An Encounter with Karna (OS)Last Part on Pg23 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...its juzz amazing riti...the part which i lyk da most n really true n mesmerising is "Yes I died long ago... but people keep bringing me to life every now and then...'' "You come here everyday at sunset to pray.." He smiled again and looked at setting sun.. and said softly to me.. "Yes..this is where I find peace.."Both parts r superb...pls update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So you too though him an actor just like doctor Panchaali πŸ˜†


bechara KarnaπŸ˜† is this Aham Sharma effect πŸ˜† everyone thinks he is an actor..πŸ˜†

he is calling you Devi...πŸ˜† just like he did to Doctor Panchaali πŸ˜†

love the part when he laughed..awwn that was a blissful thing to read..

He would ROFL if he ever sees that girls of this yug going crazy for him πŸ˜†

update and expand the thing why he said that nothing has changed much from Dwapar to kali yug

and he is a ghost..haven't you fear him πŸ˜‰  

why he is still unhappy, he should have find peace in heave na as per the epic!!

enlighten soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Krittz

This is so good, Riti πŸ‘

First Panchu and now you meeting Karna here in our era. 
Next thing we know, I will be meeting him in Kurukshetra πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†


Panchaali I mean Doctor Panchaali πŸ˜†met him at 22nd century, 100 years later...

Sasu Maa 2 said she is inspired by my OS πŸ˜³

so Karna getting huge call from Kaliyug πŸ˜†

yaap if karnalis enters in Kurushetra, then we will all together bring his wheel back in place na..πŸ˜ƒ   
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Posted: 9 years ago
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after you update the third part pm me plzz, and do it soon, waiting for the 3rd part eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Krittz

This is so good, Riti πŸ‘

First Panchu and now you meeting Karna here in our era. 
Next thing we know, I will be meeting him in Kurukshetra πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

 
Thank you kriitz.. 😳 n thanks for PM as well..
 
Who knows you might see him in kurukshetra and like panchu said ..help him in pulling that wheel..
 
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: simantini

Wow...its juzz amazing riti...the part which i lyk da most n really true n mesmerising is "Yes I died long ago... but people keep bringing me to life every now and then...'' "You come here everyday at sunset to pray.." He smiled again and looked at setting sun.. and said softly to me.. "Yes..this is where I find peace.."Both parts r superb...pls update soon :)

 
Thank you dear..😊.. there is lot hidden in those lines which you caught😳..glad that you liked themπŸ˜ƒ
 
will try and update soon😊..thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: panchaali

So you too though him an actor just like doctor Panchaali πŸ˜†


see told you .. You inspired me😳
πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
bechara KarnaπŸ˜† is this Aham Sharma effect πŸ˜† everyone thinks he is an actor..πŸ˜†

 

May be.. πŸ˜›


he is calling you Devi...πŸ˜† just like he did to Doctor Panchaali πŸ˜†
 
Couldnt think of better salutation...didnt want him to call me Maata🀣

love the part when he laughed..awwn that was a blissful thing to read..

 

Thanks ...Yeah and blissful for me to imagine


He would ROFL if he ever sees that girls of this yug going crazy for him πŸ˜†

 

But girls of those yugs were also crazy for him...😳


update and expand the thing why he said that nothing has changed much from Dwapar to kali yug

 

will be doing in coming update... 😳


and he is a ghost..haven't you fear him πŸ˜‰  

 

Wonder why havent...πŸ€”


why he is still unhappy, he should have find peace in heave na as per the epic!!

 

Lets explore further cause of his unhappinessπŸ˜‰πŸ˜³


enlighten soon πŸ˜ƒ
 
Sure..πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: panchaali

after you update the third part pm me plzz, and do it soon, waiting for the 3rd part eagerly...

 
A little busy today .. will try..else tomorrow for sure😊..will PM you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: riti4u

 
A little busy today .. will try..else tomorrow for sure😊..will PM you😊


tomorrow looong wait