|| IPKKND OS Series | Rhythm of Love || *updated (09/02/21) - Page 3

Outstanding dear.  Brought tears to my eyes.

beautifully written and so sad, could literally feel his heartbreaking 💔 thanks for the pm 😛

Awesome OS...thanks for the PM

Areeba, it was so painfully heart wrenching, albeit tempered with the knowledge that it was self inflicted. 

I am imagining Shyam in that place... for I cannot tolerate Arnav watching Khushi marrying some one else..

So sad. What did he do wrong? How did he lose her?

Originally posted by: NikitaM11

oh wow, that was so sad.. I felt so bad for the guy, I could actually imagine Arnav in his place, watching Khushi marrying another guy because of his own screw upslovely piece! 

:)

thanks so much! 🤗

Originally posted by: Downhill

that was beautiful

thanks! 

Originally posted by: Nafrat_Mohabbat

Aww that wz beautiful and sad. Though it waznt based on any of the IPKKND characters, i could actually picture Arnav in my head as that guy. 

Thanx for the link!  

thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: ranogill

What is point to say sorry now to him...

yep yep! 

Originally posted by: Areebaa

WoaHAAHH! Beautifully Written ! I loved it

Reading something after a Long time 

Thank You for the Pm! 

haha thanks! although perhaps this is also an overdue thanks! 🥱🤗

Originally posted by: momoahmd

sigh...so sad n sooo beautiful...enjoyed reading every bit of it...

n

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

awe thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: faffy

heart-breaking but beautiful!

thankss!!

Originally posted by: pup03

nice Os!!! 

thanks for pm 

thanks! 

Originally posted by: mankhush

beautiful. again you prove that your writing touches the hearts. i also imagined arnav and khushi because he did commit so many mistakes and i was surprised that khushi forgave him each time. 

thank you so much! it brought a lot of joy to my angsty heart 😆

Originally posted by: aashizin

wonderful Os  it was touchy n emotional  u penned down superbly 

thanks! 

Originally posted by: dumas

That was so sad her screwed up and she got tired of waiting for him and moved on heart breaking but if he loved her enough he would have fought for her in stead of giving up thanks for the pm beautifully penned .

ahhh just so many ways to interpret! thanks! 🤗

Originally posted by: -ChildOfChrist-

That was beautifulI was imagining ArShi throughout the whole story

yes me too! that's why thought the song to be apt!

Originally posted by: bewakoofLadki

Oh so emotional loved it

thank you!

Originally posted by: ..Anita..

That was beautifully sad

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

Beautiful OS 

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Itwas a sad but a beautiful story...emotional OS...very beautifully written.  

thank you! 

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Sad os but nice

thanks bunches! 

Originally posted by: ajoop

Ooch!! it did hurt

I could actually imagine Arnav and Khushi for this OS AND could feel his pain

AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ah yes I felt the redemption suffering coming through with this!

Originally posted by: sikhni_

sad n amazing 

thanks! 

Originally posted by: palaayan

The melancholy shrouding this piece makes it incredibly bittersweet. I ache for Arnav yet struggle to feel sympathetic for the man who failed to fight for his love...

Brilliantly written dear :)

thank you so much! tried my best! 🤗

Originally posted by: flowers4u

heart wrenching ...but he probably messed up big time

yep! 

Originally posted by: imran78

This was so sad yet beautiful. ...

Thanks! 

Originally posted by: tinsel

Beautiful and sad one shot!

thanks! 

Originally posted by: Punkin22

Outstanding dear.  Brought tears to my eyes.

omg thankss!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Ekya

I am imagining Shyam in that place... for I cannot tolerate Arnav watching Khushi marrying some one else..  

Nice one. 

haha I feel that! 

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Areeba, it was so painfully heart wrenching, albeit tempered with the knowledge that it was self inflicted. 

ahh yes, brought a lot of joy to the sadist in me! 

Originally posted by: yoga123

Awesome OS...thanks for the PM

thanks, ofc!

Originally posted by: stg1

beautifully written and so sad, could literally feel his heartbreaking  thanks for the pm 

thanks!! 😊

Originally posted by: coderlady

So sad. What did he do wrong? How did he lose her?

I've just written's scenes which might coincide with the character and their presumed arcs in the show! 

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Edited by dramebaaz.af - 2 years ago

new update; 

song: Line Without A Hook by Ricky Montgomery

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/18495