Aashlok SS - I HATE YOU!!!........ Chapter 7 @ Pg 60 (28/09/2014)

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I HATE YOU!!!

 

 
 
 
 
PROLOGUE
 
 
 
 
... Life... It is simple and beautiful, yet very complicated. Complicated... when it suddenly changes everything and we don't understand the reason, when strange things happen and people hold you responsible for the wrong you never did, when you are forced to take the decisions that were supposed to be right just because the people felt so. Why do we fear the society? Who are they to decide how our life should be? Why are we forced to take decisions based on the consent of the people who would never be with us to face the consequences? Through all that life gave me, I have learnt the most important lesson of life - Never depend too much on anyone, no one cares for you so much to always be with you through the dark times. Even our shadow leaves us when we are in the dark! There's no one ours as such. Sometimes things make me think... Am I really responsible for what happened? Am I the one to be blamed? And then I feel guilty. A fear creeps over me... fear of being responsible for more horrible things... I have lost faith in myself...
 
 
 
Yun thukra diya iss zamaane ne humein,
Har woh khwaab suhaana bhool gaye...
Zindagi ke iss gam mein itne ulajh gaye,
Ki hum aansoo bahaana bhool gaye...
 
 
 
 
 
- Aastha Kirloskar
 
 
 
 
 
 
(Don't worry, the story will be written in English... only few poetic lines will be in hindi)
 
 
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INDEX
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
CHAPTER 7
 
 

 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks dear πŸ˜³
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Unres...

Awesome prologue Neha...very intriguing! Love the way u depicted Astha's emotions. Wonder what happened with her. The poetic lines u wrote in the end are beautiful. Did u write them urself?
Continue Soon! 

Btw I am happy to see this is a SS...till now I think I have only read ur OS's but not a SS or FF. So excited to read this one. You better make this story a lengthy one πŸ˜ˆ 

P.s. Sorry for super late unres πŸ˜”
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Thanks dear πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice start
do continue
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Its awsm...bad past..bleak future..bt then comes our HeroπŸ˜† She hates Shlok?😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
ooo what a fab story!!! Apko continue jaroor karni chaiye!!!! I would love to read it yaar!!!! Sounds really amazing and interesting!!!!! Ill surely read !!!! Love u dear!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
start is interesting do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
I hate you!!!!
Wow that sounds interesting
N loved the prologue as well!!
Hahaha n the hindi words made me panic
Thank god u cleared it in an instance saying the story will be on English lol
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow..interesting continue neha didi. Life is complicated s even I will tell my parents tt my life is sooo complicated and it s very TRUE tht we cant even trust our shadow as it will leave us alone n dark ...oh god this story sounds sooo interesting. ..continue soon.