioness learnt to growl..

Clouds clashed,

sky thundered

and they met again..

old Words rang,

i still you hate you..

And you still hate me with passion and consternation..


The sweet cherub dropped a drop..

On the face of earth drab..

Behold the glory of monsoon..

Blue of the water..

Along came fragrance of first love..

Hearts waltzed..

hands intermingled..

Eyes met and silence spoke..

You are mine..

You are mine..

My only love

Bonds of rebirth..

Distance of miles..

Wars of the world,

couldn't tear us apart, As we meet every thousand years..

When soul winds with soul..

Begins timeless love..

adversaries became companions...

Pink flowers blush..

Fire flies glow bright..

The Kookaburra Croons,

the saga of eternal love..


Thanks for reading🤗 sorry if i wasted your time...

I kind of summarized VeeBa's love story in this poem...😳 please tell me how it is? laughable?😆


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Poohjabear thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my Vibha this is so awesome !!! ❤️

If someone can make a VeeBa creation and add this poem there it will be EPIC !!! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW!!! This is really good ...Loved it! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Vibha!!! This is amazing Loved it to the core...thanks for sharing this dear🤗 You are a true star👏...It beautifully describes their love hate relationship...Hats off to you dude👍🏼
My favorite lines are :

Distance of miles..

Wars of the world,

couldn't tear us apart, As we meet every thousand years..

When soul winds with soul..

Begins timeless love..

adversaries became companions...



Keep writing more dear. I miss your stories😳 Please do write something soon.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vibha...bud👏👏...this was beautiful...love it!

i still you hate you..

And you still hate me with passion and consternation.. 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome and beautifully written poem 👍🏼 ... You have summarized VeeBa story in such a Fabulous manner 👏 ... So I really loved it 🤗 ... Keep writing more !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Vibha ...

I'm not familiar with this couple , nor with the show .. but the poem was exquisite! Truly a beautiful piece of writing! Thank u for PMing me - would hate to have missed out on this!
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I'm unable to post my LIKE,
tried several times.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, Vibha... That's wonderful 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow👏kya poem hai😛
keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Eyes met and silence spoke..

You are mine..

You are mine..

My only love

Bonds of rebirth..

Distance of miles..

Wars of the world,

couldn't tear us apart, As we meet every thousand years..


^^Love these line!! Stunning Poem!! Do write more!!

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